2. Business Email
Dear Mr.Suzuki
I'm S.Watanabe and second years of Aizu university .
Thank you very much for being allowed to visit a company the other day.
Moreover, thank you for a senior preparing an opportunity to speak
directly about a corporate profile, service contents, and the environment to commit.
The concrete image boiled and I was allowed to study happily.
I would like to consider further some things which can be carried out for themselves to society.
I pay for prosperity and development of the further your company form the bottom my heart.
Thank you.
3. The three most important strategise
・Business email are short and simple.
・Business email need to write the subject.
・Business email need to turn back a sentence to read easy.
4. 5 keywords that you know
・A simple "Hello" is better when you are writing to someone you don't know.
It is too formal that using a phase like "Dear Mr Smith".
・You should free write as if you are speaking to the person, when writing to
someone you know well.
・You have better include a telephone number to the signature of the email so that
you will have a chance to telephone if necessary from the person
・It is not necessary to include your email address as the recipient can just
reply to the email.
・When replying eliminate all the information that is not necessary. Only leave
the sections of text that are related to your reply. This will save your reader
time when reading your email.
5. Why do you think one should learn
how to write bussiness email?
If we found work, we will need to how to write
business email.So,we should lean how to write
to it now.
6. Identify three things you can do to improve
your current English writing ability.
・memorize many word and phrase
・write a diary about experience every day
・read many book
