A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Daniel
General Slow starts to the year but you are beginning to show signs of catching up and moving your
photography forward. A successful A2 photography student must demonstrate both
independence and drive it is essential that you really start to push yourself to achieve the
grade that you are capable of.
Task Assessment Criteria
Feedback AO band
Leaflet AO1 An incomplete leaflet task, you have clearly
thought about the layout and design of one leaflet
but it would have been good to see some more
observations and the fact you have been to
exhibitions to find them shows a commitment to
Practical Work and
Some really strong images here Daniel the shot of
James looking out of the tent is very strong.
However you must make sure that you are taking
more images and you need to put them all up on
your weebly. The examiner needs to see all your
visual thought processes and they do this by seeing
all your pictures. It is a shame that you didn’t
undertake the second part of the summer brief
that would have involved you created a storey that
you had pre-visualised.
As yet no work so unable to give a mark AO3: NA
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