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    • HeadlinesJMC 300
    • Goals Attract reader‟s attention Summarizes story Helps predict the subject of an article Helps reader index the contents of a page
    • Goals Depicts story‟s mood Helps predict main idea or viewpoint Helps set tone of newspaper Provide adequate typographic relief
    • Tips Get key words in early Make sure it is accurate Don‟t editorialize or overstate Don‟t repeat the lead or ending of story
    • Tips Be conversational and clear Use active voice Question headlines seldom work
    • Headlines that sell Alliteration Rhymes Balance and contrast
    • Headlines that sell Graphic devices Puns Twist on familiar
    • Subject-verb (completion) U.S. bombs Benghazi Youth talk about alcohol Homewood, churcheshand out aid to poor
    • Noun phrase – without a verb Godzilla! Obama on the Middle East The stars of „DWTS‟
    • Headlines are often elliptical Some words are left out: the or a(n) [The]Stillness of [the]night shattered by gunfire The verb to be [is/are] are left out  Amy Bishop [is] found guilty of murder
    • Grammar Headlines often follow different grammatical rules  Not always complete sentences  More earthquake deaths  Headlines often contain strings of nouns  iPhonefactory riot  Articles and the verb to be are often left out  Samford football rising, says coach
    • Grammar  Special tense-system  Unusual to find complex forms like is coming or has produced  Generally the simple present (comes, produces) is used  Radio stations sends food to tsunami victims  Students fight for curriculum updates  Rich babies eat less, says researcher
    • Grammar  Sometimes present progressive tense is used, but auxiliary verb is usually left out.  Global bacon shortage „unavoidable‟ next year  US getting warmer, say researchers
    • Grammar To refer to the future, headlines often use the infinitive  Vice president to visit Austal  President to announce foreign policy Tuesday Passive sentences use no auxiliary verb, just the past participle  Updyke arrested on terrorizing charge  Teen hurt in fall
    • Grammar Quotation marks used to show comment  Not necessarily that they are true Question marks are used when something is not certain  Recession over by spring?
    • Comma And: Income, spending up sharply Separating a list or phrases  iPhone‟s larger, thinner design  19 months after graduation, finally a job
    • Colon A colon is used to separate main point and comment  VT shooting: Death toll rises Explain  Washington prediction: growth evaporates, almost recession Name, not direct quote  Senator: Give me polygraph
    • Magazine headlines Using interesting adjectives  Effortless  Painstaking  Fun  Free  Absolute
    • Magazine headlines Unique rationale  Reasons  Principles  Facts  Ideas  Secrets  Tricks
    • Magazine headlines How and Why  Trigger words to enable or persuade Numbers  Five new foods that will burn fat  10 ways to lower your golf score  The five things great parents know about their kids Make a promise  Promise your reader something  Deliver on it
    • Magazine tips Read the article, list main words and phrases Be friends with your thesaurus Avoid clichés and the hackneyed turn of phrase Study other publications Practice writing for already published stories
    • Magazine headlines Say it simply and directly State the big benefit Bark a command Offer useful information
    • Magazine headlines Simple formula Number or trigger word + Adjective +Keyword + Promise “Bathing elephants”  You could write an article entitled, “How to Bath an Elephant” or “Why I Love Bathing Elephants.”  “18 Unbelievable Ways You Can Bathe an Elephant Indoors” “Selling your house in a day”  “How You Can Effortlessly Sell Your Home in Less than 24 Hours”
    • Magazine headlines Catchy Curiosity Controversy Specifics Be useful  The best headline tells the reader what he‟s getting.  The more useful, the better.
    • Online headlines Search Engine Optimization  The process of improving the visibility of a website in a search engine‟s results.  SEO targets different kinds of search, including images, locale, video, news and industry-specific searches.  SEO considers how search engines work, what people search for, the actual search terms used and which search engines the targeted audience prefers.
    • Online headlines Originally: straight from the print version First evolution: search engines – keyword heavy Second evolution: RSS feeds – eye-catching
    • Online headlines Now: eye-catching, clever and includes keywords  Includes some of the same principles used in magazines
    • Online headlines Who are you writing for?
    • Online headlines People
    • Online headlines People Social media
    • Online headlines People Social media Search engines
    • Online headlines SEO primacy  URL  Headline, title of article  First paragraph  Keyword heavy  Inbound links  Links from elsewhere  Social bookmarking/blogging  Keywords in text  Meta keywords
    • Online headlines Google  Content freshness  Diversity of content – different angles  Rich textual content – keywords  Indexes quickly, so beware of mistakes Bing  Quality content  Relevant ingoing/outgoing  Relevant title tags  Don‟t overkill the keywords
    • Online headlines Influence begets influence  Page rank  Links  Link text is associated with your site Title  <title>Most important part of the page</title>
    • Online headlines
    • Online headlines Newspapers/magazines don‟t who is reading what. On the web, we know. The difference: 10-20 times the traffic
    • Online headlines Often isolated with little or no context Appear in many places on the site Pop up on external sites Can‟t depend on text size for impact Must get the point across Change from print, or changed/updated as circumstances warrant
    • Online headlines What draws clicks?  Lists  Quotes  Numbers  Names
    • Online headlines „Kate Middleton playing World of Warcraft on beach‟ won‟t generate a lot of clicks What will my reader respond to? What will they search? Squeeze that into 68 characters (ie What makes people click?)
    • Online headlines Specificity Tell as much of the story as possible More precise than clever or funny Don‟t oversimplify or patronize
    • Online headlines Your top angle  Does it reflect the article? Plan your headline  Which words hold the most importance? Include the top two. Be clever, witty, make sure it stands out Who are you writing for Keywords are king  What will people search for? Be clear and concise
    • Online headlines Don‟t worry about being boring If the story is boring headline magic won‟t help much Great story you can‟t explain in the headline = poor story
    • Online headlines Spend 20 minutes Research Work until you have a killer headline Tell the story to others; note the reaction