the long thursday 14th July st. hilda’s secondary tp one: ArmanAlluwie
what we will achieve today before 9.45am I would have listened to the feedback from our last summary exercise shown Mr. Arman I can do a full summary on my own had fun drawing with my friends
feedback reasons something which provides an explanation may not be true for everyone what’s the difference between “and” and “or”? and: used to join two clauses together or: used to connect different possibilities
feedback anything wrong with this summary? Some people run marathons as a personal challenge as they believe in stretching their limits whereas some run for the simple joy of running, however there are also people that run for masochistic reasons.
feedback one conjunction maximum two clauses Some people run marathons as a personal challenge as they believe in stretching their limits. While there are some who run for the simple joy of running, there are also people that run for masochistic reasons.
masochistic (adjective) the enjoyment of an activity or situation that most people would find very unpleasant Adjectives words which express some feature or quality of a noun or a pronoun must be followed by a noun
Patricia Tay Some people run the marathon for the simple joy of running. Other people might take running the marathon as a personal challenge or do it for masochistic reasons. (30 words) simple short sentences
Deswinne Some run it as a personal challenge by training and pushing themselves to their limits. Others simply run for the joy of it. Some do it for masochistic reasons as they gain pleasure by torturing themselves by running marathons. (40 words) good use of the conjunction “as”
Nicole Rammesh Some people run the marathon as a personal challenge, to train and push themselves to stretch limit. Other people run for the simple joy of running, as they run for running itself. Some are even ‘masochists’, running to torture themselves. (40 words) made full use of word count description for every point
Afiqah There are various reasons why people run the marathon. Some run the marathon as a personal challenge. Others run for the simple joy of running. But there are some people who simply take pleasure in torturing themselves. (37 words)
made full use of word count
Gabriel Ng People run marathons for various reasons, some run it as a personal challenge while others run because of the simply joy of running. Others run because they are masochists, so they take pleasure in torturing themselves. (36 words) varied sentence structure proficient use of conjunctions
the typos (line 7) “What number did you dial?” could hardly keep the exasperation out of her voice she asked. (line 12) this was Jasmine’s number (line 14) at the other end of the (line 25) rude toof her (line 33) know how long she stood there (line 41) mind: what if the caller (line 47) find onno one there
the last summary (i promise) read the question and underline the topic other instructions source word limit complete the first box “underline and number the relevant points in the passage”
now read the passage check the meaning of the words you don’t understand woebegone (line 14) cajoling (line 23) drawled (line 36) saccharine (line 36) palpable (line 42)
refer back to the box “making notes” on your answer page notice how the boxes are numbered Hint: 1. asked for “Jasmine” 2. told him he had the wrong number 3. wanted a chat with Mary
now lets start underlining the points what the caller wanted how Mary responded why she responded the way she did
You may want to start like this.. “At first, the caller asked to speak to “Jasmine”. Mary told him he had the wrong number… “ its not compulsory to do so.