Good writing
According to George Orwell
Here is an extract from
George Orwell’s seminal essay
Politics and the English Language
http://www.k-
1.com/Orwell/site/work/essays/lang
uage.html
Now that I have made this catalogue of swindles and
perversions, let me give another example of the kind of
writing that t...
I returned and saw under the
sun, that the race is not to the
swift, nor the battle to the
strong, neither yet bread to th...
I returned and saw under the
sun, that the race is not to the
swift, nor the battle to the
strong, neither yet bread to th...
I returned and saw under the
sun, that the race is not to the
swift, nor the battle to the
strong, neither yet bread to th...
? rɪturned ənd saw undər thə
sun, thət thə race ɪs not tə thə
swift, nor thə battəl tə thə
strong, neithər yet bread tə th...
? rɪturned ənd saw undər thə
sun, thət thə race ɪs not tə thə
swift, nor thə battəl tə thə
strong, neithər yet bread tə th...
Here it is in modern English:
Objective considerations of
contemporary phenomena compel
the conclusion that success or
failure in competitive activities...
Objective considerations of
contemporary phenomena compel
the conclusion that success or
failure in competitive activities...
Objective considerations of
contemporary phenomena compel
the conclusion that success or
failure in competitive activities...
əbjectɪve cənsɪdəratəns əf
cəntempərɪ phənomənə cəmpel
thə cənclusən thət səccess ər
failər ɪn cəmpetɪtɪve əctivɪtɪs
ɪxhib...
əbjectɪve cənsɪdəratəns əf
cəntempərɪ phənomənə cəmpel
thə cənclusən thət səccess ər
failər ɪn cəmpetɪtɪve əctivɪtɪs
ɪxhib...
let’s compare
I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the
swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to th...
I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the
swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to th...
I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the
swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to th...
This is a parody, but not a very gross one. … I have not
made a full translation.
The beginning and ending of the sentence...
The whole tendency of modern prose is away from
concreteness. Now analyze these two sentences a little
more closely.
The f...
The first sentence contains six vivid images, and only one
phrase ("time and chance") that could be called vague.
The seco...
Yet without a doubt it is the second kind of sentence that is
gaining ground in modern English. I do not want to
exaggerat...
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An analysis of the passage from Ecclesiastes cited by George Orwell in his essay 'Politics and the English Language' together with his pastiche of the same passage.

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  1. 1. Good writing According to George Orwell
  2. 2. Here is an extract from George Orwell’s seminal essay Politics and the English Language
  3. 3. http://www.k- 1.com/Orwell/site/work/essays/lang uage.html
  4. 4. Now that I have made this catalogue of swindles and perversions, let me give another example of the kind of writing that they lead to. This time it must of its nature be an imaginary one. I am going to translate a passage of good English into modern English of the worst sort. Here is a well-known verse from Ecclesiastes:
  5. 5. I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all.
  6. 6. I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all.
  7. 7. I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all.
  8. 8. ? rɪturned ənd saw undər thə sun, thət thə race ɪs not tə thə swift, nor thə battəl tə thə strong, neithər yet bread tə thə wise, nor yet richɪs tə men əf ?ndərstandɪng, nor yet favər tə men əf skill; bət time ənd chance happənəth tə thəm all.
  9. 9. ? rɪturned ənd saw undər thə sun, thət thə race ɪs not tə thə swift, nor thə battəl tə thə strong, neithər yet bread tə thə wise, nor yet richɪs tə men əf ?ndərstandɪng, nor yet favər tə men əf skill; bət time ənd chance happənəth tə thəm all.
  10. 10. Here it is in modern English:
  11. 11. Objective considerations of contemporary phenomena compel the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity, but that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be taken into account.
  12. 12. Objective considerations of contemporary phenomena compel the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity, but that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be taken into account.
  13. 13. Objective considerations of contemporary phenomena compel the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity, but that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be taken into account.
  14. 14. əbjectɪve cənsɪdəratəns əf cəntempərɪ phənomənə cəmpel thə cənclusən thət səccess ər failər ɪn cəmpetɪtɪve əctivɪtɪs ɪxhibɪts no tendəncɪ tə bɪ cəmmensərət wɪth ɪnnate cəpacɪtɪ, bət thət ə cənsidərəbl eləmənt of thə ?npredictəbl məst ɪnvarɪəbly bɪ takən ɪntə əccount.
  15. 15. əbjectɪve cənsɪdəratəns əf cəntempərɪ phənomənə cəmpel thə cənclusən thət səccess ər failər ɪn cəmpetɪtɪve əctivɪtɪs ɪxhibɪts no tendəncɪ tə bɪ cəmmensərət wɪth ɪnnate cəpacɪtɪ, bət thət ə cənsidərəbl eləmənt of thə ?npredictəbl məst ɪnvarɪəbly bɪ takən ɪntə əccount.
  16. 16. let’s compare
  17. 17. I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all. Objective considerations of contemporary phenomena compel the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity, but that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be taken into account.
  18. 18. I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all. Objective considerations of contemporary phenomena compel the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity, but that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be taken into account.
  19. 19. I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all. Objective considerations of contemporary phenomena compel the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity, but that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be taken into account.
  20. 20. This is a parody, but not a very gross one. … I have not made a full translation. The beginning and ending of the sentence follow the original meaning fairly closely, but in the middle the concrete illustrations -- race, battle, bread -- dissolve into the vague phrases "success or failure in competitive activities." This had to be so, because no modern writer of the kind I am discussing -- no one capable of using phrases like "objective considerations of contemporary phenomena" -- would ever tabulate his thoughts in that precise and detailed way.
  21. 21. The whole tendency of modern prose is away from concreteness. Now analyze these two sentences a little more closely. The first contains forty-nine words but only sixty syllables, and all its words are those of everyday life. The second contains thirty-eight words of ninety syllables: eighteen of those words are from Latin roots, and one from Greek.
  22. 22. The first sentence contains six vivid images, and only one phrase ("time and chance") that could be called vague. The second contains not a single fresh, arresting phrase, and in spite of its ninety syllables it gives only a shortened version of the meaning contained in the first.
  23. 23. Yet without a doubt it is the second kind of sentence that is gaining ground in modern English. I do not want to exaggerate. This kind of writing is not yet universal, and outcrops of simplicity will occur here and there in the worst- written page. Still, if you or I were told to write a few lines on the uncertainty of human fortunes, we should probably come much nearer to my imaginary sentence than to the one from Ecclesiastes.
  24. 24. www.davidnicholson.it

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