A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Miles
General Make sure you always use a capital when using the first person I.
Task Assessment Criteria
Feedback AO band
Leaflet AO1 It’s fascinating that you spend more time
analysing leaflets than the photographers who
actually appear in your exhibition. A well
designed leaflet however, the lack of research
makes the content sound naïve and more like
your stream of consciousness than informed
Practical Work and
Well done. You have documented the
exhibitions you visited well. The practical tasks
have also been completed to a confident level.
I like the quality of the ipad images and the
composition of these fleeting shots however,
they are low in contrast and would have
benefitted from more editing. Make sure
research is in your own words.
You haven’t taken any photographs in over 4
AO1 Not started specific to brief. AO1:
Target grade for Practical Response project: C
Please complete the tasks set by Mr Holden on the 1st Oct. Make sure you have entered the ideas he gave
you into the teacher comments tab (AT THE TOP) on your weebly.