This document provides feedback on a student's writing and suggestions for improvement. It recommends that the student use capital letters for place names, provide more detailed location descriptions using continents, countries and compass points. It also suggests linking ideas to evidence using connectives like "because" and using a wider range of connective words. The student should give more detailed reasons and information about places studied, like Iceland, and write about how such places can change over time.

1. Feedback 5

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3. I will….
2. Use capital letters for place names such as Portsmouth.
4. Describe the location of places in more detail using the
continent, country and compass points.
6. Link my ideas to evidence by using connectives such as
‘because.’
6. Use a wider range of connective words as well as because.
6. Extend my answers using connective words such as because
to provide more detailed explanations and descriptions about
the places we study.
7. Give more detailed reasons by using words and figures
about Iceland and other places that I study.
14. Write about how places like Iceland can change over time
in response to what we study.

4. 1. Describe where your place is and why it is
amazing.
2. Draw a map of the world from memory
without an atlas or map. Label the
continents.
3. Use the iPads to explore Iceland. Write in
your books information about the country.