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Grammar Nazi
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“Very Nice, quite witty”
“Be more confident with what you are saying”
“Liked the simplicity of the deaths”
“Good comic timing”
“Good pace”
“Could have been delivered quicker”
“Loved it!”
Good use of innuendo”
“Well transposed to stage”
“Didn’t expect the gun”
“Yes, Yes, Yes.”
“Good team performance”
Touching Cloth
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“Good length”
“Brilliant timing”
“Wish I could have seen Alex’s face”
“Alex’s delivery was brilliant”
“Toilet humour, always a winner”
“Playing the situation so straight made it funnier”
“Good delivery”
“Good timing”
“Bounce off each other very well”
“Needed more characterisation”
“Great casting”
“Brilliant pace”
Lipstick
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“Very entertaining”
“Liked the lack of dialogue”
“Good build up”
“Relatable”
“Very funny […] very effective”
“Good characters”
“Brilliant”
“Looks at each other were great”
“Perhaps even bigger with make-up”
“Amazing!!”
“Worked even when the music went off. Made it more
awkward”
From the feedback our group were given, I can
see where our strengths lie and what we need to
improve on:
Strengths:
• I feel as a group we work very
well together and have very
similar ideas.
• This is evident through the
positive feedback we received
for our comic timing.
• Because we are good friends,
we are able to create
characters that work for our
individual acting styles and
personalities.
• The feedback for our scenes
was all together very positive. I
think we work well together to
creat comedy.

To Improve:
• I think there is room to be
larger with our physicality for
even further comic effect.
• More confidence which will
come with more rehearsal.
• Trying to not corpse.
• Be aware of how the audience
will view us on stage to make
sure we are not blocking our
selves, for example: Hair
covering face.
From the feedback our group were given, I can
see where our strengths lie and what we need to
improve on:
Strengths:
• I feel as a group we work very
well together and have very
similar ideas.
• This is evident through the
positive feedback we received
for our comic timing.
• Because we are good friends,
we are able to create
characters that work for our
individual acting styles and
personalities.
• The feedback for our scenes
was all together very positive. I
think we work well together to
creat comedy.

To Improve:
• I think there is room to be
larger with our physicality for
even further comic effect.
• More confidence which will
come with more rehearsal.
• Trying to not corpse.
• Be aware of how the audience
will view us on stage to make
sure we are not blocking our
selves, for example: Hair
covering face.

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Comedy Sketch Feedback

  • 2. Grammar Nazi • • • • • • • • • • • • “Very Nice, quite witty” “Be more confident with what you are saying” “Liked the simplicity of the deaths” “Good comic timing” “Good pace” “Could have been delivered quicker” “Loved it!” Good use of innuendo” “Well transposed to stage” “Didn’t expect the gun” “Yes, Yes, Yes.” “Good team performance”
  • 3. Touching Cloth • • • • • • • • • • • • “Good length” “Brilliant timing” “Wish I could have seen Alex’s face” “Alex’s delivery was brilliant” “Toilet humour, always a winner” “Playing the situation so straight made it funnier” “Good delivery” “Good timing” “Bounce off each other very well” “Needed more characterisation” “Great casting” “Brilliant pace”
  • 4. Lipstick • • • • • • • • • • • “Very entertaining” “Liked the lack of dialogue” “Good build up” “Relatable” “Very funny […] very effective” “Good characters” “Brilliant” “Looks at each other were great” “Perhaps even bigger with make-up” “Amazing!!” “Worked even when the music went off. Made it more awkward”
  • 5. From the feedback our group were given, I can see where our strengths lie and what we need to improve on: Strengths: • I feel as a group we work very well together and have very similar ideas. • This is evident through the positive feedback we received for our comic timing. • Because we are good friends, we are able to create characters that work for our individual acting styles and personalities. • The feedback for our scenes was all together very positive. I think we work well together to creat comedy. To Improve: • I think there is room to be larger with our physicality for even further comic effect. • More confidence which will come with more rehearsal. • Trying to not corpse. • Be aware of how the audience will view us on stage to make sure we are not blocking our selves, for example: Hair covering face.
  • 6. From the feedback our group were given, I can see where our strengths lie and what we need to improve on: Strengths: • I feel as a group we work very well together and have very similar ideas. • This is evident through the positive feedback we received for our comic timing. • Because we are good friends, we are able to create characters that work for our individual acting styles and personalities. • The feedback for our scenes was all together very positive. I think we work well together to creat comedy. To Improve: • I think there is room to be larger with our physicality for even further comic effect. • More confidence which will come with more rehearsal. • Trying to not corpse. • Be aware of how the audience will view us on stage to make sure we are not blocking our selves, for example: Hair covering face.