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WRITING CLEAR AND INTERESTING SLIDES
TODAY’S OBJECTIVE
To give you the tools to write slides that communicate the results of our work in a way that helps clients understand, accept, and use those results
This session will help you through the process of writing slides
From choosing the most appropriate slide type – words, tables, graphics
To writing a slide that is clear and interesting
WHAT PUZZLES YOU OR CHALLENGS YOU THE MOST WHEN WRITING SLIDES?
WRITING CLEAR, SUCCINCT, AND INTERESTING SLIDES
How to use slides in a presentation
How to choose among words, tables, graphics
How to display information on slides effectively
Good slides, bad slides
STRONG GROWTH IN OTHER PRODUCTS OFFSET BY PARTS’ DECLINE Alarm & detection 2,551 18.3 31.9 37.6 958 17.2 Broad diffusion 5,303 38.3 10.9 45.3 2,400 43.1 IR sensors 2,372 17.1 13.8 34.9 827 14.8 Chloride 1,524 11.0 (28.5) 40.9 624 11.2 Bulk chloride 1,270 9.2 (4.0) 50.5 641 11.5 Parts 152 1.1 (36.2) (9.9) (15) (0.3) Design 691 5 (2.9) 20.0 138 2.5 Total 13,863 100 (1.6) 40.2 5,573 100 Product 1991 Sales ($000) Sales % of Total 1987-91 CAGR (Real %) GM (%) GM ($000) GM % of Total Source: Annual Division Budget Messages are buried in the data Example
THE REDESIGN PROCESS INVOLVES FOUR DISCRETE STAGES
Current Organizational Structure
Extensive customer analysis
Customer service and support requirements
Detailed internal diagnostic
Time spent by activity by responsibility
Capacity of the system
Current contact model does not have capacity to serve all customers adequately
Several low value areas consume time
TSE time consumed by activities which could be handled more efficiently by other resources
No sales growth from current model
Lots of opportunity to leverage other resources, like CAS
Most customers receptive to recommendations that allow us to leverage sales force time
Analysis Findings Customer Technical Assistance Technical Assistance Ordering Technical Assistance Technical Assistance ES CAS TSE CSR DM Plant Price Concessions Group Price Concessions Expediting Price Concessions Expediting Ordering ASP selling/implementation ISP selling Quoting/cross-referencing Expediting Technical assistance in person Rotational calls Availability Expediting Price concessions VP and Director, MWS Division VP, National Sales Telemarketing Manager (1) Zone Managers (5) CAS Reps (4) District Managers (30) ESs (46) TSEs (186) TSRs (23) CS Manager (1) VP, National Sales CAS Manager Financial Analyst Team Leader Technical Engineers Remote Technical Engineers Customer Service Reps CAS Reps Quoting Availability Current Contact Model Proposed Contact Model Zone Operations Manager Analysis: Identify opportunities Evaluate Alternatives : Opportunities point to new contact model Business Managers Remote TE TE Team Leader Customer Plant CSR CAS Proposed Organizational Structure CS Managers (10) Telemarketing TSRs (13) CSRs (65) Latrobe Telemarketing (9) ES District Managers (6) Availability Quoting ISP cross-referencing Ordering Price concessions Expediting Too much information? Example CAS Manager (1)
THE 36” LIFTER DOMINATES SALES AND PROFIT 1992 Product Family Profitability 12.0 9.7 8.3 0.85 0.02 36” 14” 12” 96” 10” Discount Rate 4.66% Current Dollar G.I. ($M) 555 19 35 179 91 Revenues ($M) 349 17 19 60 30 Note: Width of bar is proportional to CDGI *Valuation ROI - 3y median CFROI Sources: LRP; HOLT Value Model CFROI (%) Lifter Bore (Volume) Example Is the complexity necessary?
PREMIUM LOW CALORIE SWITCHING OCCURRING WITHIN PREMIUM SEGMENT, NOT NEAR PREMIUM Halt the Leaks to Competitors 1990 & 1991 Most Often Brand Switchers Within Last Three Years Source: Continuous Tracking from Sample of 29,081; Consulting Analysis
91 (68) 23 )
267 (19) 248 )
5 (82) (77)
31 (37) (6)
109 (11) 98 )
412 (149) 263 )
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98 (155) (57)
218 (97) 121 )
0 (21) (21)
316 (273) 43 )
102 (90) 12 )
75 (19) 56 )
26 (33) (7)
312 (45) 267 )
1,866 1,334 (677) 657 )
Starting Base Won + Lost = Competitor B Net
Total Super Prem. 60 (98) (38)
Product 1 198 (56) 142 )
Product 2 6 (52) (46)
Product 3 25 (81) (56)
Other 153 (29) 124 )
Total PFC 382 (218) 164 )
Near Prem.
Product 1 97 (218) (121)
Product 2 79 (224) (145)
Product 3 --- --- --- )
Other 1 (55) (54)
Total PLC 177 (497) (320)
Other Segments
Segment 1 62 (104) (42)
Segment 2 110 (29) 81 )
Segment 3 22 (69) (47)
Segment 4 324 (72) 252 )
Total 2,836 1,137 (1,087) 50 )
Starting Base Won + Lost = Client Net Brand/Segment Raw data only, no analysis presented to support the conclusion (hypothesis) Example
117 (61) 56 )
290 (32) 258 )
7 (50) (43)
30 (37) (7)
92 (11) 81 )
419 (130) 289 )
155 (98) 57 )
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224 (79) 145 )
5 (19) (14)
384 (196) (188)
69 (99) (30)
75 (7) 68 )
34 (31) 3 )
366 (46) 320 )
1,721 1,464 (570) 894 )
Starting Base Won + Lost = Competitor A Net
Good slides are:
Bad slides are:
WHAT DO YOU SEE IN A GOOD OR BAD SLIDES? We will revisit toward the end of the session
WRITING CLEAR, SUCCINCT, AND INTERESTING SLIDES
Good slides, bad slides
How to use slides in a presentation
How to choose among words, tables, graphics
How to display information on slides effectively
SLIDES ARE VISUAL AIDS
Focus the audience’s attention on message
Help explain the message
Provide another means for the audience to process the information
Reinforce the message–aid to memory
Should not compete with the presenter
Presenter is primary means of communicating
difficult to read and listen at the same time
Calls for simple slides - simplicity means clarity in thinking
SLIDES ARE ALSO A RECORD OF THE PRESENTATION
Left behind for clients to read
Creating tension between
The need for a stand-alone explanation and
The need for a simple visual aid
Appropriate compromise depends on the audience and the purpose of the presentation
SEVERAL COMPROMISES ARE POSSIBLE
Prepare report or annotated slide book as leave-behind
Display information more effectively
Choice depends on
Complexity of message
Desired future use of presentation
Usually preferable to keep slides simple and select an alternative option
COMPROMISE MUST BE CONSISTENT WITH AUDIENCE AND PURPOSE
Client Case Team
Business Managers
Board of Directors
High As necessary Low 2-4 hrs. 1-2 hrs. 20-30 min. Participative discussion Question and answer Formal presenting Type of Audience Level of Detail Length of Presentation Presentation Style Source Source: Consulting Experience
WRITING CLEAR, SUCCINCT, AND INTERESTING SLIDES
Good slides, bad slides
How to use slides in a presentation
How to choose among words, tables, graphics
How to display information on slides effectively
Graphics
Tables
Word slides
Combinations of the above
FOUR WAYS TO PRESENT INFORMATION
BASIC GUIDELINES HELP YOU SELECT FORMATS
Do I need to illustrate a reasonably simple relationship ?
Use a table or a graphic
Especially when showing numerical data
Do I need to illustrate a complex relationship ?
Use a table
Do I have something other than a relationship ?
Use a word slide or a conceptual graphic
BUT THE FINAL SELECTION DEPENDS ON THE MESSAGE YOU WANT YOUR AUDIENCE TO TAKE AWAY
Use graphics if you want audience to
Remember relative trends
Picture the flow
Use tables when you want the audience to know or be able to refer to
Specific numbers
Methodology to calculate numbers
Use word slides if you want audience to understand
Specific logic flow
Recommendations
GRAPHICS HELP THE AUDIENCE VISUALIZE THE POINTS
Help audience identify important points quickly
Best suited to display relationships, both quantitative and qualitative
Where relationship is too complex for words
not too simple
nor too complex–multiple relationships can be obscured by graphic
Where visual impact will help convey message
Graphic format should be considered first; if a graph is not optimal, then consider words or a table
Steady growth of banking assets Lending balance keeps stable CHINA COMMERCIAL BANKING SECTOR IS LARGE WITH STEADY GROWTH 829 997 1,068 1,067 CAGR(97-99): 10% YoY: 0% Banking (1) asset at the end of the period (2) (USD BN) Lending outstanding balance at the end of the period (3) (USD BN)
Excluding post office finance, urban and rural credit cooperatives
2000 is an estimate, assuming ICBC, CCB and BOC accounting for 60% of the banking sector asset
2000 is an estimate, assuming the 4 major banks accounting for 72% of the banking sector loan outstanding balance
Source: China Financial Almanac; IMD; Lit. search; BCG analysis
Example 1,491 1,521 1,678 1,893 CAGR(97-00): 7.9%
MARKET PROJECTION PRIMARILY BASED ON COUNTRY STATISTICS AND CONSUMER RESEARCH Projection Methodology China market potential Parameters Drivers Source Volume Growth Revenue # of babies % on BF Average consumption Average price by product type Weighted volume X X X Future trend of parameters
Birth rate
Population
Geography
Income
Age of baby
Usage behavior
Product by stage
Manufacturer ownership
Package type
Share
Birth growth rate
BF usage trend
Price trend
Consumer research
Cross-country comparison
Statistics Bureau
Competitive analysis
Store checks
Trade interviews
Statistics Bureau
Consumer research
Desk research
ERC report
Competitive interviews
Example
WHAT DO YOU WANT TO SAY? Column Pie Line Stacked Column Map Bubble Relationship Multiple Pie Area Bar Spider Scatter Changes over time Parts of a whole Comparison of several items or places Relationships between variables Descriptive Explanatory Simple information Complex information When to use what?
SOME BASIC RULES FOR DESCRIPTIVE GRAPHICS For Time Series, Use a Column or Line Chart
Western cultures read time as moving from left to right
Common convention
Use a column or stacked column chart if
Fewer than ten or so time periods
Data is accumulated in discrete occurrences
e.g., periods of production
Use a line or area chart if
More than ten or so data points/periods
Data is continuous or cumulative
e.g., number of stores, stock prices by days
Trends (i.e., slopes) are the point you want to make
GROWTH IN TRADE FINANCE SLOWED AND WILL REMAIN SLUGGISH Trade finance expected to decline 10% in 1998 Total trade finance (US$B) 15% 27% 16% 9%
Slow-down in external trade has contributed to the decline
Expected trade set back in the near future will further make trade finance decline
Source: HK banking industry; Paribas Asia Securities; HK Monetary Authority CAGR 92-97 14% 4% -10% Trade volume growth 13% 24% 17% 3% 2% -5% Example
SOME BASIC RULES FOR DESCRIPTIVE GRAPHICS For Item Comparisons or Comparison of Parts of a Whole, Use a Bar Chart or a Stacked Column Chart
Use a bar chart for
Market research survey responses
Competitor comparisons
reserves column charts for time series comparisons
leaves room for long labels on the left axis
Use a stacked column chart for
Cost structures or cost structure comparisons
Regional market share comparisons
Changes or differences in mix across time or competitors
MOTHERS WILLING TO BREASTFEED BUT WOULD USE INFANT FORMULAE AS A SUPPLEMENT Supplement baby food Baby food better for baby “ Cannot” breastfeed (not enough milk) Do not have time to breastfeed (e.g. work reasons) Others (1) (1) Typical other reason: baby likes it Source: Survey results; BCG analysis Why do you choose baby formulae? Example Total 0-6 month 6-12 month 1-3 year
FOREIGN PLAYERS ALREADY HAS A STRONG FOOT INTO FOREIGN CURRENCY BUSINESS Share of foreign currency loans (As at the end of 1999) 4 major state-owned banks Other local banks Foreign banks Example
SOME BASIC RULES FOR DESCRIPTIVE GRAPHICS For Complex Spatial and Temporal Comparisons, a Range of Mapping Techniques Are Available
Use territory map for
Market attractiveness
Competitor penetration
Use a process or time map for
Efficiency measures
Time lines
Process flows
SOME BASIC RULES FOR EXPLANATORY GRAPHICS For Regressions and Causal Relationships
Use an XY scatter chart for
Point regressions
do not show regression line if slide is for exploratory purposes
but include it if you are sure of the point you want to make
Use a bubble chart for regressions where
A third dimension is required
e.g., assets or sales
bubble size should always refer to size-related variable (e.g., assets, but not profitability)
AFFLUENT IS AN ATTRACTIVE SEGMENT, GENERATING HIGHEST CONTRIBUTION PER CUSTOMER Segment breakdown of contribution per customer Upper 150 Affluent 40 50000 7000 Annual contribution per customer (US $) -2500 Size of market (m) (No. of customers) -5 15 Mass 80 2500 Source: Press literature, AC Nielson, Business-On-Line, Ministry of Commerce, BCG case experience and analysis Example = Total contribution (B)
SOME BASIC RULES FOR EXPLANATORY GRAPHICS For “Novel” Comparisons
Use a spider chart for
Gap analysis along multiple dimensions simultaneously
perceptions vs. reality
client vs. competitors
Use “novel” graphics where an unusual point needs to be made
Difficult to devise
But sometimes nothing else works
?
TABLES ARE ALSO USED TO DISPLAY QUANTITATIVE AND QUALITATIVE DATA
Use a table when
You have too many relationships for a graph
You want to make your calculations overt
You want to emphasize individual values
either words–types of distributors
or numbers
Do not use tables for most other applications
Tend to be cluttered and difficult to read, obscuring the message
Tend to use it as backup or appendix
WORD SLIDES HAVE SEVERAL USES
To lead audience through logic flow
Not used for proof, except for interview quotes
To summarize findings, recommendations
To present qualitative information
Most concepts can be effectively presented in words
To present very simplistic data
But don’t bury numbers in slide–difficult for audience to grasp the meaning
Presents the message both visually and verbally
Usually best with simple data or conceptual graphic
However, make sure the slides do not become too confusing
COMBINING FORMATS CAN MAKE MESSAGE STRONGER
CUSTOMER INTERACTION FAR FROM IDEAL % of Calls Handled Transferred Referred 35% of all customer service calls are transferred or referred
“ I’ve been back and forth, back and forth (between Billing and Customer Service) about six times.”
Customer of Granada Hills Customer Service when asked if he would like to be transferred to Billing
“ I’ve finally spoken with someone with some intelligence—after about six conversations.”
Irate customer of Granada Hills Customer Service
“ It would be so much easier if we could just look at the bill.”
Customer Service rep to Billing rep when calling to get information for customer
Customers are frustrated by process Sources: Call Monitoring (Granada Hills, Ohio, Louisville, Indiana, Garland); Consulting Analysis 65 25 10 Example
FOLLOWING EXAMPLES PRESENT SAME DATA IN DIFFERENT FORMATS
Quantitative data
Sales and profit over time
Comparison of features for products in market
Two options for technical specialist deployment
Qualitative data
Flow of presentation
Segmentation
Sales have grown by 11% per annum since 1989
Company X sold $60 million in 1989
Sales expected to be $90 million in 1993
Profits have grown more rapidly at 17% per annum
Company X had profits of $16 million in 1989
Profits expected to be $20 million in 1993
PROFITS GROWING FASTER THAN SALES - 1 Exercise 1 Source: Abco Data
FOCUSING ON SMALL CUSTOMERS WILL PROVIDE THE MAXIMUM LEVERAGE - 1
A technical specialist spends more time with large customers
An average of 8 hours in person per call for large customers, versus . . .
15 minutes on phone per call for small customers
Consequently, a single specialist can cover more small customers
Can only serve one large customer per day
Can serve 8 small customers per day
Exercise 2 Source: Phone Co.
FOCUSING ON SMALL CUSTOMERS WILL PROVIDE THE MAXIMUM LEVERAGE - 2 Exercise On-site Time with Large Customer Number of customers served in one day On-phone Time with Small Customer
8 hrs.
1
15 min.
32
Source: Phone Co. Time spent per service call
FOCUSING ON SMALL CUSTOMERS WILL PROVIDE THE MAXIMUM LEVERAGE - 3 Time Spent per Service Call Possible Calls per Day 8 hrs. 15 min. 1 32 Exercise 2 Source: Phone Company
AGENDA
Order taking
Customer conversation
Order entry into system
Manufacturing
Scheduling
Production
Distribution
Packaging
Shipment
Exercise 3
AGENDA
Customer conversation
Order entry into system
Exercise 3
Scheduling
Production
Packaging
Shipment
Distribution Manufacturing Order Taking
TO DISPLAY INFORMATION EFFECTIVELY, YOU NEED TO
Focus on your audience and what they need/want to know
Start with their concerns
Tell their story, not your story
Focus on key concepts and characters
From audience’s perspective
To make text more coherent
To provide context for the audience
Organize slides around the audience and the important concepts, characters
THE SLIDE—THE BASIC BUILDING BLOCK
BODY Support for main point
Words • Schematic
Table • Graph(s)
TITLE TAKEAWAY, OR TRANSITION TO NEXT SLIDE May be oral Main point of the slide Notes, Source
HOW TO MAKE SLIDES USER FRIENDLY
Title
Context at beginning
New information at end
Body
Consistent subjects for main points
the concepts and characters
Simple grammatical structure and parallel style
THE TRANSITION RELATES THIS SLIDE TO THE NEXT ONE
Keeps the story going
Summarizes the slide, reiterates the main point, or draws out implications
Can be written or oral
The slide's exclamation point
THIS IS WHERE THE TITLE (ALL CAPS) IS POSITIONED The subtitle follows with only an initial cap
The body of a word slide follows an outline format, beginning with main points which start with a capital letter
The second level is called a bullet point; it also begins with a capital letter
the third level is called a dash point; it begins with a lowercase letter
the fourth letter is a dot point (no cap); it is best to avoid these
No end punctuation follows any of these points
RECOMMENDED FORMAT FOR TABLES AND BOXES Type of assignment Corporate strategy Marketing strategy development Client Major German brewer Major U.S. brewer Scottish brewer Various Major European brewer Australian wine & spirits company Major U.S. brewer Goal of the study Strategic alliances in Europe Acquisition strategy Strategy development Acquisitions in brewing and soft drinks in Spain European brand Brand extension strategies Brand positioning Backup
THIS IS THE FORMAT FOR TABLES Chain Segment
Off-premise
Supermarket
C-store
Drug
Gas
Liquor/Other
On-premise
Total
Market Growth 4.8 6.2 2.0 7.0 5.6 6.0 2.0 4.6 Share Gain 6.9 7.1 2.0 0.1 27.7 10.7 24.5 7.1 1989-90 CAGR Total (%) 11.7 13.3 4.0 7.1 33.3 16.7 26.5 11.7 % Due to Sales Efforts Driving Growth Source: Market Research Backup
RECOMMENDED GRAPH FORMAT 100 75 50 25 0 1980 1981 1982 1983 1984 Scale in 12 point Y label centered in 12 point Graph heading 16 point, capital letter for first word Legend in 12/14 with box* *Optional Source: Text inside graph flexible (12 or 14 if possible) X label in 12 point (14x9) Backup
USE THESE QUESTIONS TO REVIEW YOUR SLIDES
How does this slide contribute to the story?
How does it help the audience to address their needs?
Does management want/need to know what's on this slide? Everything on the slide?
Is the point of this slide clear? Is it clearly laid out in the title?
Is the title closely connected to the body of the slide?
Is the body of the slide easy to read? Is it parallel? Does it contain any unneeded material?
This will lead to the Pyramid Thinking / Logic in our next session
RECAP: WHAT DO YOU SEE ON A GOOD SLIDE
Logical and interesting storyline
Simple, to the point (no more than 6 key points on one slide)
Catch your eye
Key message stands out
Conclusion always supported by (appropriate) data and analysis
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