Kristina: You should add your names to this page and maybe a picture? Dylan: I agree with Kristina. Consider adding your name, date and a picture relating to facebook/blackberrys? Amy: I agree
Kristina: Nice intro, however, it seems a bit random that you singled out young people, grandparents, and aunts only? Maybe generalize this sentence so that it just encompasses everyone? Dylan: Sentence Fluency. Example: &quot;Everyone these days is using Facebook. From young people, to grandparents and even aunts.&quot; Amy: I agree that you might want to revise the intro to focus specifically on what you'll be showing readers how to do. You could open with a question: Have you ever wanted to post photos to Facebook directly from your Blackberry? These instructions will show you how. (or something like that; use your own words)
Dylan: Possibly pictures and Videos to upload?
Dylan: Is this service free? or does it cost money? You need an email address for a facebook account in the first place? Does this work for all models of the blackberry? Pearl? Curve? Amy: For the tip, clarify that you mean that they should wait to do add tags and captions until after the photos have been uploaded to Facebook.
Kristina: I assume that you haven't added pictures yet? Dylan: *Your Blackberry. Amy: Use the &quot;text&quot; format for your slides so that the step number is the header (in a big font) and then the step itself is in the body. I'll demonstrate in class. Screenshots would be helpful.
Dylan: What? I'm sure once you add pictures it will make sense. But what is the &quot;Media Applications&quot; and isn't everybodys main menu different because they are customizable? Amy: I'm guessing Media Application is meant to be capitalized?
Dylan: How do you exactly select? Do you just scroll over to it? Do you have to click it with the wheel? Or open it with the &quot;Black berry&quot; button next to the wheel? Amy: The text on this slide is positioned differently than on the previous slide. You can fix that by using the same format for each slide. I'll demo in class.
Dylan: Once again, Select?
Dylan: How do you left click next to the roller ball? Did you mean click the button left of the roller ball?
Dylan: Explain what tagging is? and what that means? Amy: Earlier you told readers not do to this until after the photos were added to Facebook (I think?) This is a bit confusing.
Amy: Maybe add a conclusion that shows readers how to verify that their photos are now where they want them to be?
How To Upload Photos And Videos From Your Blac
How to Upload Photos and Videos from Your Blackberry Directly to Facebook Danielle Sabbah and Cody Berenson
Introduction <ul><li>Ever wonder how people get mobil uploads on their facebook? Everyone these days is using Facebook. In order to make the most out of Facebook on your Blackberry it is important to know how to upload pictures from your Blackberry straight to your Facebook account. It is simple and can be done anywhere and anytime. </li></ul>
Things You'll Need <ul><ul><li>a Facebook account </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>a Blackberry with internet service that already has Facebook synced onto it </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>pictures of videos on your blackberry </li></ul></ul>
Tips and Warnings <ul><li>Tip: We suggest that you wait to tag your video/picture and add captions from your computer once the pictures/videos are already uploaded to Facebook. This is because it take a long time to load from your phone. This service is completely free and works for all blackberry models. </li></ul><ul><li>Warning: You must already have access to Facebook from your Blackberry in order for these instructions to work. </li></ul>
Select either your videos or pictures folder depending on what you would like to upload. STEP 3:
From the video or pictures folder select either "my videos," or "my pictures." STEP 4:
Once all your videos and/or pictures upload to the screen, select the specific photo or video you would like to upload on Facebook STEP 5:
Click the button left of the roller ball (the button that has the blackberry symbol on it), and select "Send to Facebook" STEP 6:
A small window will pop up giving you the option to add a caption to your photo/video or tag your photo/video. If you choose to add a caption simply write it in the caption box, and to tag your photo/video click on "Tag This Photo" or "Tag This Video" and type the names of the people in the photo/video. STEP 7:
After adding a caption or tagging your photo/video click on "Upload" on the window that popped up, and your photo/video will be uploaded to Facebook. STEP 8:
After you have uploaded your picture or video, Facebook will send you a text or e-mail verifying that your picture or video has been successfully uploaded. STEP 9:
Verify Your Picture/Video Has Uploaded <ul><li>After you are done uploading your picture/video, Facebook will send you and e-mail confirming that your picture/video has been successfully uploaded! </li></ul>