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Peer Editing  {
   Peer editing is working with someone your        own age to improve and edit your writing.       3 steps: Compliments...
   Tell the writer what they have done well after        looking at their word choice, sentence fluency        and voice....
   Find some compliments you could give this        writer:       We where all over my aunts house when my        dog Ri...
   Giving the author specific and positive        suggestions on how they can make their        writing better.       Ex...
   What suggestions do you have for this author?       We where all over my aunts house when my        dog Riley was run...
   This is the time where you will help fix any        grammar or conventions that you see need to        be fixed.     ...
   What corrections would you make?       We where all over my aunts house when my        dog Riley was running around l...
Pair up and edit!         Remember to use the online thesaurus to find a          word choice suggestion you want to make...
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  1. 1. Peer Editing {
  2. 2.  Peer editing is working with someone your own age to improve and edit your writing.  3 steps: Compliments, Suggestions, CorrectionsWhat is Peer Editing?
  3. 3.  Tell the writer what they have done well after looking at their word choice, sentence fluency and voice.  Stay positive with the peer editing process.Compliments
  4. 4.  Find some compliments you could give this writer:  We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.Example: Compliments
  5. 5.  Giving the author specific and positive suggestions on how they can make their writing better.  Example: I think if you added some more detail that part could be more clear.  You will all be using the thesaurus to suggest a change in word choice.Suggestions
  6. 6.  What suggestions do you have for this author?  We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.Example: Suggestions
  7. 7.  This is the time where you will help fix any grammar or conventions that you see need to be fixed.  Remember to stay positive. This is a time to help not a time to be negative toward someone’s writing.Corrections
  8. 8.  What corrections would you make?  We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.Example: Corrections
  9. 9. Pair up and edit!  Remember to use the online thesaurus to find a word choice suggestion you want to make, and write that suggestion on a piece of paper to turn in at the end of class.  Write at least 3 compliments and 3 suggestions to share with your partner.
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