The target level that I am doing is level C.I will be analysing Abigail Edwards’s and Milka Erko’s blogs.I chose these two blogs because they are from different groups.The first one I will be analysing is Abigail Edward’s....
What Went Well: Even Better if:She included reviews of her work. She had added her target levels and targets.She had pictures of her filming with her The levels for each draft + reviews of eachgroup. draft and they aren’t fully completed .She included extra work she did to The blog was in chronological order toimprove her story board and helpful make it easier to navigate.blogs.The blog is clear and easy to read and had Some of her photos are not uploadedsome embedded videos. correctly.She wrote about each assignment and thespelling and grammar was good.
The blog looks nice She and is added presented her own clearly. thoughts on her draft.The I would give theheadings blog a mark ofstand out 17/20.from the Which I think is abackground level B. She included scans of her assessment for each draft.
What went well: Even better if:Shows the changes made throughout. Included more writingLots of photos and embedded videos It showed the level of each draftabout the planning separately than on the scans of the teachers assessment.Extra work about camera shots Pictures of the story boards and planning were more clearer.Shows teachers feed back. The assignment posts were in order.Shows time table of when their group metup.
No introduction about what the Includes slideshows. slideshow shows.Has teacherassessmentsfor eachdraft. Overall i would give this a 16/20. So a grade B. Nice background.
Similarities and differences:• They were both similar in that they both had a good amount of picturesand slideshows.•However, I think Abigail had more explanations of her work rather thanonly pictures and also she used the blog like a normal blog.•Milka’s blog had the same amount of photos but with less or even nointroductions and explanations of her work. She did post more extra work.•Both the blogs werent in chronological order which would have made iteasier to navigate and understand the changes.