Jennifer Evans
Assistant Director ELA
St.Clair County RESA
Evans.jennifer@sccresa.org
http://www.protopage.com/evans.jenni...
70% of all
students in
grades 4-12
are low
achieving
writers.

9th grade
students in
the lowest
25% of their
class are
twe...
“Assigning writing
is easy. Teaching
writing is really
hard.”

“We need to teach our
students to read like
writers and wri...
The most effective strategy to improve writing…

Increase the amount
and quality of writing.
It is a carefully sequenced, coherent K-12 writing
curriculum that follows a Writing Workshop format
designed to:
span the...
Increase writing
proficiency for life
endeavors

Increase test scores

Create a unified
writing program K-12

Coordinate a...
Only teach what
writers do.

Writing is telling
what you see
and what you
think about it. It
is both external
and internal...
Skill

Genre

Author
Study
Mini-Lesson
(10-15 min.)

Sharing
( 5-10 min.)

Independent
Practice with
Conferring
(30-40 min.)
How Often
• Everyday
• Everyday
• Everyday

How Long
• KDG – 45
minutes
• 1st Grade –
45 minutes
extending
to 60
minutes

...
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Grades 1-5
K staple small unit booklets for their
notebook
Specific directions for grades 2-5 in WriteWell
Writ...


Three…
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◦
◦


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

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Times you laughed really hard
Times you were in physical pain
Memorable Moments
Topics that i...


Play the contrast game. Write five minutes on
one side and then five minutes on the other
side:
I want…

I don’t want…
...
6 + 1 Writing Traits




One Day in the Life of Bubble Gum
The Secret Knowledge of Grown-ups
Nothing Ever Happens on 90...


Ba-Da-Bing – Gretchen Bernabei

Ba

Da

Bing

Example: As I stepped onto the red carpet of

the darkened room, I notice...
30-40 Minutes

Students work independently while the teacher
meets with small groups or individual students
• Conferring T...
Research

Decide

Compliment

Teach

•Ask “What are
you working on
as a writer?”
•Have the
student read
aloud his/her
work...
What to look for when deciding what to confer
about…
•

Structure

•

Meaningful

•
•

– Focused
– Beginning, middle, end
...
Commentary With One-on-One
Reading/Writing Conference
http://www.scholastic.com/teachers/topteaching/2011/04/reading-and-w...
5-10 Minutes
 Notice
 Question
 Personal Connection
 Compliment and Suggestion (glow & grow)

Small
Group
Partner

Who...
◦ Teaching Kids About Revising (Writing Workshop
Lesson)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBKqgOv
mJ8w
Aligned to CCSS

Weekly concepts
taught
approximately five
minutes a day

Follows Jeff
Anderson’s format

PowerPoint to ma...
Moved below the line for those who would still like to use it
Test Prep Units of Study embedded in units
(starting in grad...
Same Assessment to
be given at the
beginning of the year
and the end of the year

See Sample

Use to show
growth
Immerse in the
genre

Identify
distinguishing
features of the
genre

Choose an idea to
write about

Choose a mentor
text t...


http://sccresa.org/toolsforschools/curri
culumtools/writewell/introductiontowrit
ewell/writewell3rdgrade/
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Note...


Video Library
◦ All grade levels
◦ Various lessons

Kindergarten
2nd grade
10th grade


WriteWell©
◦ http://www.sccresa.org/toolsforschools/curriculum
tools/writewell/
◦ Select logo
◦ Enter school log in and...
www.sccresa.org
Log In and Select Your Grade

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  • Research presented April 12, 2011 – Kelly Gallagher workshop session on writing @ Macomb ISD
  • Assign and assess writing does not teach students the knowledge and skills needed to become better writersWriteWell is designed around the format of Writer’s Workshop where teachers teach students minilessons as well as teach them to read like writers and write like readers.
  • Model/coach students to elevate their writingRead lots of mentor texts in the genre – have them look at the text with the thought “What did the writer do that I could do?”Turn & talk about the “how” Show them by writing in front of students – write in front of the class and think aloud during the process, modeling about 5-7 minutes at a timeWriteWell is about quality vs. quantity
  • Discuss alignment process this summer to match CCSSIt is an online product that is revised and improved as needed throughout the year and more extensively each summer, relying on classroom teachers to make the revisions
  • Structure similar to 90-minute reading block – whole group, small group, independent work
  • “seed ideas” 20 best moments20 worst momentsKelly Gallaghar’s suggestion for persuasive writing ideas: matrix chart – school issues, local issues, state issues, national issues, global issues (take one class period and give students stacks of newspapers and magazines --- have them generate a list of ideas on the matrix
  • “seed ideas” 20 best moments20 worst momentsKelly Gallaghar’s suggestion for persuasive writing ideas: matrix chart – school issues, local issues, state issues, national issues, global issues (take one class period and give students stacks of newspapers and magazines --- have them generate a list of ideas on the matrix
  • Draw an outline of a body in notebook or use the template provided and glue it into the notebooks.
  • Example of a “to” or “I go”Draw the Ba-Da-Bing graphics in the CRAFT section of the writer’s notebookShare my exampleAsk: What do you notice?
  • Share “Conferring Talking Points” handout
  • Show an example of a finished PowerPoint after this slide
  • Provide Introduction to Language Minilessons handout with this slide
  • Provide handout of pre/post assessments for each grade level with this slide.
  • Note – WriteWell does not dictate topic, but does dictate genre – students are more willing to write when they have choice – they can write what they know about, care about, and can tell stories aboutUnits of study related to the genre of test prep – is its own genre with rules
  • Participants spend some time online exploring the units for their grade level
  • Writer’s workshop crull

    1. 1. Jennifer Evans Assistant Director ELA St.Clair County RESA Evans.jennifer@sccresa.org http://www.protopage.com/evans.jennifer#Untitled/Home
    2. 2. 70% of all students in grades 4-12 are low achieving writers. 9th grade students in the lowest 25% of their class are twenty times more likely to drop out. 50% of high school graduates are not ready for college level composition courses.
    3. 3. “Assigning writing is easy. Teaching writing is really hard.” “We need to teach our students to read like writers and write like readers.” Kelly Gallagher, Author and Teacher http://www.kellygallagher.org/index.html
    4. 4. The most effective strategy to improve writing… Increase the amount and quality of writing.
    5. 5. It is a carefully sequenced, coherent K-12 writing curriculum that follows a Writing Workshop format designed to: span the grade levels meet the needs of all students increase writing proficiency at every grade use effective, researched based instructional practices
    6. 6. Increase writing proficiency for life endeavors Increase test scores Create a unified writing program K-12 Coordinate and refine writing instruction Increase use of research-based instructional practices during writing instruction
    7. 7. Only teach what writers do. Writing is telling what you see and what you think about it. It is both external and internal. Teach the writer not the piece of writing. We learn about writing through describing writing not by having someone prescribing writing.
    8. 8. Skill Genre Author Study
    9. 9. Mini-Lesson (10-15 min.) Sharing ( 5-10 min.) Independent Practice with Conferring (30-40 min.)
    10. 10. How Often • Everyday • Everyday • Everyday How Long • KDG – 45 minutes • 1st Grade – 45 minutes extending to 60 minutes • 2nd – 12th Grades – 60 minutes When Management Why • Beginning the first day of school • Same format used everyday • Consistency • Consistency • Consistency • A single block of time at the same time everyday • Same rules and procedures used everyday • Keep it simple
    11. 11.     Grades 1-5 K staple small unit booklets for their notebook Specific directions for grades 2-5 in WriteWell Write everyday
    12. 12.  Three… ◦ ◦ ◦ ◦     Times you laughed really hard Times you were in physical pain Memorable Moments Topics that interest you Circle the one that you could tell the best story about Tell your story to a partner Write your story in the writing section of your notebook Share
    13. 13.  Play the contrast game. Write five minutes on one side and then five minutes on the other side: I want… I don’t want… I remember… I don’t remember… I do… I don’t… Last summer… This summer… Last Saturday… Next Saturday… A scary place… A safe place…
    14. 14. 6 + 1 Writing Traits    One Day in the Life of Bubble Gum The Secret Knowledge of Grown-ups Nothing Ever Happens on 90th Street
    15. 15.  Ba-Da-Bing – Gretchen Bernabei Ba Da Bing Example: As I stepped onto the red carpet of the darkened room, I noticed a wall lined with lit candles and an old woman hunched in the far corner at a round table and I thought maybe now I’ll get some answers.
    16. 16. 30-40 Minutes Students work independently while the teacher meets with small groups or individual students • Conferring Talking Cards Possible mid-workshop teaching point • Occur naturally when the teacher notices something that needs clarification or further explanation to help students as they write
    17. 17. Research Decide Compliment Teach •Ask “What are you working on as a writer?” •Have the student read aloud his/her work • Synthesize what is learned • Decide what to compliment: “What has this child done that I can name and make a fuss over?” • Decide what to teach: “What does this child use but misuse? or “What is nearly there in his or her writing that I can help them with right now?” •Point out writing strategies the child used well •Say “I like how you…”(give specific example) •Teach only one thing •Teach to the compliment •Teach to today’s teaching point •Negotiate a strategy When choosing your teaching point think: Of all the options I have, what can I teach that will make the biggest difference for this writer?
    18. 18. What to look for when deciding what to confer about… • Structure • Meaningful • • – Focused – Beginning, middle, end – Moves across time or space – Writer cares about it – Reader learns from it Narrative strategies Conventions that enhance – – – – – All caps – WOW Bold – Wow End marks – Wow!!! Italics – Wow! Stacked Words - One! Two! Three!
    19. 19. Commentary With One-on-One Reading/Writing Conference http://www.scholastic.com/teachers/topteaching/2011/04/reading-and-writingworkshop-virtual-tours-each-component  
    20. 20. 5-10 Minutes  Notice  Question  Personal Connection  Compliment and Suggestion (glow & grow) Small Group Partner Whole Group
    21. 21. ◦ Teaching Kids About Revising (Writing Workshop Lesson)  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBKqgOv mJ8w
    22. 22. Aligned to CCSS Weekly concepts taught approximately five minutes a day Follows Jeff Anderson’s format PowerPoint to match each weekly lesson
    23. 23. Moved below the line for those who would still like to use it Test Prep Units of Study embedded in units (starting in grade 2) Generate many seed ideas in writer’s notebook “What Should I Write About?” section Target! Aim! Score! (beginning, middle, end) CD with Student Writing & MEAP Released Anchor Papers: http://tinyurl.com/cvraun
    24. 24. Same Assessment to be given at the beginning of the year and the end of the year See Sample Use to show growth
    25. 25. Immerse in the genre Identify distinguishing features of the genre Choose an idea to write about Choose a mentor text to help you write Plan your draft Draft long and fast Revise Edit Publish/Celebrate
    26. 26.  http://sccresa.org/toolsforschools/curri culumtools/writewell/introductiontowrit ewell/writewell3rdgrade/ ◦ ◦ ◦ ◦ Notebooking Explanatory Unit Grammar Units Assessments
    27. 27.  Video Library ◦ All grade levels ◦ Various lessons Kindergarten 2nd grade 10th grade
    28. 28.  WriteWell© ◦ http://www.sccresa.org/toolsforschools/curriculum tools/writewell/ ◦ Select logo ◦ Enter school log in and password: Temporary Log in: Temporary Password:
    29. 29. www.sccresa.org
    30. 30. Log In and Select Your Grade Review the Table of Contents Skim & Scan the Units
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