Week 3 summary writing final

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  • 1. the long thursday
    14th July
    st. hilda’s secondary
    tp one: ArmanAlluwie
  • 2. what we will achieve today
    before 9.45am I would have
    listened to the feedback from our last summary exercise
    shown Mr. Arman I can do a full summary on my own
    had fun drawing with my friends
  • 3. feedback
    reasons
    something which provides an explanation
    may not be true for everyone
    what’s the difference between “and” and “or”?
    and: used to join two clauses together
    or: used to connect different possibilities
  • 4. feedback
    anything wrong with this summary?
    Some people run marathons as a personal challenge as they believe in stretching their limits whereas some run for the simple joy of running, however there are also people that run for masochistic reasons.
  • 5. feedback
    one conjunction maximum two clauses
    Some people run marathons as a personal challenge as they believe in stretching their limits. While there are some who run for the simple joy of running, there are also people that run for masochistic reasons.
  • 6. masochistic (adjective)
    the enjoyment of an activity or situation that most people would find very unpleasant
    Adjectives
    words which express some feature or quality of a noun or a pronoun
    must be followed by a noun
  • 7. honor roll
  • 8. Patricia Tay
    Some people run the marathon for the simple joy of running. Other people might take running the marathon as a personal challenge or do it for masochistic reasons.
    (30 words)
    simple short sentences
  • 9. Deswinne
    Some run it as a personal challenge by training and pushing themselves to their limits. Others simply run for the joy of it. Some do it for masochistic reasons as they gain pleasure by torturing themselves by running marathons.
    (40 words)
    good use of the conjunction “as”
  • 10. Nicole Rammesh
    Some people run the marathon as a personal challenge, to train and push themselves to stretch limit. Other people run for the simple joy of running, as they run for running itself. Some are even ‘masochists’, running to torture themselves.
    (40 words)
    made full use of word count
    description for every point
  • 11. Afiqah
    There are various reasons why people run the marathon. Some run the marathon as a personal challenge. Others run for the simple joy of running. But there are some people who simply take pleasure in torturing themselves.
    (37 words)
    • made full use of word count
    introduction
  • 12. Gabriel Ng
    People run marathons for various reasons, some run it as a personal challenge while others run because of the simply joy of running. Others run because they are masochists, so they take pleasure in torturing themselves.
    (36 words)
    varied sentence structure
    proficient use of conjunctions
  • 13. the typos
    (line 7) “What number did you dial?” could hardly keep the exasperation out of her voice she asked.
    (line 12) this was Jasmine’s number
    (line 14) at the other end of the
    (line 25) rude toof her
    (line 33) know how long she stood there
    (line 41) mind: what if the caller
    (line 47) find onno one there
  • 14. the last summary (i promise)
    read the question and underline the
    topic
    other instructions
    source
    word limit
    complete the first box
    “underline and number the relevant points in the passage”
  • 15. now read the passage
    check the meaning of the words you don’t understand
    woebegone (line 14)
    cajoling (line 23)
    drawled (line 36)
    saccharine (line 36)
    palpable (line 42)
  • 16. refer back to the box “making notes” on your answer page
    notice how the boxes are numbered
    Hint:
    1. asked for “Jasmine”
    2. told him he had the wrong number
    3. wanted a chat with Mary
  • 17. now lets start underlining the points
    what the caller wanted
    how Mary responded
    why she responded the way she did
  • 18. You may want to start like this..
    “At first, the caller asked to speak to “Jasmine”. Mary told him he had the wrong number… “
    its not compulsory to do so.
  • 19. the well deserved video
  • 20. situational writing
    what is situational writing?
    what is the format for a letter?
    informal letter
    usually to?
    what do we talk about?