e.g. My game’s called “Revenge of the couch potato”. You get to be a crime fighting vegetable setting out to save the Golden Carrot from certain peril. But one obstacle remains – King Tomato is making soup…
Positive: Good explanation of software design, good understanding of the game design problem, clear explanation of game rules, well structured talk, highlighted important points, explained hard ideas well, questions handled well.
Negative: Unclear explanation of software design, poor understanding of the game design problem, unclear explanation of game rules, some technical errors, talk poorly structured.
Positive: Clear slides, right amount of material per slide, examples well used, diagrams/pictures/tables/graphs well used, game demo well explained
Negative: Omitted illustrative examples, would have benefited from diagrams/pictures/tables/graphs, slides too crowded, fonts too small, background too busy, typos on slides, game demo poorly explained.