1. Sv g ae
ain Fc:
P l nsS a g s Pe R v w
o ees t t ie in er eie s
it re
P l nsS a g s Pe R v w
o ees t t ie in er eie s
it re
Mgn . M e
ea K iz
ODU
2. N gttgh
eoia t
in e
G aut
r a
d e
Eprne
xe c
ie
G aut
r a
d e
Eprne
xe c
ie Editing.
Pe r ie f c n a a
ere wu t s s
v n io
f e het in atit
a t a n gc y
c r e iv
(T )
FA:
scln po s nl
oiaad rf s a
e io
3. W ais ae
ht “Fc”?
• “Fc ish pb sl ae ht vrmme wn t cimo h sl ( rw ad
ae t ul e- g t ee e br at o l f ime” Bo n n
e ic f im a y s a r f
Lv sn 1
eino 6)
• “T e eoia d ul img, mt l g n d ah t r y a ic atin cm uicte
h ngtt pb
e ic ae u a r t ec oh b pr ipn a o mn a
ul a e
y e t s iv
eet( cln 5.
vn Soo 4)
” l
• “Smt ght e oioa inet , ad hta b l t a t e, o ehne, ad
o e in t is m tnl vs d n t cn eo , min ind r nacd n
h a ly e a s a
msb cnt t aedd o in r tn ( rw ad eino 6)
ut e os ny t ne t in t a io” Bo n n Lv sn 6.
al t ec
4. P l nsSs m
o ees y e s
it t
“Ie e oaP l nsad o e R n n Szne cln
n r r nlo ees n P wr o ad uan Soo
tp s it ”: l
• “Ie e oaP l nsad o e R n n Szne cln
n r r nlo ees n P wr o ad uan Soo
tp s it ”: l
• I n y osutn it a
d t cnt c wh
e it r io in
pr u rit tn e r ind
a icl su io dt m e
t a a e
b p wr is nead
y o e d t c, n
, a
wigt f p sio.
e h o imoitn
• T r cm o p l ns
he o m n o ees
e it
s t s e r c, sla y
y e : df e e o r ,
sm en id it
ad ie r a
n h rc l
a h.
5. P l nsin er eie
o ees Pe R v w
it
“C ml etad o ees Pe r ie T x ”: D na
o p n n P l nsin ere w et on
im s it - v s
J no
o sn
h
“C ml etad o ees Pe r ie T x ”: D na
o p n n P l nsin ere w et on
im s it - v s
J no
o sn
h
• “T e t pr nl liosip e en h
h in re oara nh bt e t
e s et w e
r ie e ad h r ie e sog inune hw
e wrn t e wd t nl fecs o
v e v r y l
aeie is rt ” ( 1.
r w w e 5)
v it n
• D t c is cn af tr h c srh r ie e
is ne a et l c : t l e t e wr
a r ao e o e v
t t w e t m r l lt teie e isory
o h r r h oeik yh r wr t e
e it , e e a v l
o cml etad o e et e in riqe
n o p n n p l gs r c u.
im s it u s it
• “Ie e oaga in rin bcm jts
n r r nlol w g eo eu a
tp s s it s
imot ts se o sbt te ot t( 1.
p r n a is s fus n cn n 5)
a u a iv e”
• T u, t cml et eo e ao l aeal
hs h o p n bcms tot t nb s
e im h e
clausoc iqe n aohr wrwil
oege t r u oe nt ’s ok he
l it e
min in g p siv r p r
a t in a oite a ot
a p .
6. CsS d
a ty
e u
* A t lt etN t ic r
c aS dn o P t e
u u s ud
Ia a s d ino in f rr ut s dn , oe a
n cs t y vl go g da t et n my
eu v u a eu s
wnst wy t pr nlya ic inune t ir
it sh a in re oadnm s fecsh
e e e s l e
r p ne. T e eie seelae s wic s dn
e oss h r w r apt r in h h t et
s v v tn u s
epese- ob ad er a n s mas fo ein
xr sl utn dpe t a a en o sfn g
s f d c io t
t m r c iclseto t irep ne
h oe r aa c fh r os.
e it p s e s
7. Pio t t R v wIrdcoy
r ro h eie : n outr
e t
C m et
o mns
• S dn A “T ak o omc f t in t t e o
t et : hn yu
u s uho a gh im t
rk e
t t s ghog m nt ”
r o l t uh y oe
y o r s
• S dn B“W lo bt r ro wr t is ht
t et :
u e f e e o f os h waI
lr t r e is
hv… Pro t uf il t oy th bg n g
ae a n h n mia h rat einin,
d e a re e
bt o e l Ixl itl r eog, ad nt
u hpfl ep in c ay nuh n ifo I
uy a el
ne t ko t to .”
ed o nwh to
a
• S dn C “Al h l ie, I ad g y rt it
t et : ligta s'm din m da wh
u r , d f
t g a srut c, bt s p cn bat wr
h r t te c ne u Iiml a't ero ok
e ee l a y
o itnm r tdy Io e hth s ghog m
n ay oe o a… hp t t l t uh y
a eo r
ppr n topin l
ae is'to a f.”
u
• S dn D “I il r wr yu lt is V R ruh
t et : wl e a o a h a E Y og
u p- n l is
,
da ad aof la a itee iv”
rtn Il e Im b r t e
f s e p it
8. a T I T GcIQU
N IP I R I E
CA N T
• B ako l g ghir ae a fwdt
y cnw din t ppr r l e, h
e e s ea e
s dn p s a hml ko l gb , ad
t et oe s u b , nw dal n
u s e e e
vl r l
ue b.
n ae
• A inprpia r p ne oay n o
n apo rt e os t n oe f
e s
t s p s wu b t s t ueu oa
h e ot ol e o te nqivcl
e s d a ly
t th r ie e ws or t hr rinl
h t e we a cr cin e oig a
a e v e
cim hth ppr a fwd
l t t ae wsl e.
a a e a
• “Ld s a eotodc a t d t c
aie”: n frt er s h is ne
f ee e a
bten h pr ipn b iml gh
e e t a ic at y p in t
w e t s y e
s dn a pro a idn ialg u.
t et r a fn et b r p
u se t if e o
• Sc cm etdm nt t ino e et
uh o mn e osa vl mn
s re v ,
c a g prl p sio f t r ie e
r t a a lloitno h e wr
e in ae re v ,
mk g e apals oetl r t in
ain hrper sp t iat e e g
e n h an
t t w e fe
oh r r a .
e it ’s c
9. “Op nlAsn et
t a s mn
io ” ig
• S dn epes r it eo t ohr
t et xr g t d f h t s
u s s au r e e’
pr iptnp s rg shuh h
a ic a , ot in a t g t
t io u o e
a igmn ws n p nlc it
s n et a a o t aat y
s io iv .
• A ko l gs e h o imoitn
cnw de wigt f p sio.
e
• S dn r w e h a igmn in e s f
t et e r t s n et t m o
u s - it e s r
clglxhnet r y c a gh
oeiaecag, h e inr s t
l eb e in e
l lo d f oe o hta d n dt e
ik iho o m r spis t ad e il
e ic e ad
r p ne.
e oss
s
• T e ereie isc t a a u a
h pe r w s ip d s mt l
v re uly
ar d p n nevr e en a e ad
g e uo edao bt e vl d n
e w u
r pc drns
e et f d.
s e ie
10. “T is G et u
h is r , bt
a ...”
• Pt r: FA a sfnd it cml et
ae T s r o ee wh o p n
tn e t im s
r a in t wra a hl a wl se-
e r gh ok s wo , s e a sl
gd e e l f
dpea n n b m.
er t ad l e
c io a
• “G o nw bd e s ain”
o d e s a nw pirg
/
• S dn C r p ne oA “Ie e br a
t et ’se os t : r me d
u s m e
b le hto hd c pe yu oig a
it t t yu a s apd or rinl
a a r
apoc, s f ge y o mn
prah o o iv m cm et
r s
r e nin t po oasek I
e r c gh rp s pa…
fe e l
pr u r l t e pa o t
a icll ik h mhs n h
t ay e e is e
iniv ul d xe ne S dn Csn
d ida e epr c...” t et igs
iz ie u
t p s“aa o yu wr
h ot f for ok
e n .”
• S dn B “Iel t k o’r a d in
t et : r l h yue r o g
u a in
y e
smt g e in r tg H p [ h
o e in vr t e in! o e t
h y es e
f dakhl ”
e bc] e s
e p
11. D min wh
a n g it
G et r e
r Pa
a is
D n Bl e sget “T e oe a n gh
iae e hrugs, h m r dmin t
c s e
in ne c icmt m r et vgn t
t dd r is , h oe x aaath
e it e r e
pe trpae il e ( 4)
r a y r wl ” 17.
fo is b
S dn A
t et :
u
“I in yue f o n wsm s r
t k o'r o t a a eo e t t
h f a
hr
e !...Ovrl t k o'r o t rh t c,
e e lI in yue n h igtr k
a h
, e a
jt ab wro yu t nitn bten
u mye ok n orr sios e e
s a w
sn ne ad r a g ps A f a yu
et cs n/ pr r h… sa s or
e o aa r
tp -I in yu e o a o m e f a rl
o ic t k o'v gt gl in o mt ia
h d e
t wrwhbt l wh y ae a wl
o ok it u - ik it m pprs e
, e l
-yu ed ojthoe or al
o ne t sco s yu bt s
u te
cr uy n mk sr yu ic t bso t -
a flad ae ue o p kh et fh
el e - - e
bso p in t e c a o!”
et fo t o l idt n
s u e
12. G o N w Bd e s
od e s a N w
/
• S dn B“W w t is mitu ad
t et :
u o … h a bios n
is
imr seI e o yu r t in t ad o
pe iv. l hw o a r go d t
s ik ey
t t oe ahr M olt uh is
h h r icle . y n h gt
e e t e y o
mye e ed b m r o a in oa t
ab w ne a it oe f n t so
r
wyh is nee o hlut g e r
h t a edd r e f h bf e
is p l in o
yuu p .”
o j in
m
• S dn C “Lv t imgr bto oe
t et : oe h ae , u yu fr
u e y f
toaa g s th ed fah fh lt
w nl ie at n o ec o t a
o e es
tosn ne.”
w et cs
e
• Ec r ie e cnl e t ireie wh
ah e wroc dsh r w it
v u e v
s il sn et p in go a syo
ima et n , o t twr t s
r im s in d p
ad r mr r rwh ofec, t n
n g m ae os it cn ne h
a r id e
r r sghtriqe it t cim ht
e e in t c u wh h l t
ds a it ea a
t da so s rm e
h rthw po is.
e f
13. “I Sr I J t e
’m uet u M...”
’s s
D inhd is ne
im ise D t c
a
S dn B oS dn C
t et t t et :
u u
“Iantl in n wyht y r isuc n g
cno cim ay a t m ba f t in
a a in n io
aitnr acpcyIm t ehut !!!! S t e ht
t s omlaait a slxas d o a wa
. il e k
Ia wh y im ise cpcy m d n f le t
s it m d inhd aaitin in ade f e o
y er
a f ay lifa n.”
s o n cr t s
k r a ic io
S dn C t S dn B ppr
t et ’so t et ’s ae
u u :
“Y u ppr d in sm vrspis a d nlis
or ae is o g o e e o ht t aas,
y ic e y
ad a hlm p ne m o n prahA wh h
n my e e odr y w apoc. s it t
p e
ohr Ie de sm eitg ugs n, bthye
t s'v add o e din sget s u t 'r
e, io e
t sro t g o'd ae agt n or w in h
h ot fh yu hv cuh o yu o n t
e in e
ed
n.”
14. “T is a jt e es t e h wh hg g in fa”
h myu b m, o a t it a ue r o st
s k is a l
“…t myut e df et rin s lt t a ntcutmd omsls Iolb vr
h a j b a ifr w g te h Im o acs e t y f o cu e e
is s e n it y a o e, d y
o bs”
fa
f e
“MnI qetn g y le ad igt e ”
a, ’m us in msf f n rh hr
io e lt e
“I ao cn atn s in f mlae sr t cm t ce is o in ot “Sr I
’d vid ot c ue ao appr or h o p e hr cm g u or ’m
r io r - y e a ,” y
a in s mn qetn,” ad h m h jt e e
s g o ay us s n “…t igt sb m…”
k io is u
“Y u e o a in r tg t t oe d o e din sgetn, wic my e oe eete
o'v gtn t e in s r Ifr sm eitg ugs s h h a b m r r l iv
es a. fe io fc
o m s l wic I tlis l tn o - co loyu a t e o l v it
f y te h h'm o e isad ls os o cn a it r ae ”
y, d it d h k e
15. W e P l ns
hn o ees
it
Eee
mr s
g
R grin sein o ca n
ea g pl g ritios
d l t
e os ocp t tr
r r cnet h a
r , s a e
idn ie a “cr c o
et d s or t r
if e”
“inor t s dn d nt
cr c t et id o
e ,” u s
qayhirriqe.
ul t c us
if e it
T e eie e t d t qay
h r wre so ul
v n if
cm eto a uj te
o mn n sb c
s e iv
cnet uh ste r
ocp sc a s lo
, y
ido g, po c g o e
el y rj t sm
o e in
dfiec ot hr lwr g
e ny n e e, ok
ic o sf in
t peet a ae ot
o r n dmg t h
v e
pr ipn ’ r p r
a ic at a ot
t s p .
16. “I M, nto” P s rg
t e o yu ot in:
’s u
V l r lw e , C u u R v wr
u e b r r at s eie e
n a e it s io s
• A pr t c o sl ofec is o pr ivd s u et b t s dn .
pa n lk fe cn ne nt e e e a at n yh t et
e a f id c h ic eu s
• S dn p s r a usr yt ae h cm et y , inictghthy oblv it a
t et ot e s nue e l v t o mn rin d a t t d e e hs
u s u , e e a in a e ie
vl ; t w e l ld e nt is ist r ie e cm et y s e gh cu u r b g
a e h r r e os o d m sh e wr o mn ra bin t at sa l s
u e it ik y e v ’s a e io m in
o a ineue d ida
fn scr iniv ul.
• P s r is n x nio o t oig ap s a u e in h pe trcm et in h h h
ot e a et s n fh rinloe s md t r a y o mn , wic t
u e e s e fo s e
s dn a vl r lw e .
t et r u e b r r
u s e n a e it s
• A cu u r ie e , t s dn ao apa g vr cn et eg ghirricm sc
s at se wr h t et vid per oey of n hdin t c is in uh
io v s eu s in l id , e it
a a t t t ohrt et is r d ro k fnet in re oacnetn olnt
wyh if e t s dn d a e o to oes, h t pr nlonc wu o
a h e u ge f e e s io d
b dmgd
e a ae.
• Solw e sold ar wh h r ie e sgetn, t r ie e ao sh
hu r rhu is e it t e wr ugs s h e wrvid t
d it d ge e v ’s io e v e
e br s et fperg vry s r e b u t d pt sgetn
ma a mn o apa oe la e iv aoth isu d ugs .
rs in t st e e io
17. Fr e
ut r
h
Qus n
et s
io
H w a t sa d t t y mr d
o hsh hr sa g e e e?
is e r e g
W e d s dn l r it
hr o t et e n ?
e u sa
Iit os lt te- er a n a
s p s e h sl pe t is
ib a f d c io
gne d o eest t y
edr p l nssa g?
e it re
It sa g sa d c sclr ?
sh t t y hr ar s uue
is r e e o t s
W u it a ae h ra nh
ol dmg t e t sip
d e lio
bten a ic atf m ifr t
e e pr ipn r df e
w t so en
clr , epcl if n pr ipn
uue seia oe a ic at
t s l
y t
to t cu u p s r af e
o kh at s ot e t c
e io u a
vl ?
ae
u
18. S nicne
igifac
A int c r b ako l g g uh es n ad h wy
s sut s y cnw din sc t ios n t as
r o, e n e
s dn nva t mw myt e olsn h p t tl
t et aigt h , e a siv t e e t oe ia
u s e e r s e n
t et r tg n cdm evomn t t nb s oe
h a c a a aae ic nirn eth eal m r
r , e in a e
eete ereie s ml lcn x adee.
fc pe r w in uip ot t n l l
f iv v te e s vs
19. Pe R v w
er eie :
S dn ’ Pe y ae
t et r tFcs
u s t
S dn ’ Pe y ae
t et r tFcs
u s t