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Location: outside abandon bar 
Time: 11am 
Setting: Sunny Monday morning 
Storyline 
7 people had gone missing and 1 death at a local abandoned bar which lead 
detective inspector Richard Dawkins to investigate. The deeper he digs into the 
case the less sense it makes until he goes to the abandoned bar. He quickly finds 
out that things are not quite what they would seem. 
Outline for opening scene 
Scene opens into a crime scene Detective Richard Dawkins Boston PD is looking 
at a newspaper. The camera has a close up of his face and we can see he headline 
which shows the death of a 19 year old, died. The 19 year old was called Jeffery 
burns. The detective then looks up and sees the crime seen (POV). The deputy 
comes up and talks to him about the crime scene. The detective takes out his 
notepad and he takes note. The deputy explains that it was a knife crime. 
The crime scene has yellow tape around a chalk outline of where the body was. 
The detective looks at the crime scene and he tells his idea of what happened. He 
goes onto explaining that he thinks then victim did not actually commit suicide 
but she was actually mudded. He looks up at a closed window and says “I think 
that the lad was chucked out of the window. The inspector then takes out his 
notepad and continues on with the idea. The inspector then tells the detective 
about the history of the building. He explains that there have been a series of 
deaths at the bar and he says that the building is haunted. The detective reply’s 
“outa the whole time I have been working as a detective not once have I came 
across a ghost, so quit fooling around and actually get me a piece of rea. 
Evidence, I refuse to believe in such nonsense. The detective walks of into the 
building. The inspector is left to deal with the press which are taking photos of 
the scene. He tells theme there is no story here just tragedy so jars push of will 
yah”. Then the detective’s voice is heard in the background. The inspector turns 
around and looks up at the window. He says “this window was shut, meaning 
someone would have had to have been here before the or after the victim, this 
means that the killer must have been here to close the windows after he had 
chucked her out of the window”. The inspector replies “very good sir” the 
detective then closes the window and he looks arpund for clues in the room. The 
camera then turns to and in the door frame you can see the outline of a figure. 
The door starts to squeak and the detective turns around. He catches a glimpse 
of the figure.

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Pitch for film opening

  • 1. Pitch for film opening Location: outside abandon bar Time: 11am Setting: Sunny Monday morning Storyline 7 people had gone missing and 1 death at a local abandoned bar which lead detective inspector Richard Dawkins to investigate. The deeper he digs into the case the less sense it makes until he goes to the abandoned bar. He quickly finds out that things are not quite what they would seem. Outline for opening scene Scene opens into a crime scene Detective Richard Dawkins Boston PD is looking at a newspaper. The camera has a close up of his face and we can see he headline which shows the death of a 19 year old, died. The 19 year old was called Jeffery burns. The detective then looks up and sees the crime seen (POV). The deputy comes up and talks to him about the crime scene. The detective takes out his notepad and he takes note. The deputy explains that it was a knife crime. The crime scene has yellow tape around a chalk outline of where the body was. The detective looks at the crime scene and he tells his idea of what happened. He goes onto explaining that he thinks then victim did not actually commit suicide but she was actually mudded. He looks up at a closed window and says “I think that the lad was chucked out of the window. The inspector then takes out his notepad and continues on with the idea. The inspector then tells the detective about the history of the building. He explains that there have been a series of deaths at the bar and he says that the building is haunted. The detective reply’s “outa the whole time I have been working as a detective not once have I came across a ghost, so quit fooling around and actually get me a piece of rea. Evidence, I refuse to believe in such nonsense. The detective walks of into the building. The inspector is left to deal with the press which are taking photos of the scene. He tells theme there is no story here just tragedy so jars push of will yah”. Then the detective’s voice is heard in the background. The inspector turns around and looks up at the window. He says “this window was shut, meaning someone would have had to have been here before the or after the victim, this means that the killer must have been here to close the windows after he had chucked her out of the window”. The inspector replies “very good sir” the detective then closes the window and he looks arpund for clues in the room. The camera then turns to and in the door frame you can see the outline of a figure. The door starts to squeak and the detective turns around. He catches a glimpse of the figure.