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  • 1. Adding Details to Your Writing Ambre Lee Dubnoff Center
  • 2. Read the Following Student ParagraphI was in a fight on my first day. I got beat-up. The other fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 3. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  Write a list of questions in your notebook thatfight on my first you have after readingday. I got beat- the paragraph.up. The otherfight that I was inwas with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 4. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  Who? Who was the fight with?fight on my firstday. I got beat-up. The otherfight that I was inwas with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 5. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  Who? Who was the fight with? Is he/she afight on my first formidable (fearsome)day. I got beat- opponent? Describeup. The other this opponent. Who has the upper-hand infight that I was in the fight and why?was with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 6. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  Where? Where did the fight take place? Werefight on my first there a lot of peopleday. I got beat- around? What wereup. The other they doing?fight that I was inwas with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 7. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  What? What happened during thefight on my first fight? Punches?day. I got beat- Slaps? Was it broken-up. The other up? Who broke it up?fight that I was inwas with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 8. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  When? When did the fight happen? Whatfight on my first class did it happen in?day. I got beat- What time of day wasup. The other it?fight that I was inwas with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 9. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  Why? Why did the fight start?fight on my firstday. I got beat-up. The otherfight that I was inwas with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 10. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a  How? How did youfight on my first feel after the fight?day. I got beat-up. The otherfight that I was inwas with Jose.He does not goto school hereanymore.
  • 11. What Question Do YouHave After Reading This? I was in a fight  Use your notes toon my first day. I create a detailed paragraph about thegot beat-up. The fight. Change theother fight that I order and the wordswas in was with to make an exciting,Jose. He does not descriptive paragraphgo to school here that explains whatanymore. happened.