1. Comments On The Product Improvements
“I love the layout of the magazine, its very easy
to see where everything is and that’s needed
when reading a magazine”
“Bring in the text from the sides and space it so it
doesn’t look cramped together”
“The colours stand out really well; they’re eye
catching and fit in with the theme well. You can
tell its based on the indie genre”
“Darken the text on the double page spread so it
becomes more readable”
“Having the name ‘INDEX’ represents the genre
of indie well, I could clearly tell what magazine I
was picking up”
“Change the X so its different to the title font”
“ ‘WIN VIP TICKETS TO V-FEST’ draws the reader
in because it appeals to the age group of indie
listeners”
“Add a picture or logo to where the competition
is to make it recognisable”
“The price of the magazine makes more
appealing because people don’t want to pay to
much for something they may only read once”
“Put price next to the barcode where people will
associate with the price”
“An artist on the front cover draws the attention
of the reader because they are able to recognise
who the artist in making them want to read
more”
“Make sure the artists face isn’t covered by any
cover lines”
“The ‘2014 PREVEIW’ address the audience
because they feel special that they are reading
the magazine because its limited”
“Make this cover line bigger which will be in the
eye line of the reader when they pick the
magazine up”