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Ban Boring SentencesVCOPS to the rescue!
The cat went along the wall.
Let’s get our VCOP skills workingto save us from the boredom of        boring sentences!
The cat went along the wall.        Vocabulary adds adjectives        to describe and changes dull        words for intere...
The fluffy ginger cat prowledalong the red brick wall.                 Connectives                 add more detail or     ...
The fluffy ginger cat prowledalong the red brick wall becausehe was spying on a juicy bird.                         The In...
Whilst licking his lips, the fluffy gingercat prowled along the red brick wallbecause he was spying on a juicy bird.      ...
Look at how our VCOPS skills improved the sentence        The cat went along the wall.Is now ...Whilst licking his lips, t...
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  1. 1. Ban Boring SentencesVCOPS to the rescue!
  2. 2. The cat went along the wall.
  3. 3. Let’s get our VCOP skills workingto save us from the boredom of boring sentences!
  4. 4. The cat went along the wall. Vocabulary adds adjectives to describe and changes dull words for interesting alternatives!The fluffy ginger cat prowledalong the red brick wall.
  5. 5. The fluffy ginger cat prowledalong the red brick wall. Connectives add more detail or action to the sentence.The fluffy ginger cat prowledalong the red brick wall becausehe was spying on a juicy bird.
  6. 6. The fluffy ginger cat prowledalong the red brick wall becausehe was spying on a juicy bird. The Incredible Opener changes the beginning of the sentence to grab your reader’s attention!Whilst licking his lips, the fluffy ginger cat prowled alongthe red brick wall because he was spying on a juicy bird.
  7. 7. Whilst licking his lips, the fluffy gingercat prowled along the red brick wallbecause he was spying on a juicy bird. Using different punctuation makes an impact! Whilst licking his lips, the fluffy ginger cat (who had sharp teeth) prowled along the red brick wall because he was spying on a juicy bird!
  8. 8. Look at how our VCOPS skills improved the sentence The cat went along the wall.Is now ...Whilst licking his lips, the fluffyginger cat (who had sharp teeth)prowled along the red brick wallbecause he was spying on a juicy bird! Using VCOP is GREAT! What a wonderful way to improve our writing!
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