Warning This is a graded activity. If you mark anything wrong or miss anything, you will be marked down for it.
Feeling Have two people read your essay. Each person should write their name and describe in 4 sentences the feeling that the reader is trying to evoke.
Is it described enough? Have two people read your essay. The readers should write their names on your paper and comment on the parts that need more description. (If you can’t get a full image of what’s being described, then it is not being described enough.)
Elements Have two people read your essay. The readers should write their names on your paper and they should write the three elements that they think that body paragraphs are addressing.
Spelling Have one person read your paper. The reader should write their name on your paper and they should look for all of the misspelling. If you are unsure about the spelling, you should look it up in the dictionary.