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201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
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201310 springer colombia javiarana
201310 springer colombia javiarana
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  • 46. Edanz survey results – Primary difficulty during manuscript preparation &'v':::'IB6G$2C")'#%#R#/,1"'(#<G$2C'/B*C%&2' EC%%2$#<'/' @%B&#/G' (^I&"22$#<'*C%B<C*2' .G"/&GM'$#'(#<G$2C' 0#)"&2*/#)$#<'*C"' /B*C%&'<B$)"G$#"2' X%&>/w#<'/..%&)$#<' *%'*C"'<B$)"G$#"2' CCr$ gl$ gG$ mG$ GiDJ^$ FGDg^$ FCDl^$ CrDl^$ X&)$3/0&1")$<"("($4;P2/:034")$9313$":">;1$:3)$ 1"A;)03)$6$2&591"(4"1$:3)$4;1"201;2")$4"$:3)$$1"A;)03)$
  • 47. [',.-5$!+#$#0C'-! Section 1
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  • 49. 3%B&#/G'2"G".,%#' Choosing a target journal ^'-#+758#-7#!#B5$,#!$5!&86'.75-0&5!! :#!+,!&-B#+C(50&@-! 8;>(;P23(2"$ .;5)$3(4$82&9"$ =59320$
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  • 84. +""&'c"1$"D' Writing a response letter H/&.'K$II>/#P'HN' ()$*%&R$#REC$"L' >4.,8-'1,&#.4'?.8.,4#:',&7'@4.,-!.&-' :'!"I*">6"&'789:' N"/&'N&'K$II>/#P' c"k'c"2B6>$22$%#'%L'>/#B2.&$I*'&"L"&"#."'U%='V3!R8WRQW:g' +G"/2"'-#)'/d/.C")'/'&"1$2")'1"&2$%#'%L'%B&'>/#B2.&$I*'%&$<$#/GGM'"#,*G")'m(1/GB/,%#'%L'*C"'G/2<%D'I&%<#%2,.' 2.%&"'$#'I/,"#*2'B#)"&<%$#<'.B&/,1"'&"2".,%#'L%&'6&"/2*'./#."&'G$1"&'>"*/2*/2"2Pn'DC$.C'D"'D%BG)'G$O"'*%'&"2B6>$*' L%&'.%#2$)"&/,%#'L%&'IB6G$./,%#'$#'*C"'>4.,8-'1,&#.4'?.8.,4#:',&7'@4.,-!.&-9' JC"'&"1$"D"&z2'.%>>"#*2'D"&"'C$<CGM'$#2$<C{BG'/#)'"#/6G")'B2'*%'<&"/*GM'$>I&%1"'*C"'aB/G$*M'%L'%B&'>/#B2.&$I*='[#' *C"'L%GG%D$#<'I/<"2'/&"'%B&'I%$#*R6MRI%$#*'&"2I%#2"2'*%'"/.C'%L'*C"'.%>>"#*2=' c"1$2$%#2'$#'*C"'>/#B2.&$I*'/&"'2C%D#'/2'B#)"&G$#")'*"^*='[#'/..%&)/#."'D$*C'*C"'-&2*'.%>>"#*P'*C"',*G"'C/2'6""#' &"1$2")'/#)'*C"'"#,&"'>/#B2.&$I*'C/2'B#)"&<%#"'2B62*/#,/G'(#<G$2C'")$,#<='' V"'C%I"'*C/*'*C"'&"1$2$%#2'$#'*C"'>/#B2.&$I*'/#)'%B&'/..%>I/#M$#<'&"2I%#2"2'D$GG'6"'2BF.$"#*'*%'>/O"'%B&' >/#B2.&$I*'2B$*/6G"'L%&'IB6G$./,%#'$#'*C"'>4.,8-'1,&#.4'?.8.,4#:',&7'@4.,-!.&-=' .441"))$"4;0&1$9"1)&(3::6$ E3(/)21;90$=-$(/5'"1$ H,3(Z$1"A;"L"1)$ Q;>,:;>,0$53I&1$2,3(>")$
  • 85. +""&'c"1$"D' Agreeing with reviewers Q#B&#O#.!"'88#-7e!5&'"3;4',&,$"8%8'3A'-:.'7,-,'"3;':,2.'#:38.&' -3' ;8.' ,' 83!.B:,-' 3C8#;4.' DE&F' A;&#63&' G4.F4.88%3&H9' ' 5&' !"' 3I%&%3&J','8%!I$.'K,;88%,&'A;&#63&'B3;$7':,2.'8;L#.79'M34.32.4J' -:.' 4.8;$-8' B3;$7' C.' !34.' %&8-4;#62.' ,&7' .,8%.4' -3' #3!I,4.' -3' I4.2%3;8'4.8;$-89' %")9&()"7' V"' /<&""' D$*C' *C"' &"1$"D"&z2' /22"22>"#*' %L' *C"' /#/GM2$2='5B&'*/$G%&")'LB#.,%#P'$#'$*2'.B&&"#*'L%&>P'>/O"2'$*')$F.BG*' *%' *"GG' *C/*' *C$2' >"/2B&">"#*' .%#2,*B*"2' /' 2$<#$-./#*' $>I&%1">"#*' %1"&' I&"1$%B2GM' &"I%&*")' 1/GB"2=' V"' )"2.&$6"' %B&' #"D'/#/GM2$2'B2$#<'/'/B22$/#'-w#<'LB#.,%#'$#'%B&'&"1$2")'c"2BG*2' 2".,%#'Y+/<"'SP'K$#"2'97q9oZ='
  • 86. +""&'c"1$"D' Q#B&#O#.!"'88#-7e!5&'"3;4',&,$"8%8'3A'-:.'7,-,'"3;':,2.'#:38.&' -3' ;8.' ,' 83!.B:,-' 3C8#;4.' DE&F' A;&#63&' G4.F4.88%3&H9' ' 5&' !"' 3I%&%3&J','8%!I$.'K,;88%,&'A;&#63&'B3;$7':,2.'8;L#.79'M34.32.4J' -:.' 4.8;$-8' B3;$7' C.' !34.' %&8-4;#62.' ,&7' .,8%.4' -3' #3!I,4.' -3' I4.2%3;8'4.8;$-89' %")9&()"7' V"' /<&""' D$*C' *C"' &"1$"D"&z2' /22"22>"#*' %L' *C"' /#/GM2$2='5B&'*/$G%&")'LB#.,%#P'$#'$*2'.B&&"#*'L%&>P'>/O"2'$*')$F.BG*' *%' *"GG' *C/*' *C$2' >"/2B&">"#*' .%#2,*B*"2' /' 2$<#$-./#*' $>I&%1">"#*' %1"&' I&"1$%B2GM' &"I%&*")' 1/GB"2=' V"' )"2.&$6"' %B&' #"D'/#/GM2$2'B2$#<'/'/B22$/#'-w#<'LB#.,%#'$#'%B&'&"1$2")'c"2BG*2' 2".,%#'Y+/<"'SP'K$#"2'97q9oZ=' Agreeing with reviewers .>1""5"(0$ %"A;);&()$ X&23<&($
  • 87. +""&'c"1$"D' Disagreeing with reviewers Q#B&#O#.!"'88#-7e!5&'"3;4',&,$"8%8'3A'-:.'7,-,'"3;':,2.'#:38.&' -3' ;8.' ,' 83!.B:,-' 3C8#;4.' DE&F' A;&#63&' G4.F4.88%3&H9' ' 5&' !"' 3I%&%3&J' ,' 8%!I$.' K,;88%,&' A;&#63&' B3;$7' :,2.' 8;L#.79' M34.32.4J' -:.' 4.8;$-8' B3;$7' C.' !34.' %&8-4;#62.' ,&7' .,8%.4' -3' #3!I,4.'-3'I4.2%3;8'4.8;$-89' %")9&()"7' AG*C%B<C' /' 2$>IG"' /B22$/#' -*' D%BG)' L/.$G$*/*"' .%>I/&$2%#'D$*C'*C"'&"2BG*2'%L'%*C"&'2*B)$"2P'%B&'*/$G%&")'LB#.,%#' /GG%D2' L%&' *C"' /#/GM2$2' %L' *C"' )/*/' $#' *"&>2' %L' *C"' !>$*C' >%)"G' x!>$*C' "*' /G=P' 9ggoy=' V"' C/1"' #%D' "^IG/$#")' *C"' B2"' %L' *C$2' LB#.,%#' /#)' *C"' !>$*C' >%)"G' $#' %B&' &"1$2")' N$2.B22$%#' 2".,%#' Y+/<"'97P'K$#"2'7qSZ='
  • 88. +""&'c"1$"D' Q#B&#O#.!"'88#-7e!5&'"3;4',&,$"8%8'3A'-:.'7,-,'"3;':,2.'#:38.&' -3' ;8.' ,' 83!.B:,-' 3C8#;4.' DE&F' A;&#63&' G4.F4.88%3&H9' ' 5&' !"' 3I%&%3&J' ,' 8%!I$.' K,;88%,&' A;&#63&' B3;$7' :,2.' 8;L#.79' M34.32.4J' -:.' 4.8;$-8' B3;$7' C.' !34.' %&8-4;#62.' ,&7' .,8%.4' -3' #3!I,4.'-3'I4.2%3;8'4.8;$-89' %")9&()"7' AG*C%B<C' /' 2$>IG"' /B22$/#' -*' D%BG)' L/.$G$*/*"' .%>I/&$2%#'D$*C'*C"'&"2BG*2'%L'%*C"&'2*B)$"2P'%B&'*/$G%&")'LB#.,%#' /GG%D2' L%&' *C"' /#/GM2$2' %L' *C"' )/*/' $#' *"&>2' %L' *C"' !>$*C' >%)"G' x!>$*C' "*' /G=P' 9ggoy=' V"' C/1"' #%D' "^IG/$#")' *C"' B2"' %L' *C$2' LB#.,%#' /#)' *C"' !>$*C' >%)"G' $#' %B&' &"1$2")' N$2.B22$%#' 2".,%#' Y+/<"'97P'K$#"2'7qSZ=' Disagreeing with reviewers %"A;);&()$ X&23<&($ KA;4"(2"$
  • 89. +""&'c"1$"D' Q#B&#O#.!0'88#-7N'@:.',;-:348'$33=.7'A34'I3$"!34I:%8!8'%&'-:.' I43!3-.4'4.F%3&'3A'-:.'F.&.O':3B.2.4J'-:."'7%7&P-'.2,$;,-.'-:.' ;&-4,&8$,-.7' 4.F%3&89' @:,-' %8' 3&.' 3A' !"' #3&#.4&8' ,C3;-' -:%8' !.-:373$3F"9' “Hidden” questions Q#6F.5+#:! I,#+C'-N' Q:"' 7%7&R-' -:.' ,;-:348' .2,$;,-.' I3$"!34I:%8!8'%&'-:.';&-4,&8$,-.7'4.F%3&8'3A'-:.'F.&.S'
  • 90. +""&'c"1$"D' Q#B&#O#.!0'88#-7N'@:.',;-:348'$33=.7'A34'I3$"!34I:%8!8'%&'-:.' I43!3-.4'4.F%3&'3A'-:.'F.&.O':3B.2.4J'-:."'7%7&P-'.2,$;,-.'-:.' ;&-4,&8$,-.7' 4.F%3&89' @:,-' %8' 3&.' 3A' !"' #3&#.4&8' ,C3;-' -:%8' !.-:373$3F"9' “Hidden” questions %")9&()"k' [#' *C$2' 2*B)MP' D"' )".$)")' *%' L%.B2' %#' *C"' I&%>%*"&' &"<$%#'%L'*C$2'<"#"'6"./B2"'I&"1$%B2'2*B)$"2'x|/@$>/'"*'/G=P'7898j' 3/.O2%#' "*' /G=P' 7899y' C/1"' 2C%D#' *C/*' $*2' *&/#2.&$I,%#' D/2' I/&,.BG/&GM' /`".*")=' JC$2' C/2' #%D' 6""#' .G/&$-")' $#' *C"' N$2.B22$%#'2".,%#'%L'%B&'>/#B2.&$I*'Y+/<"'9SP'K$#"'74q7oZ='
  • 91. +""&'c"1$"D' Q#B&#O#.!0'88#-7N'@:.',;-:348'$33=.7'A34'I3$"!34I:%8!8'%&'-:.' I43!3-.4'4.F%3&'3A'-:.'F.&.O':3B.2.4J'-:."'7%7&P-'.2,$;,-.'-:.' ;&-4,&8$,-.7' 4.F%3&89' @:,-' %8' 3&.' 3A' !"' #3&#.4&8' ,C3;-' -:%8' !.-:373$3F"9' “Hidden” questions %")9&()"k' [#' *C$2' 2*B)MP' D"' )".$)")' *%' L%.B2' %#' *C"' I&%>%*"&' &"<$%#'%L'*C$2'<"#"'6"./B2"'I&"1$%B2'2*B)$"2'x|/@$>/'"*'/G=P'7898j' 3/.O2%#' "*' /G=P' 7899y' C/1"' 2C%D#' *C/*' $*2' *&/#2.&$I,%#' D/2' I/&,.BG/&GM' /`".*")=' JC$2' C/2' #%D' 6""#' .G/&$-")' $#' *C"' N$2.B22$%#'2".,%#'%L'%B&'>/#B2.&$I*'Y+/<"'9SP'K$#"'74q7oZ=' %"A;);&()$ X&23<&($ KA;4"(2"$
  • 92. Summary 1#++&'-!2! !  X&>;23::6$91")"(<(>$;(?&153<&($;($6&/1$53(/)21;90$ !  V1;<(>$"#"2<A"$3')01320)$3(4$<0:")$ !  H31>"<(>$'1&34$A"1)/)$(311&L$?&2/)"4$I&/1(3:)$ !  M:"31:6$2&55/(;23<(>$6&/1$;4"3)$;($K(>:;),$ 1#++&'-!3! !  M,&&);(>$0,"$5&)0$)/;03':"$I&/1(3:$ !  M&55/(;23<(>$L;0,$I&/1(3:$"4;0&1)$ !  c3A;>3<(>$9""1$1"A;"L$
  • 93. Thank you! LLLD"43(W"4;<(>D2&5$ Any questions? Y&::&L$/)$&($HL;N"1$ q!&/1(3:.4A;)&1' -&L(:&34$3(4$?/10,"1$1"34;(>$ "43(W"4;<(>D2&5`I3A"1;3(3$ X;Z"$/)$&($Y32"'&&Z$ ?32"'&&ZD2&5`!&/1(3:.4A;)&1'

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