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  1. 1. Comparison and Contrast
  2. 2. What is the Purpose? <ul><li>To show the similarities between at least two things </li></ul><ul><li>and/or </li></ul><ul><li>To show the difference between two things </li></ul><ul><li>To inform </li></ul><ul><li>To explain </li></ul><ul><li>To analyze </li></ul><ul><li>To evaluate </li></ul>
  3. 3. Pre-writing <ul><li>Chart </li></ul>Honda Civic BMW Insurance Mileage Price
  4. 4. Venn Diagram Alike
  5. 5. Writing a Thesis Statement <ul><li>Review your data </li></ul><ul><li>Decide to what extent you will stress the similarities between your subjects and to what extent you will stress their differences </li></ul><ul><li>Create a thesis statement that reflects that decision </li></ul>
  6. 6. Weak Thesis Statements <ul><li>They are both somewhat alike and somewhat different. </li></ul><ul><li>I can see some similarities and some differences too. </li></ul><ul><li>Both of them involve (only a single similarity, no differences). </li></ul>
  7. 7. Better Thesis Pattern <ul><li>While both the Federalists and the Anti-Federalists agreed that government was needed to establish order, the Federalists promoted a centralized federal authority and the Anti-federalists supported a loose confederation which favored states’ rights. </li></ul>
  8. 8. Better Thesis Pattern <ul><li>Ralph and Jack have very different leadership styles and motivations which leads to the eventual chaos and anarchy on the island. </li></ul>
  9. 9. Sample Thesis Statement for Honda/BMW Comparison/Contrast <ul><li>In order to make a decision between the Honda Civic and the BMW, I used the following criteria: price of the vehicle, average mileage, and price of insurance. </li></ul>
  10. 10. Paragraph Organization--Block 2 nd Paragraph 3 rd Paragraph Honda Civic ->->-> BMW ->->-> Insurance Mileage Price
  11. 11. Paragraph Organization--BLOCK 7 th Paragraph 6 th Paragraph 5 th Paragraph Honda Civic 4 th Paragraph 3 rd Paragraph 2 nd Paragraph BMW Insurance Mileage Price
  12. 12. Paragraph Organization-- Point by Point 2 nd Paragraph 3rd Paragraph 4 th Paragraph ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ Honda Civic ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ ↓ BMW Insurance Mileage Price
  13. 13. Paragraph Organization—Point by Point 7 th Paragraph 5 th Paragraph 3 rd Paragraph Honda Civic 6 th Paragraph 4 th Paragraph 2 nd Paragraph BMW Insurance Mileage Price ↓
  14. 14. Outline - Block Method <ul><li>I. Introduction </li></ul><ul><li>a) Attention Getter or Hook </li></ul><ul><ul><li>b) Background Information </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>c) Thesis </li></ul></ul><ul><li>II. BMW </li></ul><ul><ul><li>a) Price </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>b) Mileage </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>c) Insurance </li></ul></ul><ul><li>III. Honda Civic </li></ul><ul><li>a) Price </li></ul><ul><li>b) Mileage </li></ul><ul><li>c) Insurance </li></ul><ul><li>IV. Conclusion </li></ul><ul><li>a) Emphasize Major Ties </li></ul><ul><li>b) So What? </li></ul><ul><li>c) Evaluation </li></ul>
  15. 15. Outline - Point by Point <ul><li>I. Introduction </li></ul><ul><ul><li>a) Attention Getter or Hook </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>b) Background Information </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>c) Thesis </li></ul></ul><ul><li>II. Price </li></ul><ul><li>a) BMW </li></ul><ul><li>b) Honda </li></ul><ul><li>III. Mileage </li></ul><ul><li>a) BMW </li></ul><ul><li>b) Honda </li></ul><ul><li>IV. Insurance </li></ul><ul><li>a) BMW </li></ul><ul><li>b) Honda </li></ul><ul><li>IV. Conclusion </li></ul><ul><li>a) Emphasize Major Ties </li></ul><ul><li>b) So What? </li></ul><ul><li>c) Evaluation </li></ul>
  16. 16. Transitions <ul><li>To Compare </li></ul><ul><ul><li>also </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>as </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>in the same way </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>like </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>likewise </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>similarly </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>comparable </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>equally </li></ul></ul><ul><ul><li>in addition </li></ul></ul><ul><li>To Contrast </li></ul><ul><li>- although </li></ul><ul><li>-but </li></ul><ul><li>-even though </li></ul><ul><li>-however </li></ul><ul><li>-on the other hand </li></ul><ul><li>-otherwise </li></ul><ul><li>-yet </li></ul><ul><li>-still </li></ul><ul><li>-conversely </li></ul><ul><li>-as opposed to </li></ul><ul><li>-different from </li></ul><ul><li>-whereas </li></ul>
  17. 17. Review <ul><li>Make sure you understand the purpose of the assignment </li></ul><ul><li>Complete pre-writing activity </li></ul><ul><li>Gather evidence </li></ul><ul><li>Create a thesis statement </li></ul><ul><li>Choose an organizational pattern </li></ul><ul><li>Write an outline </li></ul><ul><li>Write a working draft </li></ul><ul><li>Revise as needed </li></ul>
  18. 18. Additional Resources <ul><li>See East versus West for a sample essay and teacher comments. </li></ul><ul><li>http://www.personal.psu.edu/faculty/k/x/kxk30/des-student/defess.htm </li></ul>

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