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  • 1. Audience Feedback Media Studies Brontë Vickery
  • 2. Feedback sheet 1:Mise-en-scene:Good use of credits written on box and envelope.Camera: over the shoulder shotsSound:fitting music
  • 3. Feedback sheet 2:Mise-en-scene:Girl’s bedroom, moving house.Some credits written on objects-effective.Camera: over the shoulder shots, good close ups andrange of angles.Sound:music fitted the story and lyrics matches with eachscene.Editing: good effects, quick cuts between girl packingbox and “ryan” calling her.
  • 4. Feedback sheet 3:Sound: good music.Editing: Love where you put the credits, and the scene offilling up the boxes with different things.
  • 5. Feedback sheet 4:Mise-en-scene:Good use of props and costume, sets the scene.Camera: could have added more angles but overall good.Sound:music emotional music fits well.Editing: good use of cut scenes eg. Box filling up.
  • 6. Feedback sheet 5:Sound: no digetic sound used.Editing: good use of credits eg writing on thebox/envelope etc.
  • 7. Feedback sheet 6:Camera: I really liked the shots of the objects going intothe box.Sound: good choice of sound, song fitted well.Editing: credits edited really well.
  • 8. Feedback sheet 7:Mise-en-scene:Good use of props, appropriate age of girl.Camera: good shots.Sound: good music.Editing: good order of scenes, good cutting scenes eg.Box filling up.
  • 9. Feedback sheet 8:Camera: good variety of shots but some shots a bit toolong.Sound:music suited the film but sounded bit odd in the middle.Editing: continuity was good but some bits seemed a littlejumpy.
  • 10. Feedback sheet 9:Mise-en-scene:Posters good.Camera: flashes to phone and stop motion with packing boxreally good.Sound:Song lyrics fit the scenario, but some more diegeticsounds would have been nicer.Editing: really smooth, although the match on actiongoing out of the door could have been a tiny bit smoother.
  • 11. Feedback sheet 3:Mise-en-scene:Good scenery, location was good and made it into a “girly”room.Camera: variety of shots was good!.Sound:nice music and diegetic sound.Editing: “filling up the box” editing was really good.
  • 12. Feedback sheet 11:Mise-en-scene:Love the posters, “zayn styles” good name for productionmanager.Camera: good variety of shots.Sound:Good song.Editing: good appropriate pace.
  • 13. Feedback sheet 12:Mise-en-scene:Bare walls added to the sense of “leaving behind”.Camera: no shaky shots, good framing.Sound:music fitted really well with the story.Editing: nice box-filling shot.
  • 14. Feedback sheet 13:Mise-en-scene:Effective use of on-screen text credits.Camera: good lighting quality.Sound:Atmospheric sound track.Editing: stop-start- animation
  • 15. Feedback sheet 16:Mise-en-scene:The bare walls made it seem more like she had a lot toleave behind.Camera: really good variety of shots especially when shecame down the stairs.Sound:The music really matched the genre and what wasgoing on- made it more emotional, gave a bigger impact onthe audience.Editing: I liked the way the box gradually filled up.
  • 16. Feedback sheet 16:Mise-en-scene:Good props.Camera: nice choice of shots for genre. Good over-theshoulder shot.Sound:Good choice of music, music builds up at correcttime.Editing: sound loop on menu, nice stop-start animations.