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    • the long thursday
      14th July
      st. hilda’s secondary
      tp one: ArmanAlluwie
    • what we will achieve today
      before 9.45am I would have
      listened to the feedback from our last summary exercise
      shown Mr. Arman I can do a full summary on my own
      had fun drawing with my friends
    • feedback
      reasons
      something which provides an explanation
      may not be true for everyone
      what’s the difference between “and” and “or”?
      and: used to join two clauses together
      or: used to connect different possibilities
    • feedback
      anything wrong with this summary?
      Some people run marathons as a personal challenge as they believe in stretching their limits whereas some run for the simple joy of running, however there are also people that run for masochistic reasons.
    • feedback
      one conjunction maximum two clauses
      Some people run marathons as a personal challenge as they believe in stretching their limits. While there are some who run for the simple joy of running, there are also people that run for masochistic reasons.
    • masochistic (adjective)
      the enjoyment of an activity or situation that most people would find very unpleasant
      Adjectives
      words which express some feature or quality of a noun or a pronoun
      must be followed by a noun
    • honor roll
    • Patricia Tay
      Some people run the marathon for the simple joy of running. Other people might take running the marathon as a personal challenge or do it for masochistic reasons.
      (30 words)
      simple short sentences
    • Deswinne
      Some run it as a personal challenge by training and pushing themselves to their limits. Others simply run for the joy of it. Some do it for masochistic reasons as they gain pleasure by torturing themselves by running marathons.
      (40 words)
      good use of the conjunction “as”
    • Nicole Rammesh
      Some people run the marathon as a personal challenge, to train and push themselves to stretch limit. Other people run for the simple joy of running, as they run for running itself. Some are even ‘masochists’, running to torture themselves.
      (40 words)
      made full use of word count
      description for every point
    • Afiqah
      There are various reasons why people run the marathon. Some run the marathon as a personal challenge. Others run for the simple joy of running. But there are some people who simply take pleasure in torturing themselves.
      (37 words)
      • made full use of word count
      introduction
    • Gabriel Ng
      People run marathons for various reasons, some run it as a personal challenge while others run because of the simply joy of running. Others run because they are masochists, so they take pleasure in torturing themselves.
      (36 words)
      varied sentence structure
      proficient use of conjunctions
    • the typos
      (line 7) “What number did you dial?” could hardly keep the exasperation out of her voice she asked.
      (line 12) this was Jasmine’s number
      (line 14) at the other end of the
      (line 25) rude toof her
      (line 33) know how long she stood there
      (line 41) mind: what if the caller
      (line 47) find onno one there
    • the last summary (i promise)
      read the question and underline the
      topic
      other instructions
      source
      word limit
      complete the first box
      “underline and number the relevant points in the passage”
    • now read the passage
      check the meaning of the words you don’t understand
      woebegone (line 14)
      cajoling (line 23)
      drawled (line 36)
      saccharine (line 36)
      palpable (line 42)
    • refer back to the box “making notes” on your answer page
      notice how the boxes are numbered
      Hint:
      1. asked for “Jasmine”
      2. told him he had the wrong number
      3. wanted a chat with Mary
    • now lets start underlining the points
      what the caller wanted
      how Mary responded
      why she responded the way she did
    • You may want to start like this..
      “At first, the caller asked to speak to “Jasmine”. Mary told him he had the wrong number… “
      its not compulsory to do so.
    • the well deserved video
    • situational writing
      what is situational writing?
      what is the format for a letter?
      informal letter
      usually to?
      what do we talk about?