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  1. 1. Copywriting Secrets of the Masters: Michael MastersonThis special report is brought to you free courtesy of www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  2. 2. "For more great free information on how to take your copywriting career to the next level please visit www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com and dont forget to collect your free Pro Copywriting Tactics Reports while youre there."MICHAEL MASTERSON – There is no one more qualified and experiencedthan copywriter, entrepreneur, and business-builder Michael Masterson toteach you the art, craft, and business of copywriting.Michael started his first business – a fifth-grade publishing venture – at age11.After finishing grad school at the University of Michigan in 1975, he spenttwo years in the Peace Corps, where he began his writing career.Several years later he was working as a writer for a small newsletterpublishing company in Washington D.C. Then, in 1982, he learned the art ofcopywriting and launched the first of dozens of successful direct-marketingventures, many of which have become multi-million dollar companies.All told, he‘s been directly involved in the generation of over ONE BILLIONDOLLARS of sales through the mail and online.He‘s also a highly successful author. He‘s published more than a dozenbooks, including several which have become Wall Street Journal,Amazon.com or New York Times bestsellers.Today, Michael consults mainly for newsletter publishing giant Agora, Inc.,and writes regularly for Early To Rise, one of the most popular self-improvement newsletters on the Internet, and for The Golden Thread,AWAI‘s weekly copywriting newsletter.But there‘s more to Michael Masterson than just his writing and businessskills.Michael also has a knack for taking just about anyone with a burning desireto upgrade his lifestyle – no matter what his background or education – andtransforming him (or her) into a top-notch copywriter:  He‘s the one responsible for transforming Paul Hollingshead from a 35- year-old minimum-wage grocery store stock boy into a copywriter earning upward of $300,000 a year … and Don Mahoney from a woodworker to a $300,000-a-year copywriter living in Miami Beach … www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  3. 3.  He‘s mentored other copywriters who have gone on to generate hundreds of millions of dollars in sales each year through their copy …  He‘s shown people in their 50s and 60s – people preparing for retirement – how to successfully change careers and become well-paid freelance copywriters …  He‘s taken young people fresh out of college – with no ―life experience‖ at all – and turned them into top-notch copywriters and newsletter journalists …  He‘s taught housewives, bartenders, and laborers to excel …  He‘s even helped ―professionals‖ – doctors and college professors – leave successful careers to enjoy the big money and stress-free lifestyle copywriting offers Discover how Michael can do the same for you with his AWAI Accelerated Program For Six Figure Copywriting. Michael Masterson Fear and Greed: Two Overrated Emotions How to Become a Smarter and More Powerful Copywriter Way back when I was learning how to write advertising copy, it wascommonly believed that the way to get high response rates was to appeal to our prospects‘ greed and fears.I don‘t know who first made this pronouncement, but it was practically acommandment of direct marketing in those days.All the ―experts‖ I listened to espoused it. All the copywriters I admiredseemed to do it. On the surface, it seemed to be a good, practical rule. OneI should follow.But I thought it was stupid. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  4. 4. I didn‘t need a degree in psychology to know that reducing humanmotivation to two, very obvious, emotions was wrong.I knew in my bones — based on 30 years of experience (first with mymother, then with my teachers and eventually my colleagues, wife, andchildren) — that there were better ways to be persuasive than by stirring upfear and greed.Sure, using fear sometimes seemed necessary — to keep the kids fromriding their bikes in the dark without headlights, for example. But mostly itparalyzed the person I wanted to motivate. I found it to be both heavy-handed and clumsy. There were many other emotions and desires I couldstimulate that would get the job done.And greed? I grew up in a household where greed was considered a deadlysin — ―the devil‘s instrument.‖ I had no desire to use it as my own.I wanted to build my career by working with, and selling to, people who, likeme, were subject to greed and fear but wanted to rise above those baseimpulses.I wasn‘t being altruistic. Not really. I didn‘t want to associate myself withgreedy, fearful people because I knew I couldn‘t trust them. I couldn‘t trustthem as friends. I couldn‘t trust them as business partners. And I couldn‘ttrust them as customers either.So even before I got into marketing in a serious way, I knew somethingabout persuasion that most of the experts writing books and giving lecturesdid not seem to know.And I had enough common sense to recognize that just because somethingis often said and generally believed doesn‘t make it so.I‘m happy to say that the myth about fear and greed has been eroding. Ibelieve Bill Bonner had something to do with that. The great promotions hewrote in the early 1970s relied on other emotions and instincts to sell his www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  5. 5. products. Gary Bencivenga and Clayton Makepeace, too, wrote copy thathelped disprove this lie. The biggest move forward came, ironically, from a man whose intention wasto warn consumers against marketing. In his book Influence: The Psychology of Persuasion, Robert Cialdini, a professor of social psychology at Arizona State University, analyzed dozens of very successful promotions. He didn‘t choose the ones that relied on greed and fear. Instead, he focused attention on those that used more subtle, clever approaches.The consumers he was hoping to enlighten hardly read the book. But itbecame a great hit with a lot of marketers who applied Cialdini‘s insights onthe psychology of persuasion to their promotions.Among Cialdini‘s insights were these:  We instinctively try to reciprocate when someone does something for us.  Once we‘ve made a commitment to do something, we strive to be consistent with that decision.  We tend to look to others to determine what our decision should be in any given situation.  We prefer to say yes to the requests of people we know and like. Cialdini eventually crossed the river and became an authority on marketing.His later books and seminars taught how to do the kind of subtle marketinghe had despised. Good for him. Good for us. (I say ―good for us‖ because Ibelieve this kind of marketing is not only more effective, it is more honest.But that‘s another subject for another essay.)As I said, the idiotic ―rule‖ about fear and greed has been eroding — but it‘snever going to completely disappear.Why? Because many marketers still believe that fear and greed are the mostmotivating of all the emotions. And there is some evidence to support this.Let‘s begin with fear. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  6. 6. Fear is a primal emotion — one that was inherent in man at a very earlystage of human evolution. It is also an essential emotion, one that isnecessary for survival.Neurobiologists tell us that our primal emotions are rooted deeply in our―reptilian‖ brains and are instinctive. Because they are instinctive, they canbe very strong and very difficult to overcome.And there is no doubt that fear is effective in selling all sorts of products —from burglar alarms to baby monitors to almost every form of insurance.But just because an emotion is strong doesn‘t mean it should be used tomarket everything.The reason is simple. Human beings have three ―primal‖ responses to fear:to fight, to flee, or to be paralyzed into inactivity. And a copywriter doesn‘twant his prospects to do any of those things.In selling investment advice (something I‘ve done a good deal of), fear hassometimes been useful. But I‘ve noticed that if you crank up the fear, youreduce the responsiveness to your ad. A little fear can go a long way whenyou are trying to motivate people to worry about their savings or their jobsecurity, for instance. But you must quickly follow that fear with hope ofsome kind.And that brings us to greed.Proponents of the fear-and-greed approach often argue that the smart thingto do is to follow a fear-based lead with an appeal to the prospect‘s greed.But I have found that if you do that, you wind up attracting the kind ofcustomer you don‘t want: someone who is gullible and greedy.You can‘t build a business by selling to the gullible and greedy. You can makescores, sometimes big scores. But you will never have a sustainablyprofitable business.About six months ago, I had a conversation with a copywriter who‘d hadamazing success with several fear-and-greed promotions. In fact, hiscommissions on all the sales from those campaigns should have come to www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  7. 7. more than a million dollars. I say ―should have,‖ because his clientsdiscovered that many of the buyers brought in by his fear-and-greedpromotions asked for refunds. And those that stayed were not good buyersof their other products.So he made out temporarily, but eventually lost most of his clients.I suggested that he learn to appeal to other emotions. He wasn‘t interested.He just kept on using his credentials to snare new clients… until they, too,experienced the same disappointing results. And now I hear through thegrapevine that he‘s finding it harder and harder to find anyone who will buyhis copy. (By the way, he sent me an e-mail this morning. I haven‘t read ityet. I wonder if he‘s ―seen the light.‖)Greed doesn‘t work because good customers, the kind that will stick withyou and continue to buy from you year after year, don‘t think of themselvesas greedy. They want to be successful. They want to make more money. Butthey don‘t want to be greedy.Here‘s what I want you to take away from this:Use fear as a primary emotion to sell insurance products (which include suchthings as burglar alarms, baby monitors, etc.). For other products, you cantry a little fear… but don‘t go too far with it. Then concentrate on giving yourprospects hope. Hope is far and away a much stronger selling propositionthan fear.And never use greed. Greed-based promotions will only attract customerswho will ruin your business.Let Michael take you by the hand and show you how to tap into the rawpower of human emotion to sell more products and services than ever beforewith the AWAI‘s Accelerated Program for Six-Figure Copywriting. Use thoseskills to sell your own products and services or get paid handsomely forthem by becoming a six-figure copywriter. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  8. 8. How to Enjoy the Writer’s Life Even if You Can’t Write Like a Professional The most productive and, next to JK Rowling, richest writer in the world is James Patterson.If you don‘t know him, he is the author of ―Don‘t Blink‖ and ―The PostcardKillers‖ as well as 48 other best-selling books in the past 10 years.By almost any perspective, Patterson is a hugely successful writer. But hedoesn‘t have the normal gifts that one would typically attribute to writers: abrilliant mind, a passion for his work, etc.Instead, he has a certain set of skills that he employs over and over againand then leverages by hiring apprentice writers to do most of his work forhim.They do 80% of the work, following his directions. Then Patterson edits theirmanuscripts for pace and tension – key elements in narrative fiction.By providing the outline and the editing, Patterson insures that his bookshave the Patterson feel. This is something that any successful MasterCopywriter or Internet guru can do. In fact, I know quite a few well-knowngurus who have junior writers ghost writing their essays. In some casesthese ghostwriters are good, in others no. When they are not good theydegrade the reputation of the guru.But what Patterson does is smarter than that. He gives his apprentice abyline. That makes the transaction more honest and it provides theapprentice with a reward that is much greater than money.Several of my clients – well known financial and health authors – could havebigger businesses if they could produce more copy. But so far they haverefused my suggestions to do so. They don‘t want to use apprentices, theysay, because they don‘t believe anyone can write as well as they can.Another reason – one they don‘t admit – is because they don‘t want to sharethe credit with anyone else. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  9. 9. These are both ego problems. And as you‘ve heard me say many times, egoand laziness are a writer‘s primary vices.Patterson proves that you can maintain quality (such as it is) in yourproduct, continue to promote your name and expand your production inmultiples by using apprentices.By taking advantage of competent researchers and writers who are willing towork for him, Patterson puts out eight or more books a year. And in 2010 hisannual earnings are estimated at $70 million.This essay, though, isn‘t about James Patterson. It‘s about Peter de Jongeand Andrew Gross and Michael Ledwidge*, three of the many researchersand writers who have earned lots of money and in some cases became best-selling authors on their own simply by working as an apprentice to themaster.I‘m talking about aspiring writers who, for whatever reason, never were ableto break through the glass ceiling that keeps more than nine publishedauthors out of ten to sell fewer than 100 copies of the books they write.The opportunity to become an apprentice writer for Patterson at thismoment is limited, but there are hundreds or even thousands of chancesright now to make a very nice six-figure income helping professional writersdo their jobs.I‘m talking about a new profession – one that before the Internet did noteven exist. I‘m talking about becoming an apprentice writer/researcher tothe direct response information business.I‘m talking about a pretty exciting opportunity. It‘s exciting because it‘sbrand new and growing fast, which means the barriers of entering it are verysmall and the rewards are still very great.Let me give you an example.Several years ago Judith Strauss and I wrote and published a little book ofdiction calledWords that Work. It was a selection of words that appeared in www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  10. 10. Early To Rise‘s ―Words to the Wise‖ column that has been running daily foralmost 10 years.At the beginning of this year I wanted to do another edition but, for somereason, Judith was not available to work with me on it. So I reached out toAWAI to find someone to help me.Typically when I call Katie, I‘m looking for a copywriter. But this time Iwanted someone who could do some basic research and compose simplesentences.Finding a skillful copywriter, even when you have Katie Yeakle next door toyou, is not easy. But it‘s a much simpler job to find someone who knows howto track information down and summarize it in simple, concise sentences.I found someone – a retired grant writer and sometime artist who beganworking with me last month. Her job was pretty straightforward. I‘d send herlists of words that I wanted to cover and she‘d look at several dictionarydefinitions and craft one that was the simplest version she could of thevarious iterations.It was a three thousand dollar job and it would have taken her, I figure,about 45 to 60 hours to complete the task. After I had edited a dozen or sowords she understood both what I wanted in terms of a definition and alsomy style of writing, so I could see it was going to be easy for both of us tofinish the job.Her compensation, because we were moving quickly, was going from $50 anhour to $75.In addition we have become language buddies along the way. We send eachother interesting articles on language (including whatever Bob Bly writes)and have fun talking about usage.From this good experience I decided to expand the book from just anothercollection of words that work to something I‘m calling ―One Thousand Wordsto Know Before You Die‖. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  11. 11. My idea is to present one thousand words or terms that comprise much ofthe most important thinking in Western literature from the time of Homer tothe present. Instead of limiting my usage comments to diction and grammar,I‘m going to talk about how these words added to or subtracted from thehistory of knowledge from Greek times to the present.It‘s a more ambitious book to be sure, but it‘s also a book that‘s more fun towrite. My researcher‘s job is pretty much the same, but she‘s having morefun now in helping me select and cull words and in learning about the manyartistic, cultural, political and literary ideas that have shaped the way smartpeople think today.Plus, she‘s also got a bigger assignment now. I upped her compensationfrom $3,000 to $10,000 and I‘m going to give her a percent of sales as well.Her compensation has now gone up to about $100 an hour and it could endup being two or three times that if the book sells well.The point of this anecdote is to introduce you to a new industry that isdeveloping thanks to the explosion of information publishing since theInternet exploded in or around 2000.It‘s a new type of career, one that allows you to enjoy all the fun andchallenge of being a professional writer (and some of the upside incomepotential) without having to have mastered the fine art of fiction orpersuasive writing.I mentioned this idea to Katie and Rebecca several months ago when I waslooking for someone to help me with another book Don Mahoney and I areworking on, a monograph on Barnett Greenberg, an obscure painter whosepersonal collection of works Don and I bought from his family‘s estate.The person we‘ve selected to help us with that book will also be doingresearch and writing sentences, but will not be responsible for shaping thebook or revising it. It‘s pretty much the same thing James Patterson‘sapprentices do, but instead of fiction the subject is biography. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  12. 12. If Don and I make this artist a known and collected name among collector‘sof Jewish art and artifacts (a very lucrative niche market) this person willalso enjoy a big pay check and plenty of perks including (if he wants)appearing on radio and television programs.In the old days (prior to 2000) researchers were drones that got paid littlefor endless work and were never recognized for their hard work. In today‘sworld of information publishing there are tens of thousands of writers andpublishers looking for people who can help them produce the manypublished products that proliferate the internet.Just think about the demand: books, reports, essays, blogs, web content, e-letters, e-magazines, surveys, research reports, scientific studies, marketingstudies, religious writing, non-profit pamphlets, annual reviews, critiques,auto responder series – the list is endless.And thanks to the Internet, the market is growing. According to Google, theWeb has already exceeded 1 trillion unique web pages (it‘s estimated theyindex about 15 billion of those pages for search purposes). There aremillions more pages created daily.If the market for professional writers has increased tenfold since 2,000 thenthe market for Internet Research Specialists has probably increased athousand fold.What does this mean to you?If you‘re thinking about becoming a professional writer but haven‘t yetreached the level of compensation you want, this is the perfect opportunityto make great money as you go.If you would love to live the life of a freelance writer but don‘t have thepatience or talent for it, this is also a great way to do that without masteringthe craft of writing. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  13. 13. One of the biggest future opportunities for Internet Research Specialists is inthe direct marketing industry. Based on sales, direct marketing, as you mayknow, is a $2 trillion industry.It is bigger than traditional Madison Avenue-style advertising, as well asnewspaper advertising.And since 2000 it‘s growing at a rate of 5-7%, making it one of the fastestgrowing markets in the world today.If you read ―Automatic Wealth‖ then you know that the fastest way tobecome rich is to become an essential employee or contract worker for afast-growing business in a fast-growing market. Information publishing isexactly that.Although many of them may not know it now, the easiest way for aprofessional copywriter to double his income is to double his output. Butdoubling your output without diminishing the quality of your work is not easybecause of the enormous demand of research.I‘ve said this a thousand times to AWAI members over the past many years.The most important single aspect of successful writing depends on theproduction of good ideas and the production of good ideas depends almostentirely on good research.That‘s where the opportunity is for those who might want to get involved inthis wonderful new industry.Gradually writers will begin to realize that they, like James Patterson, canmake much more money if they can have apprentices helping them with allthe research. And once they become comfortable using other people to dothe research, they‘ll ask for more (simple sentences) like Don and I aredoing.Eventually, this will mean great, lucrative new careers for thousands or eventens of thousands of smart, capable people who – for whatever reason – www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  14. 14. have decided they want the benefits of the writers life without putting in allthe ―hard‖ work.The job of the Internet Research Specialists will be largely tracking supportand documentation for the claims that professional writers want to make.Again, this is especially true in the area of direct marketing of publishedproducts. As Roy Furr recently pointed out in an essay in The Golden Thread: "Because the average prospect is skeptical, proof is an important part of any letter. People wont believe our claims just because we say so. Unless were established experts, our claims are just opinions."What kind of research are Internet Research Specialists likely to be doing?Collecting and organizing information for:  Media mentions of the client or product  Prestigious publications talking about the product, idea, or industry  Scientific studies to back claims  Scientists opinions related to claims  Charts, graphs, and graphics  Real or implied expert endorsements  Real or implied celebrity endorsements  Quotes from credentialed sources  Process information, or how the product (or ingredient) works  Other highly-specific supporting informationHere‘s what I‘m saying:  There is already a market for Internet Research Specialists  It is likely to be one of the fastest growing markets in the world  By getting in now you can start making $50 an hour  As your skills improve you can easily be making $100 or more in no timeTo get in now at the bottom floor you will need to do two things:Quickly learn how to do quick and helpful research. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  15. 15. Find clients.You can do the first by investing in AWAI‘s new program that teaches that. Itis called Secrets of Becoming an Internet Research Specialist: How to Surfthe Web for Freedom and Profit. It‘s an online program consisting of 13chapters, split into two main parts.The first part — Chapters 1-6 — is all about what to do and how to do it.This is how you go from landing the gig to giving the client exactly what theywant. This is what you do in your everyday life as an Internet ResearchSpecialist.The second part — Chapters 7-13 — is what it takes to get paid. This is howto attract clients, get other people to sell your services for you, and developthe client relationship so theyll come back over and over again.It also includes:  Access to AWAIs exclusive members-only DirectResponseJobs.com Online Job Board. (Recently updated to include Internet Researcher gigs!)  Special reports onHow to Deliver Superior Research by Learning One Crucial SEO Skill…Proof and Credibility: 10 Ways Your Research Can Make Your Client‘s Copy Sizzle… andFive Other Research Projects to Boost Your Income  A 3-part webinar series on marketing yourself as an Internet Research Specialist  A brand-new white paper you can use to market yourself to writers called "Writers: How to Write Faster, Better, and Make More Money While You Do."I wrote the first draft of this essay in 90 minutes (as opposed to severalhours) by writing out the draft and leaving X‘s where I needed facts and www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  16. 16. figures to support my argument. I sent it – as is – to my editor Jason, whocontacted one of the AWAI-trained Internet Research Specialists he has onhis contact list. That person got and finished the job in 24 hours and earnedabout $75 an hour for his efforts.It was good for him. It was good for me. And it can be very good for you ifyou contact AWAI.Find out more about AWAI‘s Internet Research Specialist Program* Peter de Jonge is a former copywriter who spent several years on thePatterson assembly line before writing his first solo novel (Shadows StillRemain).Andrew Gross is president of HEAD Ski and Tennis and co-wrote some of theWomens Murder Club Series with Patterson before signing his own 3-bookdeal with William Morrow in 2005. Are You Honest, Hard Working, and Financially Solvent? If So, Read This – You Won’t Like It, But You Should Read It Now Just about every adult I know is wondering about the economy.MB, who owns a large furniture wholesaling business, is wondering whenconsumers will start shopping again. ―I‘m just treading water now,‖ he says.―But not making any profit. My employees are getting paid, but I‘m not.‖PE, a real estate developer, fled the US after all his hundred million dollardevelopments went bust. Now he‘s building homes in Panama. ―I wonder ifI‘ll ever get back home,‖ he said. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  17. 17. My sister, a high school teacher, has seen many of her friends lose careersdue to budget cutbacks. She wants to know whether we‘re in a ―recovery‖that will protect her job or will things get worse next year?Nobody knows for sure what will happen. But when I‘m not sure about thefuture my rule is hope for the best but plan for the worst.The best we can hope for? A gradually improving economy with full healthrestored in 5 to 7 years.Theworst? A massive, worldwide Great Recession as long and as bad as theGreat Depression.In this essay I hope to do two things. 1. Show you why I believe the worst-case scenario is about 100 times more likely than the best-case one. 2. Give you a three-part plan to survive and prosper.Why Things Are Likely to Get WorseSince the real estate bubble inflated and collapsed trillions of dollars havedisappeared from American households.And millions of Americans – actually tens of millions – are now, for all intentsand purposes, bankrupt.My view of what happened differs a bit from the story you‘ve been told byour government and most economists.Wealth didn‘t magically appear and disappear. What happened was that thegovernment, banks, brokers, and real estate professionals colluded in thebiggest wealth transfer in the history of the world.Wealth (stored assets) shifted from the bank accounts of teachers,plumbers, merchants, and people like you into the bank accounts of bankers,brokers, lawyers, and others who participated in the scam.The wealth I‘m talking about is not the tens of trillions in trumped upproperty values that disappeared. That wealth never really existed. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  18. 18. The money that was cleverly shifted from one large group of people to amuch smaller one consisted of hard-earned savings and now-depletedretirement accounts.A significant portion of that transfer came from fees – the billions andbillions of dollars in fees charged by the bankers, brokers, and lawyers for allthe new and second mortgages, the appraisals, the insurance, the legalvetting, etc.But even more of it came from mortgage payments. While property valueswere falling, millions of Americans did their best to keep up with mortgagepayments, often emptying their bank accounts in a futile attempt tomaintain ―good credit.‖That transfer was probably in excess of a trillion dollars. And it hasn‘tstopped. There are still tens of millions of Americans ―under water‖ who willkeep paying till they can‘t do it any longer. Eventually, they will enter intosettlements that will, essentially, leave them bankrupt.So most Americans are poorer now or will be very soon, while the bankingand brokerage community – protected as it has been by the government – isricher and will become richer still.But that‘s not the entire problem.Our government itself is bankrupt. Its debt far exceeds its assets and thatdebt has been spiraling skyward since the Clinton administration.Whether it was to fight the ―war‖ on terror, finance fraudulent brokeragesand irresponsible banks, the federal government has been taking on debtfaster than at any time in its history. We are talking about tens of trillions ofdollars.And finally there are all the future financial obligations our legislators havevoted in. Financing the baby boomer‘s financial and retirement needs in thenext 20 years will cost additional tens of trillions of dollars. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  19. 19. The total, by any count, is more than a hundred trillion. And one way or theother every single dollar of that must be paid back.Who Will Pay That Back?Not the financial masters of the universe that planned it all… .not the banks,brokers and lawyers that promoted it… and certainly not the government(which never pays back anything).No, these trillions will be paid back by a small percentage of the populationwho have been foolish enough to(a) work hard,(b) start businesses,(c) employ other people,(d) create new products and services,(e) make profits,(f) save those profits and(g) not fall for stupid scams and schemes like the real estate bubble.Those are the people who are going to have to pay back the debt. Therearen‘t many of them. They comprise less than 20% of the population. Butthey will pay back 80% of the remaining debt. That is a 100% certainty.And why will the sins of the 80% be paid for by the 20%?Because no one else can pay it back.Our government can‘t pay it back. It‘s bankrupt. The bankers and brokersand lawyerswon‘tpay it back. They have been ―saved.‖ Eighty percent of thepopulation won‘t be able to pay it back because they don‘t have anything.So it must be paid back by the honest, frugal taxpayers who still havewealth – the middle-class and upper-class Americans who still have assets.If you have assets that means you. It doesn‘t matter whether you are abillionaire or have a net worth of $10,000. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  20. 20. They – the 80% of America that is (or will soon be) bankrupt are comingafter you. And they will have the government and the financial community attheir sides.There are three ways they will come at you: 1. By taxing you more. If you have a good income, they will make you pay more taxes. If you have assets, they will make you pay a higher ―wealth/property‖ taxes on those assets. And they will introduce consumption taxes. 2. They will make create alternative, private taxes on every product or service you purchase. (These private taxes will take the form of increased banking, insurance, transportation, purchasing, and other fees – all tied to regulations meant to ―protect you.‖ 3. They will make your income shrink while your expenses rise, making you ultimately poorer unless you do something radical. This is the primary way they will make you pay back their debt. With many years of stagflation. The economy will be sluggish. Income, on a relative scale, will decrease. And prices will rise. Getting us 20% poorer is really the best and surest way to pay back all the bad debt.If you think this is crazy speculation, do this. Post this now on your calendarfor 2015 and then read it again then. See how crazy it seems then.If you don‘t think I‘m crazy and want to do something to protect yourself,pay close attention to the rest of this message.Recognize that you will not be able to avoid the three-stage assault Ioutlined above.  You will not be able to avoid the extra taxes you will have to pay. If you do try to get fancy with your taxes, you‘ll end up in jail. This is not an avenue worth pursuing.  You‘re not going to avoid paying all the extra ―private taxes‖ on everything you buy from now on. These will all be buried in the fine print. You won‘t find them. And even if you do, you‘ll be required to pay them because the laws that are being written right now to www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  21. 21. ―protect‖ us contain clauses that allow banks and brokerages and so on to pass along the extra costs to their customers.  And finally, you are not going to be able to avoid the effects of stagflation. The value of your cash-based assets (it doesn‘t matter they are in dollars or Euros or what) will diminish. Prices will increase. But your salary will not.But there is something positive you can do. Actually, there are three things: 1. Keep your job. There is a good chance that the business you work for will continue to make payroll cuts in the months and years ahead. That means your income or possibly your job is threatened. The best way to protect your job is to become an invaluable employee. When your boss has to make the tough decisions about who gets cut, who gets cut back, and who stays, you want him to want to keep you. You can do that by becoming an invaluable employee. 2. Put your savings in tangible assets: gold, real estate and, if possible, your own private business. 3. Create additional streams of income. This is the only way you can actually hope to build your wealth during the coming Great Recession. This is the most important of the three solutions.I am a big believer in multiple streams of income. I started working on itabout twenty years ago. At first the streams were mere trickles. Now eachone of them is more than I need. And I have about a dozen of them.That‘s why I‘m not personally worried about the great recession. But if youdon‘t have additional streams of income, you should be.How to Create Extra IncomeIf you have at least a half million in cash, you can create income two ways: 1. You can invest in rental real estate. I‘m doing that now and I‘m getting cash flow of between 5% and 10% on my money. 2. You can invest in quality, dividend-bearing stocks. I suggest you follow Andy Gordons recommendations in the Sound Profits newsletter. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  22. 22. 3. If you dont have a hundred grand to invest, then you really have no choice. To create a viable second stream of income you must start a side business – something you can do evenings and weekends. You could mow lawns or clean windows. But thats hard work for modest pay. The kind of business I recommend is one that (a) doesnt require very much start-up capital, (b) provides you with job satisfaction, and (c) could eventually allow you to quit your day job.That‘s exactly what American Writers & Artists Inc. (or AWAI for short) canhelp you to do.AWAI specializes in helping people create multiple streams of income… allfrom learning just one financially valuable skill. AWAI has more than a dozenopportunities for you to choose from. Opportunities likecopywriting,being an internet researcher or publicist,writing resumes,desktop marketing,self-publishing,writing grantsgraphic designbecoming a travel writer… to name just a few.These opportunities can give you a sizeable second (or third) stream ofincome doing something enjoyable. And more than that, they can beleveraged into building even more opportunities.Let me give you a couple of examples of AWAI members who have done justthis:Ann Kuffner originally became an AWAI member so she could promote herretirement/relaxation development in Belize. But things changed – andchanged dramatically – after she attended her first Bootcamp last year. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  23. 23. While she remains Vice-President of Sales of the Grand Baymendevelopment, she also has become a full-fledged copywriter enjoying hersecond stream of income… ―Earlier this year, I reached one of my primary goals. I landed a significant assignment with a reputable international lifestyle publication. I‘ve already completed and been paid for the job. And, I‘m expecting more follow on work… I would never have come this far, this fast, if not for Bootcamp…‖Member Roy Furr wasn‘t expecting any big changes in his life last year. Heactually liked his job, but he knew he was limited there.Today Roy‘s enjoying a recession-proof income stream and has no ceiling onhow much he can make… "This time last year, I had no clue how my life would be changed when I attended AWAIs FastTrack To Copywriting Success Bootcamp and Job Fair. I was holding on to my full-time job, only dreaming one day Id tell my boss, Adios! Im off to do what I want to do and make myself rich! "I wasnt sure if I was ready, but I invested in Bootcamp anyway and to my surprise (and my former employers) I launched my full- time freelance copywriting business 3 months and 3 days after returning home. "Now I can tell you flat-out: AWAIs Bootcamp was the best investment I could possibly have made in launching my freelance copywriting career.‖Ann and Roy‘s stories are far from unique. They tell typical stories of doorsopening when you put yourself in the fast-paced, high intensity environmentof AWAI‘sFastTrack to Copywriting Success Bootcamp and Job Fair.Bootcamp opens doors by providing master-level training, training packedwith copywriting and marketing secrets.It opens doors by giving you opportunities almost every moment you‘rethere to network with other members and with master copywriters andmarketers who are presenting at Bootcamp. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  24. 24. And the most exciting opportunity of all: AWAI‘sFastTrack to CopywritingSuccess Bootcamp and Job Fair opens doors by letting you meet face-to-facewith representatives from companies at the Job Fair… who are therespecifically to hire new writers. That‘s how Ann and Roy starting buildingtheir second income streams and how you can too.There are many others too. Like Susan Clark. from HawthorneCalifornia… “Last month I made $13,210 from writing copy. I never could have done it without AWAIs FastTrack to Success.‖Or Eric Gelb… "I attended my first Bootcamp last November. The event changed my life. I learned new and essential techniques and skills. I became friends with two copywriters and we brainstorm ideas that help me make money. I landed two clients at the Job Fair. And the best news is within six weeks of Bootcamp, I received $4,350 in fees."This year‘s Bootcamp features an amazing lineup of professionals willing –no make that eager – to share their insights, their lessons, and their secretswith you so you can get started on building your second, third, or fourthincome stream quickly and surely.These are pros like…  Bill Bonner – whose famous International Living letter ran as a control unchallenged for 30 years, and whose Agora Publishing is now one of the largest publishers in the world…  Ted Nicholas – whose copywriting has produced over $5.9 billion in sales for his companies and his clients companies, in industries as wide ranging as candy products to incorporation to marketing to natural health.  Mark Everett Johnson – copy chief for legendary copywriter Eugene Schwartz, his 15-plus year control for a major health provider has generated over 3.3 million paid orders and over $80 million in sales.And, of course, I‘ll be there too. This year I‘m teaching a systematic way towrite million-dollar copy again and again.This is just a glimpse of what you can expect to experience at this year‘sgathering of the greatest minds in direct marketing and copywriting.Perhaps, you will walk away from Bootcamp this year with an experience likeSusie H‘s… "My expectations for Bootcamp were that Id learn loads, get psyched up, be exhausted by the end, and meet plenty of eager www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  25. 25. AWAI members, generous seminar leaders, and Bootcamp coordinators. I was not disappointed in any of those expectations… “What I didn‘t go expecting, even though Ive read these stories myself, was to walk away with a paid assignment from this Bootcamp… but I did! Networking happens, whether you consciously do it or not (unless you talk to absolutely no one while youre there). “Let it take you where it will, because youll be thrilled when it does. And, when you get home and the phone rings the next day with another paid assignment, you can grin, make the deal, then hang up and scream, and jump for joy. Go ahead. Expect it all. It happens."If you want to create an extra stream (or streams) of income for yourself,your opportunity to start begins at the AWAI FastTrack to CopywritingSuccess Bootcamp and Job Fair. It is the best way I know of to do it.It works. It‘s worked for these copywriters you‘ve already heard from. Andit‘s worked for many others who‘ve used it to generate their own incomestreams.Bootcamp opens its doors in just two months. And when those doors open,they will open doors for you… if you‘re willing to take the first steps.Click this link to learn even more about the exciting adventure awaiting youat Bootcamp. And the fulfilling life a second and third income stream canprovide for you.This is a great chance – maybe the best chance you will ever have – to getto the next level of financial success.If youre serious about taking charge of your future, be there!As I said, the most significant thing you can do to protect yourself from whatI predict will be a disintegrating economic environment is to get an extra (ortwo) stream of income. But this is NOT something you should wait to do nextyear. The longer you put it off, the more challenging it will be. There‘s still asignificant opportunity to create a lifelong cash stream if you actimmediately. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  26. 26. The Power of One – One Big IdeaOne of the biggest lessons I have ever learned about writing came very late – in fact, more than twenty years after I wrote my first piece of copy.It happened about a year after I began writing the Early To Rise(ETR). I waslooking over issues Id written that year and noting which ones readers ratedthe highest. Without exception, those achieving the highest scores presenteda single idea.It struck me that readers didnt want to hear everything I had to say about atopic every time I wrote. They were looking for a single, useful suggestion oridea that could make them more successful.That was one of those "aha!" experiences for me.As a reader, I had always most enjoyed stories and essays that tackled onesubject effectively and deeply. As a writer, I sensed my readers felt this waytoo. But it wasnt until I looked at the ETR results that I recognized thepower of a narrow focus in writing.I checked to see if this same phenomenon applied to advertising copy. Ipulled out my box of "best promotions of all time." While not all of themwere on a single topic, most of the very best hit just one idea strongly.It seemed I was on to something. I presented this idea as one "powerfulsecret to publishing success" when Agora had our first company-widemeeting for publishers in France.Bill Bonner reminded me hed learned about the Power of One from the greatadvertising guru David Ogilvy. Ogilvys concept was that every greatpromotion has, at its core, a single, powerful idea that he called "the BigIdea." www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  27. 27. At about that same time, John Forde was rereading the classic 1941 book,"How to Write a Good Advertisement" by Victor Schwab – the manAdvertising Age called the "greatest mail-order copywriter of all time."In that book, Schwab listed his choice for the "Top 100 Headlines." Johnfound that of those 100 top headlines, 90 were driven by single, Big Ideas.Note how instantly clear and engaging these "Big Ideas" are…  "The Secret of Making People Like You"  "Is the Life of a Child Worth $1 to You?"  "To Men Who Want to Quit Work Someday"  "Are You Ever Tongue-Tied at a Party?"  "How a New Discovery Made a Plain Girl Beautiful"  "Who Else Wants a Screen Star Figure?"  "You Can Laugh at Money Worries – If You Follow This Simple Plan"  "When Doctors Feel Rotten This is What They Do"  "How I Improved My Memory in One Evening"  "Discover the Fortune That Lies Hidden In Your Salary"  "How I Made a Fortune with a Fool Idea"  "Have You a Worry Stock?"At ETR, we made this concept a "rule" for writing. The mandate was clear.Write about one thing at a time. One good idea, clearly and convincinglypresented, was better than a dozen so-so ideas strung together.When we obeyed that rule, our essays were stronger. When we ignored it,they were not as powerful as they could have been.Heres an example of the Rule of One as applied to an advertorial taken fromETR:Subject Line: The Easiest Product to Sell OnlineDear Early to Riser,Would you be interested in investing $175 to make $20,727?Thats exactly what Bob Bly just accomplished!See how he did it below… and how easily you could do the same.MaryEllen Tribby,ETR PublisherDear Friend,Theres no product easier to create or sell online… www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  28. 28. … than a simple, straightforward instructional or how-toe-book.Why are e-books the perfect information product to sell on the Internet?  100% profit margin.  No printing costs.  No inventory to store.  Quick and easy to update.  No shipping costs or delays.  Higher perceived value than regular books.  Quick, simple, and inexpensive to produce.My very first e-book has generated $20,727 in sales (so far).My total investment in producing it: just $175.Now, I want to show you how to make huge profits creating and sellingsimple e-books – in my new e-book "Writing E-Books for Fun & Profit."Normally my e-books sell for anywhere from $29 to $79, and later this year,"Writing E-Books for Fun & Profit" will sell for $59.However, to make it affordable for you to get started in e-book publishing,Im letting you have "Writing E-Books for Fun & Profit" for only $19 today –a savings of $40 off the cover price!For more information… or to order on a risk-free 90-day trial basis… justclick here now.Sincerely,Bob BlyP.S. But, I urge you to hurry. This special $40 discount is for alimited timeonly.And once it expires, it may never be repeated again.Let me explain how the Power of One operates here.In the lift letter (signed by MaryEllen Tribby), Bob asks a question and thentells a single sentence story. The question is an inverted promise. The storyvalidates the promise.The sales letter follows. This, too, is a beautifully simple piece of copy. Itleads with a statement that expresses one clear idea: "The easiest way tomake money on the Internet it to market e-books."That statement is supported by a number of bulleted "facts." Then, Bobvalidates the statement by mentioning his own experience.The reader is already sold. Bob makes the sale irresistible with a strong,one-time-only offer.Short, sweet, andsimple. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  29. 29. The Power of One is not only one big, central idea. Its a fully engaging pieceof copy with five necessary elements. Using Bobs example:  One good idea: "Theres no product easier to create or sell online than a simple, straightforward instructional or how-to e-book."  One core emotion: "It is simple! I bet I can do it!"  One captivating story: Told brilliantly in 11 words: ―My very first e- book has generated $20,727 in sales (so far).‖  One single, desirable benefit: "Now, I want to show you how to make huge profits creating and selling simple e-books"  One inevitable response: The only way to get this book for $19 is "click here now." To create blockbuster promotions time after time, you must understand thedifference between good copy and great copy. The Power of One is thedriving force behind great copy.Veteran advertising consultant James Loftus, whos worked with Anheuser-Busch, Holiday Inn, McDonalds, and many other clients, agrees:"Also keep in mind that the more points you try to cover, the less effectiveeach point, and therefore your ad, will be. An effective ad will actually haveonly one central focus, even if you discuss it from two or three perspectives.If your points are too diverse, they compete with each other, and end uppulling the readers attention in separate directions."When challenged with an advertising assignment, most writers conjure listsof features and benefits, then mention as many as possible. Their thinkinggoes, "I wonder which of these benefits will really push the buttons I want?Ill throw them all in. That way if one doesnt work, another one will."This is B-level copywriting. Its not the way to create breakthroughadvertising.The Power of One is commonplace now at Agora… it‘s taught by AWAI… andyou‘ll see that most top copywriters follow it.You can use the Power of One to create your own blockbuster copy. Askyourself: "What is the Big Idea here?" "Is this idea strong enough to capturethe hearts of my customers?" Or "Are my ideas all over the place?"The challenge is to find that one good idea the reader can graspimmediately. And stick to it. So the idea has to be strong, easy tounderstand…and easy to believe. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  30. 30. Put the Power of One to work for you in all your communications. Youll beamazed at how much stronger – and successful – your copy will be.For more breakthrough copywriting tips and tactics check out the AWAIAccelerated Program for Six-Figure Copywriting. Making Omelets, Breaking Eggs and Sexist Ads Katie sent me some of the comments given byGolden Threadreaders of an essay I wrote on ―The Most Interesting Man in the World.‖The ad reminded me of David Ogilvy‘s classic advertisement campaign forHathaway Shirts. It propelled Hathaway from a local company with noreputation at all to the most recognized shirt brand in America.I said that while the Dos Equis ad was in many ways a creative knockoff, itfell short of the Ogilvy classic by failing to make the brand name itself aprominent feature of the commercial.For Ogilvy, the name of the product was critical. It was so important to himthat he put the brand name in almost all of his headlines.One reader, Christine, had this to say: ―While this may have worked for amens shirt in Ogilvy‘s day this present ad "The Most Interesting Man in theWorld" is disgusting and painful to watch.She found it ―offensive to women.‖ Besides the content (a bearded mansurrounded by beautiful women) it suggests, she said, that women don‘tdrink beer when they do.Christine says she would ―go out of (her) way NOT to buy this beer.‖ www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  31. 31. ―Some ads are just too offensive. Copying old ‗Mad Men‘ ads per se withouta few updates is ‗madness.‘ If I were this guys wife and I found this beer inthe fridge, I would throw it out! Lets get 21st century.‖I think it‘s interesting that Christine imagines herself married to ―this guy.‖ Isit possible that the most interesting man in the world got her pulse racing,even though she objects to his image?That‘s the thing about edgy advertising. It offends as many people as itattracts. But does that mean it shouldn‘t be done?It reminds me of the scene from Howard Stern‘s movie, ―Private Parts‖. PigVomit, the network executive who has been trying to get Stern fired, findsout that the ratings for his show have shot sky high, despite his puerile,offensive-to-some humor.―Howard‘s fans,‖ he is told, ―listen to him for two and a half hours.‖―Well what about all the people who hate him?‖ he asks.The researcher looks at his notes, ―People who hate him listen to him for fivehours.‖There is no question that if you want to grab attention, being outrageous isan effective tactic. But the question still needs to be asked: How far shouldyou be willing to go to sell your product?What boundaries, if any, should you be willing to cross? Is it okay to besexist if it sells more beer?Moral issues aside, the criterion for making such a decision has to be theadvertisement‘s effect on sales. Looks like Dos Equis made the rightdecision:According to Dos Equis brand manager Ryan V. Thompson, since Dos Equisintroduced The Most Interesting Man in the World in 2006, sales have shotup significantly every year, leaping 26% since January alone. He recentlytold Austin Carr of FastCompany.com. "Were now the fastest growing beerimport in the country.‖To create breakthrough-advertising campaigns you must be willing to breakthrough convention. You have to be willing to offend some people so long as www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  32. 32. the increase in sales that you stimulate is greater than any loss of businessyou get from the offense.It‘s not that you want to offend anyone. You don‘t. But you recognize that ina world as diverse and opinionated as ours is, some breakthrough ads willoffend.Elsewhere I have explained that the two greatest vices of a marketer arelaziness and egotism. And the two greatest virtues are empathy andcourage.You must be empathetic enough to understand what your core customersthink and feel and believe (their Core Complex). And, then you must havethe courage to use that empathy to create an ad that tells them youunderstand.That, in my view, is what the Dos Equis commercial does. It ―gets‖ guys.And it has the courage to tap into what motivates them most of the time.It‘s not sex, by the way. And it‘s not the objectification of women. It‘s muchmore about a man‘s relationship with other men. Thus, the most interestingman in the world.It reminds me very much of the new viral marketing campaign to sell OldSpice. In that, ex-football player Isaiah Mustafa stands topless, showing offhis six-pack, promising women ―he‘s the man your man could smell like.‖Last time I checked the original ad had attracted 13 million hits.Christine‘s mistake, if I can judge from her short message, was that she lether own feelings and thoughts and beliefs (her own core complex) interferewith her ability to see this ad for what it is.It‘s no more sexist than the Old Spice campaign. It‘s clever. It‘s compelling.And it‘s full of self-referential humor.If Christine thinks this ad is offensive, what must she think of the blue-jeansads that Calvin Klein introduced in 1980. Older readers will remember the15-year-old Brooke Shields telling the world that ―nothing comes betweenme and my Calvins.‖ People were offended by the millions. But the campaignnot only put Calvin Klein on top of the heap, but also virtually created themultibillion-dollar designer jeans market. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  33. 33. There is something else that needs to be understood about this ad. It notreally about attracting women per se, but about becoming more interestingthan other men. Men are very competitive. And in the world of wooingwomen, their desire to compete is at its evolutionary height. The liminal*promise of the ad is a competitive one: to be more interesting than othermen. Yes, the payoff is being surrounded by beautiful women. But the realissue is other men.Marketers of women‘s clothing sometimes make the same mistake. Theyincorrectly believe women dress to impress or entice men, when in fact theydress to impress and entice other women.The point I‘m getting to is this: if you are empathetic enough to reallyunderstand what motivates your core customers at a very basic level, thenyou will be able to create outrageous, breakthrough ads that work.Ask yourself: what is it that my customer really wants?And don‘t be satisfied with the first or second answer that pops in your head.Spend some time thinking or talking about his core emotions. Figure outwhat he desires, what he thinks and what he believes.And finally, don‘t forget about the product. It‘s great to get the attention youwant but you don‘t want to forget the product.Here are some other comments on the essay: “Excellent. Michael Masterson is spot on about the Dos Equis ads. I love the ad but am always left wanting to know what the product is. I had to actually force myself to concentrate on the commercial so I could know what the product is. Further I enjoyed the Golden Thread example. Ive been struggling with that in my writing but with this concise example I now fully understand the Golden Thread.”– Shawn Maus “Excellent. Inspiring and great information!! I will read this article a dozen times and when I get home. I will pull out my AWAI books and start changing my career… with results this time!”– E.Oneill “Excellent. WOW I love those Commercials so that was number one when I saw "SAW" the "GUY" I was compelled to read on and now I understand some more about this business I love but never knew how much until this article.”– Dan Slaughter Jr www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  34. 34. “Excellent. Great article Michael. Makes perfect sense and a very interesting insight into David Ogilvy as well!”– Gus G. “Excellent. What a gift… Thank you Michael!!! There is so much marketing wisdom in this simple article… Thank you for sharing so generously.”– Laurie Attwood “Excellent. Very Interesting and informative. Also reminiscent of Commander Whiteheads beard. ”– Mike Rodriguez “Excellent. What a wonderful and insightful piece! You have written this piece like a good painter that paint work of art you are the masters. The sequence from thought to purchase and how to influence elegantly if there is such a word.”– Avihu KiselsteinYOU‘RE INVITED to continue this discussion with Michael at this year‘s FastTrack to Copywriting Success Bootcamp and Job Fair.Anything else you want to talk to him about? You‘ll have plenty ofopportunities during the 3-day event. Plus, you‘ll have access to Bob Bly,John Forde, Ted Nicholas, Bill Bonner and the dozen other mastercopywriters and marketers who will be there… ready and eager to sharetheir experiences and strategies with you.*Ed Note: In case you‘re curious about the meaning of the word ―liminal‖, itmeans just at the edge of consciousness. It‘s not to be confused with―subliminal,‖ which means just below the threshold of consciousness. The Man in the Hathaway Shirt Have you seen The Most Interesting Man in the World? Im referring to the TV commercials for Dos Equis beer. They star a rugged-looking, silver-haired man who is always surrounded by beautiful women.In one version of the commercial, he arm-wrestles a Third World general andreleases a grizzly bear from a trap. In another, the narrator relates that evenhis enemies list him as their emergency contact and that the police oftenquestion him just because they find him interesting.If you are a student of advertising, you know this is a knockoff of DavidOgilvys famous ad campaign: The Man in the Hathaway Shirt. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  35. 35. If you dont know the history of this ad, you should.In Brief: It was 1951. Ellerton Jette, a shirt maker from Waterville, Mainewanted to grow his little business into a national brand, but he didnt havemuch money. He had heard about the advertising prowess of David Ogilvy.So he booked a meeting with him."I have an advertising budget of only $30,000," he told Ogilvy. "And I knowthats much less than you normally work with. But I believe you can makeme into a big client of yours if you take on the job."If hed stopped there, Ogilvy would have thrown him out of the office. Butthen he said something that sold the great salesman.He said, "If you do take on the job, Mr. Ogilvy, I promise you this. No matterhow big my company gets, I will never fire you. And I will never change aword of your copy."There is a big lesson here. So lets stop for a moment and talk about it.What Ellerton Jette did was a little bit of genius, in my opinion. In two shortsentences, he changed the mind of one of the most powerful men in theworld of advertising. At the same moment, he made himself a very rich man.Not a week goes by when I dont get a letter from a complete stranger whosees me as his David Ogilvy. They are direct and to the point. "I know I canget rich if you help me, Mr. Masterson," they say. "So how about it?"What makes them think I have the time, if not the inclination, to help them?It never even occurs to them to offer me something in return for what theyare asking.Jettes $30,000 budget might have put $3,000 in Ogilvys pocket. Though itwas a paltry sum then and a mere pittance now, at least it was something.But what really cinched the deal was the two promises Jette made.Going into the meeting, Jette knew he had one chance to forge arelationship with Ogilvy. He somehow understood that Ogilvy, as successfulas he was, had two big problems. He worried that his biggest clients wouldwalk away from him. And he hated it when his clients screwed with his copy.So, instead of thinking only of his own goals, Jette took the time to figureout how he could offer Ogilvy something that would be of immense value to www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  36. 36. him. (This, by the way, is one of many lessons I teach in mySpecial Theoryof Automatic Wealth.)When Jette made his two promises, Ogilvy realized that he was talking to abusinessman who would eventually become a partner. He could see thatJette was a man of good faith who would let Ogilvy be in charge of hismarketing. And that he would reward Ogilvy with a lifetime of loyalty.Now, lets get back to the story of the Hathaway shirt ad…After accepting Jettes offer, Ogilvy spent days doing in-depth research onJettes client base. He came up with dozens of ideas. The one he settled onwas a campaign built around the image of a distinguished man in a romanticlocation dressed in a Hathaway shirt. He selected a model that looked likeWilliam Faulkner and booked the first photo shoot.On the way to the shoot, he passed a five and ten cent store where hebought a few cheap eye patches. At the shoot, he asked the model to wearan eye patch for a few shots.The moment he saw the photos with the eye patch, he knew.The Man in the Hathaway Shirt campaign was an instant success. The adswere carried in papers around the country, and were mentioned editorially inTime, Life, and Fortune. Before long, hosts of imitators appeared. Othercompanies ran ads featuring eye patches on babies, dogs… even cows. Acartoon in The New Yorker shows three men looking into the display windowof a shirt store. In the second panel, they are coming out of the store, witheye patches on.Ogilvy got the idea for the patch, he said, from a photo of Ambassador LewisDouglas, who had injured his eye while fishing in England. But he got theidea itself – the idea of this aristocratic man with a romantic life – from theJames Thurber story "The Secret Life of Walter Mitty." (Actually, KennethRoman pointed out inThe King of Madison Avenue, it could have been fromthe secret life of David Ogilvy. As a young executive, Ogilvy was prone towearing capes and bowties while everyone else was in grey flannel suits.)Of course, it wasnt just the eye patch that made the ads work. It was thecombination of the model, the situation he was in, and the copy itself.And the copy was brilliant. Heres the first line of the first ad: www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  37. 37. "The melancholy disciples of Thorstein Veblen would have despised thisshirt."Most readers of the ad had no idea who Thorstein Veblen was. But they gotthe idea. Veblen was some sort of snobby aristocratic. By posing ahandsome, silver-haired model with an eye patch in a Hathaway shirt andputting that line underneath the photo, Ogilvy struck a chord in theAmerican imagination. We all hate aristocrats, but we would like to be one.There was another brilliant thing about the ad. Putting the model in aromantic location gave the pitch a fictional element. It had "story appeal," asOgilvy put it.Ogilvy said he discovered the concept of story appeal in a book by HaroldRudolph, a former ad agency research director. This was the first time,Roman says in his book, "that shirt advertising focused as much on the manwearing the shirt as on the shirt itself."And now, back to The Most Interesting Man in the World…I am a fan of these Dos Equis commercials. I like them both because theyare a salute to David Ogilvy and also because they successfully replicate thekey elements in Ogilvys ads for the Hathaway shirt. They have thehandsome, silver-haired model. They have the eye patch. And they have theanti-aristocrat touch. (The product is beer, after all.)They also have the romance and the story. Each new edition of thecommercial is another episode in this most interesting mans life.They fall short only in one respect. They dont do a great job of equating theproduct with the concept.When I remember a Dos Equis ad, I remember the actors face. I rememberthe pretty girls in the background. Im aware that he is a man that womenfind irresistible. And that when he drinks he drinks… Wait a minute. Whatdoes he drink?Theres the rub.We find out that The Most Interesting Man in the World drinks Dos Equis. Buthe could just as well drink Pabst Blue Ribbon. The creative people behindthis very good ad campaign get a big demerit for that. Ogilvy, on the other www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  38. 38. hand, put the name of the product in the headline. The fact that his manwas wearing a Hathaway shirt was integral to the story.Grabbing the prospects attention with an entertaining story or idea or photois essential for any sort of advertising campaign. But you have to do morethan that. You have to sell the product. And to do that, you must link theinitial sentiment created in the headline with the final emotion needed toclose the sale at the end.In AWAIs copywriting program, I call this "the Golden Thread." Its prettysimple. The product is at one end of the thread. The prospects heart is atthe other end. Every element of the copy must be connected to the productas well as to the prospect. And the connection must be taut. If the threadgoes slack, even for a second, you lose the sale.I will end this essay by saying this: You have just read about half a dozen ofthe most powerful marketing secrets I know. If you put this essay down andforget about it, you will be making a terrible mistake. Read it at least half adozen times and think about it. If it doesnt make you a multi-millionaire, Illeat my shirt. Hathaway, of course. How to Write Well: The World’s Simplest FormulaMy income is based almost entirely on writing. And it has given me a veryrich life – rich in every sense of the word. It can do the same for you.I spend half of my working time coaching writers on how to write better. Ispend the other half writing memos.My memos are almost entirely persuasive: their object is to encourage myclients to make business and marketing decisions that will make them moreprofitable. If I fail to persuade them then my ideas don‘t get tested. If theydon‘t get tested, then I can‘t help them make money. If I can‘t help themmake money, they will stop paying me. To date I have never lost a client. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  39. 39. (Knock on wood.) I attribute my track record to the persuasiveness of mymemos.Over the 30 odd years I‘ve been doing this, I‘ve developed manycomplicated theories about what good writing is. But now I‘ve jettisonedthem all in favor of a very brief, straightforward definition.My definition of good writing applies to every sort of non-fiction writing thatI can think of. It applies to writing books, magazine articles, and direct-mailsales letters. It applies to business correspondence, telemarketing scripts,and speeches.Here it is: Good writing is the skill of expressing compelling thoughts clearly.That‘s it.When I say this to writers, I get incredulous looks. ―How could it be thatsimple?‖ I can hear them thinking.And then I explain. And re-explain. And eventually some of them get it. Andwhen they do, their writing gets much, much better. And their income getsbetter too.Let‘s go over that definition in detail. It has two parts:Compelling Thoughts and Clear ExpressionBy compelling thoughts I mean ideas that make the reader think, ―Boy,that‘s interesting!‖ Or, ―I never thought of that before!‖ Or, ―I‘ve got toremember this!‖Good writing, then, has nothing to do with correctness. It doesn‘t matter ifthe idea you are expressing is well reasoned or even factual. What doesmatter is that your writing engages your readers intellectually andemotionally and then motivates them to do or think what you want them todo or think. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  40. 40. Notice I said intellectually as well as emotionally. I have Don Hauptman, aliving legend in the advertising business, to thank for that additional word.After a speech I made once to a group of 300 writers, he wrote me to saythat I had reiterated a common phrase he objected to: that people buy foremotional reasons. “This lie,” he says, “just invites all the leftist critics of advertising and capitalism to charge that everyone is „manipulated‟ by evildoers who exploit our emotions and irrationality. So we‟re cutting our own throats if we perpetuate the „it‟s all emotion‟ fallacy. I know you don‟t want to encourage that, any more than I do. “FYI, there‟s an old adage that expresses the point of your article another way: „Write the way you talk, if you could edit what you say.‟ DM agency panjandrum Emily Soell once said something like: „Write it square, then add the flair.‟ I‟ve found these tips useful throughout my career.”Don is absolutely correct. Not including the intellect in this discussion isincorrect and potentially harmful. It invites critics of advertising to accusepersuasive writers of pandering. And it encourages writers to believe that ifthey pander, they are writing well.The most successful marketers and copywriters know that good writingrequires that we engage our readers on both plains simultaneously. EzraPound had the same theory about writing poetic images. He called them―emotional and intellectual complexes in an instant of time.‖Creating the Ah-Ha! EffectAnd that is what I mean by a compelling thought: an emotionally andintellectually engaging idea expressed clearly and succinctly so that thereader can apprehend it in a moment of time. That is what provides the ah-ha! effect.Malcolm Gladwell is an expert at this. And that is why he has become amultimillionaire writing books about arcane and academic subjects. Hiscritics naively knock him because they argue that some of his ideas areincorrect. I made that point before: the correctness of the idea is not whatmakes for good writing. It is the effect it has on the intellect and the heart ofthe reader.If you want to be a wealthy marketer, copywriter or businessperson, youmust be able to come up with compelling thoughts. You must be able torecognize ideas that are intellectually and emotionally engaging, ideas that www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  41. 41. arrest and charge up your readers and make them think, ―That‘s good! Inever thought of that before!‖How do you find intellectually and emotionally compelling ideas?In all the years I‘ve been struggling to answer this question, I‘ve found onlyone answer: you must read.Successful writers are all voracious readers. Their ideas don‘t spring fullyformed from the thigh of Zues, they come from hours of reading – readingvertically and horizontally about the subject at hand. They read and readuntil they come across something that gives them theah-ha! experience.I‘d like to tell you there was an easier way. There are some well-knowncopywriting gurus who will tell you that you can steal good ideas from swipefiles taken from successful advertisements past or present. This is horseshit,plain and simple. Stolen ideas are like luxury cars. They lose 40% of theirvalue the moment you take them out of the showroom.The reason that my number one client is the dominant publisher in theinformation publishing industry is precisely because their 100+ writers havehad this definition of good writing drummed into their heads. They know thatthey can‘t expect to write blockbuster promotions consistently withoutcompelling ideas. And they know how to find those ideas.Ask any of them how they come up with all their great ideas and he or shewill tell you: ―I read and read until I find one.‖Where to Place the Compelling ThoughtThe compelling thought must be placed in the lead. It cannot be lingering onpage three or thirty-three. It must be up front so the reader can have hisah-ha! moment before he tosses the copy away.It is the same for writing essays or memos. Put your most compelling ideavery early and your readers (prospects, clients, whatever) will be excited. Ifthey are excited, they will read on with enthusiasm. If not, you will losethem. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  42. 42. If you have the good fortune to discover several compelling ideas, put thebest one first and let the others follow as soon as you can. Don‘t make themistake of ―leaving the best for last.‖ You don‘t have the liberty to do that.Hit ‗em quick and hit hard with your best stuff and spend the rest of theadvertisement/essay/memo proving your points.After you have put your compelling thoughts out there, then it‘s time tomake supporting claims and promises and prove that each one of them isvalid.You must do this because your reader is naturally skeptical. His intelligencerequires him to weed out most of the advice and information he receives. Ifit weren‘t that way we could never get anything done. We‘d be eternally lostjumping from one idea to another. Our brains are hard wired to be skepticalof ideas – and that goes for compelling thoughts as well. The reader‘ssubconscious tells him: ―You have just been seduced by an intellectually andemotionally compelling thought. Before you act on it, make sure it makessense.‖So this is where the good writer elaborates on his compelling thought byproviding compelling proof of it. He knows he must support his ideasrationally by providing proof that they are ―true.‖Truth, of course, comes in many shapes and sizes. And so does proof.The Three Faces of ProofThere is factual proof. There is anecdotal proof. And there is social proof.  Factual proof is easy to come by if your idea has been well researched. Anyone with an Internet connection can find all the factual proof he needs on most any topic if he knows how to do online research. And if you don‘t know how to do it, don‘t worry. AWAI is developing a product that will teach you.  Anecdotal proof includes stories — factual and non-factual — that support an idea by ―showing it‖ instead of ―telling it.‖ Anecdotal proof is very powerful, because it appeals so immediately to the emotions. People are not critical when they are reading a story. Their purpose is to be entertained. This gives you, as the writer, a strong advantage. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  43. 43.  Social proof refers to the influence that other people have on our opinions and behavior. As a writer, a good way to support your ideas with social proof is to use testimonials and expert endorsements.So that‘s how you incorporate ―good thinking‖ into your writing. Now let‘stalk about the second part of my definition of good writing: clarity ofexpression.Clarity of ExpressionBy that I mean the ease with which your readers can ―get‖ your compellingthought and the proof that follows. This is a very important part of thedefinition. It is just as important as the compelling thought.Memorize the following sentence: The easier it is to comprehend, the morelikely it is that your reader will find it to be true.There is a new science called Cognitive Fluency that supports this assertion.Among other things, it studies the effect of simple language on readers.What researchers have found is that a simpler statement has morecredibility than a more complex one — even if they both mean the samething. It appears, the scientists say, that our brains are hardwired to trustsimpler (and familiar) things.New writers don‘t understand this. They operate on the theory that goodwriting is pretty or impressive. They strive to make their copy intellectuallyand emotionally impressive or even intimidating. They have beenmiseducated into believe that complexity is a sign of good thinking. And sothey complicate their writing with complex sentences and arcane diction.This is a big mistake – a mistake that is obviously foolish if you think aboutit for a moment. After all, if you have gone to the trouble of coming up witha really good idea, why would you want to hide it from them with obscurewords and references?The best tool I have found to help writers keep their language clear anduncomplicated is the Flesch-Kincaid Readability Test. The FK (as it is known)looks at the length of your sentences, how many syllables there are in each www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  44. 44. word, and other data. The result is a score that indicates how easy the textis to read. At Early to Rise, our policy is to keep the FK under 7.5 — whichmeans the average seventh-grader should be able to read and understand iteasily.Let me give you an example of what I‘ve been talking about here. Whatfollows is a paragraph by a seasoned financial writer. I had asked him for abrief summary of the ―big idea‖ for his next essay. Here‘s what he sent me: ―Simon Properties is making good on its promise to swallow up the minnows. It‘s buying mall owner Prime Properties for $2.3 billion and not even using up all the cash it‘s been hoarding to take advantage of opportunities in the marketplace. Simon is big and flush with cash. And it‘s doing what big bad companies should be doing… beating up their little brothers, grabbing the best deals out there… getting bigger… and capturing market share from other companies.‖I emailed back, telling him that I could see, by reading between the lines,that he had a good idea in his mind. But he had failed to identify the core ofit. He had failed to turn it into a ―big idea‖ that he could base his essay on.Here‘s what I said in my e-mail: ―You say that Simon Properties is a good buy because it is buying up smaller, cash-starved businesses. This is a sound proposition, but it‘s not a compelling idea. It‘s really just an assertion. To make it emotionally compelling, you have to make it both more universal and more unique. You have to find the idea behind your idea. ―In short, you have to find something that would make your reader sit up and take notice. You have to give him an idea — preferably in a single phrase — that he could repeat that night at a dinner party, something that would launch an interesting discussion. ―For example, you might have said, ‗There are companies — I call them Sharks — that outperform the market by three to one by eating up good profitable companies that are small and easy to ‗eat.‘ ―That is an engaging idea. The reader gets it immediately. He wants to know more. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  45. 45. ―But to make this work, you would need to prove to your reader that, in today‘s market, Sharks are good investments. Only after you have done that will he be interested in your assertion about Simon Properties.‖To help writers understand what I mean by a compelling ideas I ask them towrite their compelling idea on top, above their copy. What I often get inreply is a full paragraph that explains the idea. When I see an entireparagraph above the copy, I know — without even reading it — that thewriter hasn‘t identified a truly compelling idea. And if that paragraphcontains long, complex sentences, then I know he‘s off base.Since recognizing the two key components of good writing — a ―big idea‖and clarity of expression — I‘ve insisted that all essays or promotions givento me for review have at the top of the page a one-sentence explanation ofthe main idea and the FK score.If that one-sentence idea doesn‘t impress me, I send the piece back withoutreading it. I know the writing that I‘m being asked to review is muddled. Andmuddled writing is never good.If the one-sentence idea is good, then I look to another signal that I insiston: that the FK rating is posted just below the one-sentence idea. And if theFK score is above 7.5, it gets rejected too.I reject it because I have found over many years that essays andadvertisements that have high FK scores don‘t get results. I used to thinkthat was because they don‘t get read. That is certainly part of the reason.But now I understand from learning about Congnative Fluency, that it is alsobecause they don‘t get believed.So that is the definition: Good writing is the skill of expressing compellingthoughts clearly. To come up with compelling thoughts you must read untilyou experience an ah-ha! moment. And then you must prove your promisesand claims with clean, simple language – language that scores 7.5 or belowon the FK score. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  46. 46. This discipline has saved me lots of time and has accelerated the learningcurve of every writer who has worked under my direction. I recommend it toyou. Using Daily Task Lists to Accomplish Your GoalsI didn‘t always plan my days. For most of my career, in fact, I didn‘t.I had written goals. And I referred to them regularly. My goals kept mepointed in the right direction, but I was always moving back and forth. Oftenfor no good reason.Driving to work in the morning, I would think about my goals. That helpedmotivate me and often gave me specific ideas about what tasks I shouldaccomplish that day. I‘d walk into work meaning to complete those tasks…but by the end of the day, many of them were not done.What happened? The same thing that may be happening to you right now.You sit down at your desk, and there is a pile of new mail in your inbox. Youpick up the phone, and 15 messages are waiting for you. You open yourcomputer, and find that you‘ve received 50 new e-mails since you lastchecked. You tell yourself that you will get to your important tasks later.Right now, you have to ―clean up‖ all these little emergencies.Before you know it, the day is over and you haven‘t taken a single steptoward achieving your important goals. You make an effort to do something,but you‘re tired. Tomorrow, you tell yourself, you‘ll do better.Does that sound familiar?If so, don‘t feel bad. You‘re in good company. Most people deal with theirwork that way. Even people who set goals and achieve them. Over the longterm, they get everything done. But on a day-to-day basis, they areconstantly frustrated. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  47. 47. Youcanbe successful without planning your days… but you will have to worka lot longer and harder. The reason? When you don‘t plan your days, youend up working for other people – not just for yourself. You feel that beforeyou get to your own work, you should first deal with their requests.Starting your day by clearing out your inbox, voicemail inbox, and e-mailinbox is just plain dumb. Most of what is waiting for you every morning hasnothing to do with your goals and aspirations. It‘s work that other peoplewant you to dofor them.If you want to be the captain of your soul and the master of your future, youhave to be in charge of your time. And the best way to be in charge of yourtime is to structure your day around a task list that you, and only you,create.As I said, simply writing down my goals helped me accomplish a good deal.But my productivity quadrupled when I started managing my schedule witha daily task list. If you use the system I‘m going to recommend, I‘ll bet yousee the same improvement.I have used many standard organizing systems over the years, but wasnever entirely satisfied with any of them. The system I use now is my own –based on the best of what I found elsewhere.At the beginning of the year, I lay out my goals for the next 12 months. Iask myself ―What do I need to achieve in January, February, etc. to keepmyself on track?‖ Then, at the beginning of each month, I lay out my weeklyobjectives. Finally, every day, I create a very specific daily task list.Here’s how I do it…I begin each day the day before.What I mean by that is that I create my daily task list at the end of the priorday. I create Tuesday‘s task list at the end of Monday‘s workday. I createWednesday‘s at the end of Tuesday‘s workday.I begin by reviewing the current day‘s list. I note which tasks I‘ve done andwhich I have failed to do. My new list – the next day‘s task list – begins with www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  48. 48. those uncompleted tasks. I then look at my weekly objectives to see if thereare any other tasks that I want to add. Then I look through my inbox anddecide what to do with what‘s there. I may schedule some of those items forthe following day. Most of them, I schedule for later or trash or redirect tosomeone else.I do all this in pen on a 6‖ x 9‖ pad of lined paper. I divide the papervertically to create columns for the tasks, for the time I estimate it will taketo do each one, and for the actual time it takes me to complete it. I alsocreate a column for tasks I will delegate to my assistant.On most days, I end up with about 20 15-minute to one-hour tasks.Here is a typical daily list.I like doing this by hand, in pen and ink. You may prefer to do it on yourcomputer. The point is to enjoy the process.Because longer tasks tend to be fatiguing, I seldom schedule anything thatwill take more than an hour. If you have a task that will take several hours,break it up into pieces and do it over a few days. It will be easier toaccomplish. Plus, you will probably do a better job because you‘ll be doing itwith more energy and with time to review and revise your work as you go.A typical day for me includes two or three one-hour tasks, three or four half-hour tasks, and a dozen or so 15-minute tasks. The kind of work you do maybe different, but I like that balance. It gives me flexibility. I can match myenergy level throughout the day to my task list.Ideally, you should get all of your important tasks and most of your lessimportant tasks done almost every day. You want to accomplish a lot so youcan achieve your long-term goals as quickly as possible. But you also wantto feel good about yourself at the end of the day.You may find, as I did, that when you begin using this system you will beoverzealous – scheduling more tasks than you can possibly handle. So setrealistic time estimates when you write down your tasks. And double-checkthem at the end of the day by filling in the actual time you spent on eachone. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  49. 49. When you complete a task, scratch it off your list. One task done! On to thenext one!I‘ve been doing this for years, and I still get a little burst of pleasure everytime.Creating each daily task list should take you less than 15 minutes. Thesecret is to work from your weekly objectives – which are based on yourmonthly and yearly goals.This system may not work for you, but I urge you to give it a try. I thinkyou‘ll like it.Before your colleagues, competitors, and coworkers are even sipping theirfirst cup of coffee, you‘ll have figured out everything you need to do that dayto make you healthier, wealthier, and wiser. You‘ll know what to do, you‘llknow what your priorities are, and you‘ll already be thinking about some ofthem. You‘ll not have to worry about forgetting something important. Andyou‘ll have a strong sense of energy and excitement, confident that your dayis going to be a productive one. Heisting Hall of Fame HeadlinesOld-time copywriters like yours truly enjoy a walk down Memory Lane nowand then. We do it for fun, but it can be profitable, too.I‘m talking about rereading the best-known direct-marketing ads of the past.Copy written by such luminaries as Gene Schwartz, Claude Hopkins, andJohn E. Kennedy.It‘s fun to read through these old ads. Looking at them now — with theirdated language and primitive graphics — you might think they could neverwork in today‘s hypercompetitive market. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  50. 50. Yet some of them are still working. And, most of them live on as the armsand legs or blood and bones of many modern ads written by copywriters whounderstand their value.There are many ways to learn from these time-tested ads.One way is simply to read them — over and over again. Maybe even copythem down by hand or say them out loud. I‘m convinced that‘s the only wayto understand all sorts of important but subtle things about good copy —diction, pacing, phrasing, etc.But the best way to learn from them is to analyze them from the inside out.Ask yourself: ―What is going on here beneath the surface? What are thepsychological triggers that are going off in the reader‘s heart and mind as hereads this?‖This is what I call determining the DNA of an ad. If you get the corestructure right, you have a template — invisible to everyone else who looksat the same ad — of what really makes it work.So today, I want to introduce you to that kind of deep structure analysis.And I‘m going to do it by applying it to headlines — the smallest piece of theadvertising puzzle, yet the most powerful.The headline you use has an enormous impact on the effectiveness of yourad. Pick the wrong headline and your response rate could drop by more thanhalf. Select the right headline and you could double or triple response, andeven create an ad which will last for decades.The Best-Known Headline Ever WrittenSeveral years ago, Raphael Marketing compiled a list of 100 of ―the bestprint advertising headlines ever written.‖ As a group, these ads soldhundreds of millions of dollars worth of products and services. (That wouldbe tens of billions of dollars today.)I looked through the list this morning and thought, ―Boy, these are reallygood. I bet I could use some of them right now to improve my clients‘ copy!‖ www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  51. 51. I‘m not talking about copying them verbatim. A word or two or three,maybe. (And for a headline by a living writer, I wouldn‘t even do that.) Butmore than that is just plain dumb, because it doesn‘t work on so manylevels. For one thing, it‘s cheating. And, it makes you a weakermarketer/writer.What I could do, though, is figure out what is going on beneath the surface(determine the DNA of those headlines), and then inject that into my clients‘copy to invigorate it.With that in mind, let‘s take a look at one of the ―top 100‖ headlines. In fact,let‘s look at the headline that came in at number one. It was written in 1925by John Caples for a correspondence course from the U.S. School of Music: They laughed when I sat down at the piano… But when I started to play!This headline instantly conveys all the key elements of a successful ad:  One strong idea  One desirable benefit  One driving emotion  One inevitable solutionIn just 15 words, Caples tells a powerful story. You can see someoneapproaching a piano in a crowded room — perhaps it‘s a dinner party. Youcan see the look of disbelief on people‘s faces as he nears it. When he pullsback his cuffs, a twitter of laughter starts. Before his fingers touch theivories, there is a chorus of abusive cackling.How can you not feel sorry for this guy? Surely you have experienced,sometime in your life, a similar moment of embarrassing derision. (Whohasn‘t?)Imagining this situation, you feel his need for revenge and approval — twoof the deepest and strongest human desires.Now comes the second line — ―But when I started to play…‖ www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com

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