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Suggestions
for The List
Prepared for Shahar Raz
by Brian Pagán
The List

           It’s an elegant checklist
               for travel packing
The List

           Like all good things, it
             could be better…
Terms of Use
  Typical Flow
A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow



   1: Choose a list
A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow


                  2: Read modal alert and
                  dismiss it
A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow




  3: Check “I accept all terms of use”
A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow



   4: Choose a list
A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow



   5: Get a list
Terms of Use
What the User Expects
A. Terms of Use – Expectation



   1: Choose a list
A. Terms of Use – Expectation



   2: Get a list
Terms of Use
  My Suggestion
A. Terms of Use - Suggestion
                  Add a terms of use
                  disclaimer here as a
                 ...
A. Terms of Use - Suggestion


  By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.
A. Terms of Use - Suggestion

 By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.




                       ...
A. Terms of Use - Suggestion

 By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.
                           ...
List Types
Communicating
B: List Types

                There are pre-made
                lists and the custom
                list option.

     ...
Perhaps like this…?

 By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.
Perhaps like this…?

 By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.




                                ...
Perhaps like this…?

 By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.




                                ...
Perhaps like this…?

 By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.




                                ...
Perhaps like this…?

 By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.




                                ...
List Page
2 Small Suggestions
Clickable Hot Spots
                      To check off an item, the
                      user can only click here
Clickable Hot Spots
                      It would be nice if s/he could
                      click anywhere in here
List Legibility



                  The lists could be
                  made a tad more
                  legible by ins...
Enjoy, Shahar!
  I hope this was helpful.

  Good luck with the list and everything
  else!
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The List Suggestions

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The List (http://thelist.razstrategy.com) is a customizable, online checklist for travelers, made by my buddy Shahar at Raz Strategy (http://www.razstrategy.com).

Here are some friendly suggestions I made of quick ways to improve the List's usability, most of which have been implemented already! Shahar has graciously let me publish these suggestions online, so here they are.

Enjoy, Brian

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  1. 1. Friendly Suggestions for The List Prepared for Shahar Raz by Brian Pagán
  2. 2. The List It’s an elegant checklist for travel packing
  3. 3. The List Like all good things, it could be better…
  4. 4. Terms of Use Typical Flow
  5. 5. A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow 1: Choose a list
  6. 6. A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow 2: Read modal alert and dismiss it
  7. 7. A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow 3: Check “I accept all terms of use”
  8. 8. A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow 4: Choose a list
  9. 9. A. Terms of Use – Typical Flow 5: Get a list
  10. 10. Terms of Use What the User Expects
  11. 11. A. Terms of Use – Expectation 1: Choose a list
  12. 12. A. Terms of Use – Expectation 2: Get a list
  13. 13. Terms of Use My Suggestion
  14. 14. A. Terms of Use - Suggestion Add a terms of use disclaimer here as a linked paragraph.
  15. 15. A. Terms of Use - Suggestion By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.
  16. 16. A. Terms of Use - Suggestion By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use. Take away the checkbox
  17. 17. A. Terms of Use - Suggestion By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use. That way, your users have one-click access to the lists and you are legally protected!
  18. 18. List Types Communicating
  19. 19. B: List Types There are pre-made lists and the custom list option. I think the distinction could be made more clearly by: 1. Using clearer “call to action” language 2. Making the custom list form look more like a form
  20. 20. Perhaps like this…? By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use.
  21. 21. Perhaps like this…? By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use. Two Main Options: Content portion divided into two, equally “heavy” areas
  22. 22. Perhaps like this…? By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use. Two Main Options: Large headings double as calls to action, telling the user what s/he can do
  23. 23. Perhaps like this…? By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use. Visual Flow: Both areas are laid out to promote a top-bottom/left- right visual flow (would have to be adapted for Hebrew version)
  24. 24. Perhaps like this…? By clicking any link on this page, you accept our terms of use. Visual Flow: The custom list parameter form is clearer, giving clues about the meanings of the different values. The user goes through the form and is invited to click the visually heavy button on the right (with indicative text)
  25. 25. List Page 2 Small Suggestions
  26. 26. Clickable Hot Spots To check off an item, the user can only click here
  27. 27. Clickable Hot Spots It would be nice if s/he could click anywhere in here
  28. 28. List Legibility The lists could be made a tad more legible by inserting some whitespace between new headings and the list above them.
  29. 29. Enjoy, Shahar! I hope this was helpful. Good luck with the list and everything else!

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