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Poetry
Futility
Learning Objectives
We are learning to...
• Understand how imagery can be used to create
  and emphasise meaning in a poem
• Explain how imagery can convey
  feelings/attitudes about conflict


S4L: Commitment to success
Futility
1. The quality of having no useful result;
  uselessness.
2. Lack of importance or purpose; frivolousness.
Futility (made into a haunting song
with WWI footage)


Futility (read by Kenneth Branagh)
30 second pair share– what’s
        happening?
Look closely at the images created
Draw the images created (quickly!) and annotate
 them to show the meaning conveyed.
What you need to do to do well
Skilled      1.Draw the images created with
annotation     consideration of those created by the
will....       poet
             2.Explain how the poet uses imagery to
               comment on conflict
Excellent    1.Create a sophisticated depiction of
Writing        the images created by the poet
will         2.Commentary develops precise,
               perceptive identification of imagery
  FOCUS!       and how this conveys the poet’s ideas
   Only 8      about conflict.
   mins
The use of imagery is of the
                 sun as benevolent and a life
                  giver. The adjective ‘kind’
                 amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’
                      and warm emotions.
‘kind old sun’     Similarly, the term ‘old’,
                    although being literally
                 true, also could be seen as a
                   term of affection. It also
                     conveys a sense of the
                   wisdom of the ‘ old sun’
                   particularly as the sun is
                      then seen to ‘know’.
The use of imagery is of the
                 sun as benevolent and a life
                  giver. The adjective ‘kind’
                 amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’
                       and warm emotions.
‘kind old sun’      Similarly, the term ‘old’,
                     although being literally
                 true, also could be seen as a
                    term of affection. It also
                      conveys a sense of the
                    wisdom of the ‘ old sun’
                   particularly as the sun is
                    then seen to ‘know’. The
                  sun is personified and this
                  could be seen to make the
                   sun feel some pity for the
                 soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could
                    show pity for the soldier
                  and, sensing the futility of
                 the war, will use this pity to
                      bestow life upon him.
What you need to do to do well
Skilled      1.Draw the images created with
annotation     consideration of those created by the
will....       poet
             2.Explain how the poet uses imagery to
               comment on conflict
Excellent    1.Create a sophisticated depiction of
Writing        the images created by the poet
will         2.Commentary develops precise,
               perceptive identification of imagery
  FOCUS!       and how this conveys the poet’s ideas
   Only 8      about conflict.
   mins
Images?                    Are these the same all the
                                 way through?
                           Does the imagery change?
‘Sun’
‘snow’
‘kind old sun’                        Can you spot any
‘seeds’                              contrasting images?
                                  If so, what does this do?
‘clay of a cold star’
‘Fatuous sunbeams toil’
‘Earth’s sleep’           Annotate the links now and
                           explain how they amplify
                          the meaning put forward by
                                    Owen.
‘kind old sun’   The use of imagery is of the
                 sun as benevolent and a life
                  giver. The adjective ‘kind’
                 amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’
                       and warm emotions.
                    Similarly, the term ‘old’,
                     although being literally
                 true, also could be seen as a
                    term of affection. It also
                      conveys a sense of the
                    wisdom of the ‘ old sun’
                   particularly as the sun is
                    then seen to ‘know’. The
                  sun is personified and this
                  could be seen to make the
                   sun feel some pity for the
                 soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could
                    show pity for the soldier
                  and, sensing the futility of
                 the war, will use this pity to
                      bestow life upon him.
‘kind old sun’   The use of imagery is of the
                 sun as benevolent and a life
                  giver. The adjective ‘kind’
                 amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’
                       and warm emotions.
                    Similarly, the term ‘old’,
                     although being literally
                 true, also could be seen as a
                    term of affection. It also
                      conveys a sense of the
                    wisdom of the ‘ old sun’
                   particularly as the sun is
                    then seen to ‘know’. The
                  sun is personified and this
                  could be seen to make the
                   sun feel some pity for the
                 soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could
                    show pity for the soldier
                  and, sensing the futility of
                 the war, will use this pity to
                      bestow life upon him.
‘kind old sun’          The use of imagery is of the
                        sun as benevolent and a life
                          giver. The adjective ‘kind’
                        amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’
                             and warm emotions.
                              Similarly, the term
                             ‘old’, although being
                         literally true, also could be
                         seen as a term of affection.
                          It also conveys a sense of
                        the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’
                           particularly as the sun is
                           then seen to ‘know’. The
‘clay of a cold star’    sun is personified and this
                          could be seen to make the
                          sun feel some pity for the
                        soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could
                           show pity for the soldier
                         and, sensing the futility of
                        the war, will use this pity to
                            bestow life upon him.
‘kind old sun’           The use of imagery is of the
                            sun as benevolent and a life
                              giver. The adjective ‘kind’
                            amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’
                                 and warm emotions.
                                  Similarly, the term
                                 ‘old’, although being
                             literally true, also could be
                             seen as a term of affection.
                              It also conveys a sense of
                            the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’
                               particularly as the sun is
                               then seen to ‘know’. The
    ‘clay of a cold star’    sun is personified and this
                              could be seen to make the
(I’m limited to               sun feel some pity for the
Google images, you          soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could
can create a much              show pity for the soldier
better cold star!)           and, sensing the futility of
                            the war, will use this pity to
                                bestow life upon him.
‘kind old sun’                                          The use of imagery is of the
                                                           sun as benevolent and a life
                                                            giver. The adjective ‘kind’
                                                           amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’
                                                                 and warm emotions.
                                                              Similarly, the term ‘old’,
                             The ‘clay of the cold star’       although being literally
                            contrasts with the image       true, also could be seen as a
                             of the ‘kind old sun’ and        term of affection. It also
                                                                conveys a sense of the
                              bitterly undercuts the
                                                              wisdom of the ‘ old sun’
                             sentiments conveyed in          particularly as the sun is
                                the first stanza as it        then seen to ‘know’. The
                              suggests an emotional         sun is personified and this
    ‘clay of a cold star’      coldness. This image         could be seen to make the
(I’m limited to              recognises the power of         sun feel some pity for the
Google images, you          the Sun to create life, but    soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could
can create a much                also amplifies the           show pity for the soldier
better cold star!)           pointlessness of life that     and, sensing the futility of
                                                           the war, will use this pity to
                            is squandered in conflict.
                                                                bestow life upon him.
• fat·u·ous
adj. Foolish or silly, especially in a smug or self-
  satisfied way.

Does this contrast with ‘kind old sun’?

What does this do?
What you need to do to do well
Skilled      1.Identify at least 2 links between the
annotation     images created
will....     2.Explain how this contributes to
               meaning

Excellent    1.Identify an increasing range of links
Writing        between images
will         2.Explain with precision, perceptive
               identification of imagery and how
  FOCUS!       this changes the meaning in the
   Only 6      poem
   mins
Move him into the sun -
 Gently its touch awoke him once,
 At home, whispering of fields unsown.
 Always it woke him, even in France,
 Until this morning and this snow.
 If anything might rouse him now
 The kind old sun will know.

Think how it wakes the seeds, -
 Woke, once, the clays of a cold star.
 Are limbs, so dear-achieved, are sides,
 Full-nerved, - still warm, - too hard to stir?
 Was it for this the clay grew tall?
 - O what made fatuous sunbeams toil
 To break earth's sleep at all?
What’s missing in this poem?
            Think – pair – share
The poem is about the harsh brutality and
 violence of war.
Do the images in this poem show this?
Does this make this more or less effective as a
 poem?

    (There’s no right or wrong – it’s what you think)
How is Conflict presented in this poem?
 Write a paragraph that responds to this question.
What you need to do to do well
Skilled             1.Explain the feelings/attitudes/ ideas
annotation            the poet is considering in his
will....              presentation of conflict
                    2.Comment on how the poet used
                      imagery to comment on conflict
Excellent           1.Have a detailed explanation, with
Writing               appropriate terminology, of how the
will                  poet’s attitudes are conveys
                    2.Comments begin to develop precise,
                      perceptive identification of how the
 Obviously – have
    quotes!!!
                      poet uses imagery to show ideas
                      about conflict.
Homework
• Research Poppies
• Come to the lesson on Monday with your poem
  fully annotated and be able to teach your peers
  about it.

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Futility

  • 2. Learning Objectives We are learning to... • Understand how imagery can be used to create and emphasise meaning in a poem • Explain how imagery can convey feelings/attitudes about conflict S4L: Commitment to success
  • 3.
  • 4. Futility 1. The quality of having no useful result; uselessness. 2. Lack of importance or purpose; frivolousness.
  • 5. Futility (made into a haunting song with WWI footage) Futility (read by Kenneth Branagh)
  • 6. 30 second pair share– what’s happening?
  • 7. Look closely at the images created Draw the images created (quickly!) and annotate them to show the meaning conveyed.
  • 8. What you need to do to do well Skilled 1.Draw the images created with annotation consideration of those created by the will.... poet 2.Explain how the poet uses imagery to comment on conflict Excellent 1.Create a sophisticated depiction of Writing the images created by the poet will 2.Commentary develops precise, perceptive identification of imagery FOCUS! and how this conveys the poet’s ideas Only 8 about conflict. mins
  • 9. The use of imagery is of the sun as benevolent and a life giver. The adjective ‘kind’ amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’ and warm emotions. ‘kind old sun’ Similarly, the term ‘old’, although being literally true, also could be seen as a term of affection. It also conveys a sense of the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’ particularly as the sun is then seen to ‘know’.
  • 10. The use of imagery is of the sun as benevolent and a life giver. The adjective ‘kind’ amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’ and warm emotions. ‘kind old sun’ Similarly, the term ‘old’, although being literally true, also could be seen as a term of affection. It also conveys a sense of the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’ particularly as the sun is then seen to ‘know’. The sun is personified and this could be seen to make the sun feel some pity for the soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could show pity for the soldier and, sensing the futility of the war, will use this pity to bestow life upon him.
  • 11. What you need to do to do well Skilled 1.Draw the images created with annotation consideration of those created by the will.... poet 2.Explain how the poet uses imagery to comment on conflict Excellent 1.Create a sophisticated depiction of Writing the images created by the poet will 2.Commentary develops precise, perceptive identification of imagery FOCUS! and how this conveys the poet’s ideas Only 8 about conflict. mins
  • 12. Images? Are these the same all the way through? Does the imagery change? ‘Sun’ ‘snow’ ‘kind old sun’ Can you spot any ‘seeds’ contrasting images? If so, what does this do? ‘clay of a cold star’ ‘Fatuous sunbeams toil’ ‘Earth’s sleep’ Annotate the links now and explain how they amplify the meaning put forward by Owen.
  • 13. ‘kind old sun’ The use of imagery is of the sun as benevolent and a life giver. The adjective ‘kind’ amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’ and warm emotions. Similarly, the term ‘old’, although being literally true, also could be seen as a term of affection. It also conveys a sense of the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’ particularly as the sun is then seen to ‘know’. The sun is personified and this could be seen to make the sun feel some pity for the soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could show pity for the soldier and, sensing the futility of the war, will use this pity to bestow life upon him.
  • 14. ‘kind old sun’ The use of imagery is of the sun as benevolent and a life giver. The adjective ‘kind’ amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’ and warm emotions. Similarly, the term ‘old’, although being literally true, also could be seen as a term of affection. It also conveys a sense of the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’ particularly as the sun is then seen to ‘know’. The sun is personified and this could be seen to make the sun feel some pity for the soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could show pity for the soldier and, sensing the futility of the war, will use this pity to bestow life upon him.
  • 15. ‘kind old sun’ The use of imagery is of the sun as benevolent and a life giver. The adjective ‘kind’ amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’ and warm emotions. Similarly, the term ‘old’, although being literally true, also could be seen as a term of affection. It also conveys a sense of the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’ particularly as the sun is then seen to ‘know’. The ‘clay of a cold star’ sun is personified and this could be seen to make the sun feel some pity for the soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could show pity for the soldier and, sensing the futility of the war, will use this pity to bestow life upon him.
  • 16. ‘kind old sun’ The use of imagery is of the sun as benevolent and a life giver. The adjective ‘kind’ amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’ and warm emotions. Similarly, the term ‘old’, although being literally true, also could be seen as a term of affection. It also conveys a sense of the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’ particularly as the sun is then seen to ‘know’. The ‘clay of a cold star’ sun is personified and this could be seen to make the (I’m limited to sun feel some pity for the Google images, you soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could can create a much show pity for the soldier better cold star!) and, sensing the futility of the war, will use this pity to bestow life upon him.
  • 17. ‘kind old sun’ The use of imagery is of the sun as benevolent and a life giver. The adjective ‘kind’ amplifies the sun is ‘gentle’ and warm emotions. Similarly, the term ‘old’, The ‘clay of the cold star’ although being literally contrasts with the image true, also could be seen as a of the ‘kind old sun’ and term of affection. It also conveys a sense of the bitterly undercuts the wisdom of the ‘ old sun’ sentiments conveyed in particularly as the sun is the first stanza as it then seen to ‘know’. The suggests an emotional sun is personified and this ‘clay of a cold star’ coldness. This image could be seen to make the (I’m limited to recognises the power of sun feel some pity for the Google images, you the Sun to create life, but soldier, the ‘kind’ sun could can create a much also amplifies the show pity for the soldier better cold star!) pointlessness of life that and, sensing the futility of the war, will use this pity to is squandered in conflict. bestow life upon him.
  • 18. • fat·u·ous adj. Foolish or silly, especially in a smug or self- satisfied way. Does this contrast with ‘kind old sun’? What does this do?
  • 19. What you need to do to do well Skilled 1.Identify at least 2 links between the annotation images created will.... 2.Explain how this contributes to meaning Excellent 1.Identify an increasing range of links Writing between images will 2.Explain with precision, perceptive identification of imagery and how FOCUS! this changes the meaning in the Only 6 poem mins
  • 20. Move him into the sun - Gently its touch awoke him once, At home, whispering of fields unsown. Always it woke him, even in France, Until this morning and this snow. If anything might rouse him now The kind old sun will know. Think how it wakes the seeds, - Woke, once, the clays of a cold star. Are limbs, so dear-achieved, are sides, Full-nerved, - still warm, - too hard to stir? Was it for this the clay grew tall? - O what made fatuous sunbeams toil To break earth's sleep at all?
  • 21. What’s missing in this poem? Think – pair – share The poem is about the harsh brutality and violence of war. Do the images in this poem show this? Does this make this more or less effective as a poem? (There’s no right or wrong – it’s what you think)
  • 22. How is Conflict presented in this poem? Write a paragraph that responds to this question.
  • 23. What you need to do to do well Skilled 1.Explain the feelings/attitudes/ ideas annotation the poet is considering in his will.... presentation of conflict 2.Comment on how the poet used imagery to comment on conflict Excellent 1.Have a detailed explanation, with Writing appropriate terminology, of how the will poet’s attitudes are conveys 2.Comments begin to develop precise, perceptive identification of how the Obviously – have quotes!!! poet uses imagery to show ideas about conflict.
  • 24. Homework • Research Poppies • Come to the lesson on Monday with your poem fully annotated and be able to teach your peers about it.