1. Sum up your feedback
My feedback was fair because I read through them and they were all getting
at the same bit of work (good and bad) this shows that people are noticing
the same mistakes over and over again. To improve this I would change the
criticism I was given. I’m proud to say that what I had to show the readers,
people’s feedback was pretty good.
What do you agree with in your feedback and why?
I agree with the lack of detail used in the last section of my proposal, this
was simply because I didn’t make the time to finish it. I also agree with the bit
when I mentioned that I was going to do a graphic novel based up on a
children’s book, I should make the age range a bit higher than 4 because I
neither think that children at the age of 4 are going to understand a children’s
graphic novel comic.
What do you not agree with in your feedback and why?
I don’t agree with the my topics not been detailed enough; my topic is a
simple worded paragraph that allows readers to simply understand my story.