The titles on screen match well
with the backing track as well as
the dialogue matching well with
the shots that I created. This was
due to good editing.
What went well...
There is a good use of a shot
reverse shot, this records the
conversation between the two
characters at the beginning of the
trailer remake. This establishes
the conversational relationship
between the pair.
The shots appear to be nicely put
together, with no jumps between
them. Good use of cross dissolve
techniques and slow motion.
Even better if...
The change of shot at 2:07 from
the man in the boat to the tiger in
the boat could have perhaps been
a zoom in- zoom out, or pan this
would not only have helped with
the movement of the camera
which was needed but would
make it appear less jumpy. A
more obvious cross dissolve too
may have been useful.
The shot of the purple starry sky
at 01:37 was not obviously
repeated. Perhaps the music
could have been cut or another
shot created or used even
lengthened using slow motion.
The shot at 01:37 was cut a little
earlier so we do not see the
persons hand pushing along the
boat towards the camera lense.