Ban boring sentences!
There are a few ways to stop your sentences putting everyone to sleep.
<ul><li>Add words in.   </li></ul>The mouse ate cheese. The  greedy   mouse  quickly  ate the  hard  cheese.
<ul><li>Let’s look at another.   </li></ul>The man got in the car. The  serious  man  carefully  got   in the  sporty  car.
<ul><li>You could also change words!   </li></ul>The man got in the car. The  gentleman   climbed  into the  Ferrari .
<ul><li>Let’s try one more.   </li></ul>The monkey ate some fruit. King Kong   gobbled   plenty of   bananas.
So to improve your sentences you need to… <ul><li>Add new words. </li></ul><ul><li>Change some of the words. </li></ul>Go ...
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Ban boring sentences

  1. 1. Ban boring sentences!
  2. 2. There are a few ways to stop your sentences putting everyone to sleep.
  3. 3. <ul><li>Add words in. </li></ul>The mouse ate cheese. The greedy mouse quickly ate the hard cheese.
  4. 4. <ul><li>Let’s look at another. </li></ul>The man got in the car. The serious man carefully got in the sporty car.
  5. 5. <ul><li>You could also change words! </li></ul>The man got in the car. The gentleman climbed into the Ferrari .
  6. 6. <ul><li>Let’s try one more. </li></ul>The monkey ate some fruit. King Kong gobbled plenty of bananas.
  7. 7. So to improve your sentences you need to… <ul><li>Add new words. </li></ul><ul><li>Change some of the words. </li></ul>Go on give it a try, I bet you CAN do it!

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