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(CONTINUED)Lingerie ShoppingByAlice MutchCopyrights at Alice MutchAll rights belong to the firstname.lastname@example.org
(CONTINUED)INT- POSH LINGERIE SHOP - DAYFADE IN:1. L.S of the lingerie shop with a father anddaughter and a few other people inside it.2. M.S of a father, DAVE, a 6ft tall man, 42 yearsold with brown hair with patchy grey streakingthrough it. He is walking through the shop lookingat the items.3. M.S of Daves daughter, LIV, a 13 year old girlwith long brown hair, going shopping to buy somebras. They walk into a posh lingerie shop tobrowse the collection.4. L.S of Dave and Liv walking through the shop,CAMERA ZOOMS into a M.S of Dave.DAVESo, erm, here we are...Whatabout these lovely andcompletely unrevealingthings?DAVE holds up a pair of large granny pants to hisdaughter pulling a convincing smile.5. M.S of Dave with Liv looking at her dad with aserious face long enough for him to put the grannyknickers down and back away.DAVENo, no? Okay.. Ill leave youto it, just no sexy items,or lacy things, or stringsDave picks up a collection of thongs and throwsthem down and walks to the back of the shop.
(CONTINUED)6. L.S of Liv walking to the bra section and startsto browse at the collection picking up a fewitems. CAMERA PANS to a L.S of two girls walkinginto the store laughing and chatting loudly.7. W.S of Liv and the group of girls when Liv turnsround and realises she knows the girls, she triesto turn her back to the girls and ducks her headin the collection of underwear to avoid the girls,but the two girls spot her and walk over to her.LIVHey girls, whats happening?fancy seeing you here8. M.S of the M.S of the two girls who are carrying alarge amount of shopping bags, both rich girlsfull of fake smiles. Both girls has a fullerfigure than LIV. LIV and the two girls all airkiss as they great each other.9. C.U into girl 1 when she starts to speakGIRL 1Oh hey, oh were just have alittle shopping trip, youshould of come with us.The girl raises her arms up stating the obviousthat they were in a lingerie shop.10. M.L.S CAMERA PANS out to the two girls as thegroup of girls all laughing together, LIV joiningin.11. M.S CAMERA TACKS the girls as they start browsingthe selection of underwear together, picking out
(CONTINUED)sexy bras that are too old for them with lots ofpadding.12. O.T.S.S of Livs shoulder to Girl 2.GIRL 2Who are you with anyway?Daddy give you his creditcard for you to go on yourown?13. M.L.S CAMERA PANS to the girls look shocked andstunned that her dad could be that cool,14. M.S eye level with LivLIVOh erm no.. I urm15. TWO SHOT of Liv and Dave Before Liv can finish hersentence her dad comes walking over walking in astrut pushing his lips together to try and poutwhilst wearing a thong over his eye and pretendingto wear a bra. He walks over to the girls andstarts to talk, mimicking the way the girls talk.16. M.S of DaveDAVEOh hey girls, how you doing,like fancy seeing you here.You think I need the nextsize up?Dave points to the bra hes wearing.17. W.S of everyone as Liv looks mortified and freezesfrom embarrassment; her friends all burst outlaughing and look between Liv and Dave.
(CONTINUED)GIRL 1wow...18. O.T.S from Livs shoulder to the girls as the groupof friends walk out of the store without LIVlaughing and giggling about what just happened19. M.S of the girlsGIRL 2What on earth was that?GIRL 1Oh who knows, howembarrassingThe two girls all laugh together and walk off.20. M.L.S CAMERA PANS towards LIV as she stays stoodwith her dad looking at him in disbelief.DAVEOh come on that was funny,okay Ill buy you some food,happy?Liv says nothing and carries on staring at him insilence,21. Over the shoulder shot from Liv to DaveDAVENo? erm a maccies? a new top?an eye patch?Dave points to the thong located on his head thathe has over his eye to represent an eye patch.22. TWO SHOT of Liv and Dave as Liv picks up herselected underwear and takes them to check out.Then they both walk back to the car. CRANE SHOT
(CONTINUED)INT- AN OPEN PLANNED LIVING ROOM WITH STAIRS LEADING DOWN TOTHE MIDDLE OF THE LIVING ROOM WITH THE FRONT DOOR AT THE LEFTSIDE OF THE LIVING ROOM. - NIGHT23. Establishing shot of the large living area.24. L.S CAMERA PANS to Dave and his wife, JEN a 40-year-old woman with short light brown curly hair,are walking into the living room discussingprevious the events of the day.25. T.S of Dave and Jen sitting round the lounge area.DAVECaptain thong man was justtrying to save her from theworld of sassy lingerie, itsnot my fault, I didnt choosethe captain thong man life,the captain thong man lifechose me.26. W.S of the living room and door way as there is aknock at the door27. M.L.S CAMERA TRACKS Dave as gets up and startswalking to the door.DAVEThis must be Liv’s fella eh?28. O.T.S view from Daves shoulder. Dave opens thedoor and stares dauntingly at the young boy, NICK,a 14-year-old boy who’s average height with shortdark brown hair, while looking him up and down.NICKHi sir, erm is Liv here sir?
(CONTINUED)29. TWO SHOT of Nick and DaveDAVEHow old are you?NICKErm, fourteen sirDAVESorry no Liv lives here30. L.S of Dave shutting the door in the boys face andwalks off, JEN quickly walks to the door to openit for the young boy.JENI’m so sorry for my husbandsbehaviour please come in Nick31. W.S of the living room with the three people sitin awkward silence waiting for Liv, Dave stares atNick from across the room without blinking.32. L.S of Liv quietly walks down the stairs wearing ared dress that comes just above her knees that islow cut revealing cleavage with obvious enhancingunderwear.33. M.S of Jen turning around to go find Liv then herface drops when she sees her daughter.JENOh my goodness..34. W.S of everybody on sceneDAVEHoly..wow what. Hey hunny yougoing to the kitchen causethose chicken fillets of
(CONTINUED)yours will be perfect to feedthe family.LIV gives a fake smile and laughs at herdads joke.35. M.S CAMERA TRACKS behind Liv36. W.S of all the charactersLIVIm going out, bye.DAVECould we have the chickenfillets first though? Imrather hungryJENLIV, go upstairs, now.DAVEI guess captain thong manwasnt enough. Better thebra-man on the job.LIV looking mortified runs upstairs. JEN walks upthe stairs after LIV.37. M.S of DAVE and NICK as they are left alone.DAVESo boy, what do you plan todo with the rest of yourentire life?
(CONTINUED)NICKWell I plan to go to Oxford University andstudy Engineering, Economics and Managementto become a management consultant infinancial institutions as well as be in themanufacturing industry, sir.38. Close up Shot of Dave looking at Nick in disbeliefand scratches his head trying to think of a goodcomeback.39. M.L.S CAMERA TRACKING Dave walking round thelounge area.DAVEWell I, erm, good luck. Sowhat you doing tonight?NICKCinemas I think sir40. M.S of DaveDAVEHorror? So she can lean onyour shoulder and pretend tobe scared? Romantic so youcan wipe her tears off herface and lean in for a kiss?Or comedy so you can laughyour way into a kiss? Ey?41. Over the shoulder shot from Dave toNickNICKI think we’re going to go seethe new Monsters Ink actually42. L.S as Dave takes in a deep breath as he walksround the room being out staged again.
(CONTINUED)43. W.D of everyone as Liv and Jen walk down thestairs with LIV now wearing more casual andappropriate clothes.DAVEAh Livvy Loo, now that’s muchbetter.44. Over the shoulder shot from have as he walks overto LIV and gives her a big kiss. Liv pushes herdad away and looks shyly over towards nick.45. L.S of the four of them as nick and Liv finallystart to leave the house Dave calls after them.DAVESo nine O’Clock right here,I’ll be waiting not a minutelonger, a lot of minutesearlier though, if you wantthat is.NICKOh, yes sirJENOh please, call me Jen, andcall him Dave46. C.U of DaveDAVENo no, carry on calling mesir. See you at nine Livvyloo loo, and if shes nothome before nine Nicolas...you dont want to know whatsgoing to happen.
(CONTINUED)47. O.T.S from Dave to NickNICKoh I, erm, yes sir48. C.U CAMER TRACKING as Dave walksover to Nick of whispers closely tohimDAVEOh and how about when youcome back we can go out tothe back and.. Yknow49. O.T.S from Nick to Dave DAVEindicates a smoking sign with hishand50. C.U of Nick and DaveNICKWhat? oh erm I dont do thatsirDAVECome on, just a few drags,you know what Im talkingabout51. M.S of Nick looking around awkwardlyand looking at his mobile phoneNICKActually, you know what Ihave to go, sorry its urgent52. Two shot of Dave and NickDAVEyou sure? Oh okay bubye now
(CONTINUED)DAVE walks NICK out of the door with a cheerywave.53. 53.C.U of Dave brushing of his handsand walking off.