A Writer's Algorithm: Papers without (too much) Pain

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A Writer's Algorithm: Papers without (too much) Pain

  1. 1. A Writer s Algorithm or Papers Without (too much) Pain and the sequelae that are Reviews… October 7, 2011 Amy J. Markowitz, JD Consulting Editor/Scientific Writing SpecialistUCSF Clinical and Translational Research Career Development Program Managing Editor, Care of the Aging Patient JAMA amyjmarkowitz@alum.wellesley.edu 415-307-0391
  2. 2. Markowitz Bio http://ksc-ctsi.ucsf.edu/profile/amyAmy J. Markowitz, JD, is the Consulting Consulting Editor/ScientificWriting faculty for the UCSF Clinical and Translational Research CareerDevelopment (K) Program. She teaches the Publishing and PresentingResearch (EPI 212) course as part of the TICR curriculum.She is the Managing Editor of JAMA’s case-based geriatric series, Careof the Aging Patient: From Evidence to Action.She is a freelance editor, writing mentor, and curriculum developmentconsultant, with particular expertise in medicine and health policy.She is an editor-for-hire on book, grant, Web site content, curriculum, andmanuscript projects, and provides on-site writing instruction.
  3. 3. Todays agenda•  A framework for presenting research and managing reviews timely•  The Writer s Algorithm –  The basics of good writing habits (and suggestions for teaching them to others) –  The sections of a paper –  The basics of effective self-editing
  4. 4. Today s style•  Please interrupt frequently•  Share with others - research and writing are not solitary pursuits - at least not mostly
  5. 5. Most research involves a simple finding A>B Weight of experimental mice > Weight of control miceBone density with TT genotype > Bone density with tt genotype Survival after surgery > Survival with medical therapy Health care in UK > Health care in US
  6. 6. Who cares?•  Who is your audience?•  Which journals are “reach” schools?•  Where have you published before? - Have you served as a reviewer?
  7. 7. Title•  Based on the research question•  Try to make it interesting (catchy), declarative, maybe even provocative•  Remember the magic words –  Randomized, blinded, prospective, etc.
  8. 8. The 4 basic parts of an abstract, paper, or presentation•  Introduction: Why would it matter if you could show that A > B?•  Methods: How you will show that A > B. –  (Effect size: Comparing A with B)•  Results: Show that A > B.•  Discussion: What is the implication, now that we know that A >B?
  9. 9. Begin Before the Beginning•  Scribble or type a list of topics, themes, ideas, conclusions, in any order•  Work for about 15 minutes and then reward yourself with a latte, and a quick peek at the TIVO d Daily Show
  10. 10. Create a Scaffold•  Using the Instructions for Authors contained on the Web site of every journal, set up the major headings/sections of the paper•  You are now not looking at a blank screen and can treat yourself to a snack and a latte
  11. 11. Put on the Sorting Hat•  Insert fragments from the scribbled list into the scaffolding sections, eg, background? result? discussion?•  Pen a meaningful topic sentence for the fragments. Note: meaningful means an original idea that sets up the issue to be discussed in that section or paragraph•  Continue to fill in the space under the topic sentences by moving entries around, and by adding entries from the scribbled list•  Open Endnote or other reference library and look around
  12. 12. Put on the Sorting Hat (continued)•  Note ideas for tables, boxes, figures•  Re-check rules for authors as to formatting requirements•  Note areas that require further thought or discussion•  Go for a run or a bike ride
  13. 13. Write an Introduction•  Do not reinvent the wheel - go back to the grant, proposal, RFP•  Content: The introduction is your promise to the reader•  Use a writing resource, style manual, dictionary, grammar guideAmerican Medical Association Style Manual www.amamanualofstyle.com/Merriam Webster online dictionary http://www.merriam-webster.com/Stedman s Medical Spellchecker and dictionaries www.stedmans.com/Nuts and Bolts of Scientific Writing- Constance Baldwin, PhD http://www.academicpeds.org/ espauthoring/page_01.htm
  14. 14. Content of Introduction•  The introduction is your promise to the reader (in 3 paragraphs or less - PRESENT TENSE FOR ESTABLISHED KNOWLEDGE)•  Describe: –  Background, the raison d etre of the study (why the problem was compelling) –  State of the field (relevant literature to date) –  The reason your findings will be relevant, and (if you re feeling brave) the contribution you have made•  Close with a road map of what the reviewer/ reader will find in the paper: –  Hypothesis, Design, Sample, Methods
  15. 15. Introduction: The Final Test•  After reading it, could someone not familiar with the field understand… –  Why you did the study –  How it advances the current state of the evidence
  16. 16. Dictionary of Useful Research Phrases•  "It has long been known..." <-> I didnt look up the original reference.•  "A definite trend is evident..." <-> These data are practically meaningless.•  "Of great theoretical and practical importance..." <-> Interesting to me. http://writedit.wordpress.com/category/biomedical-writingediting/
  17. 17. Finishing the Introduction•  Read your introduction aloud to yourself to see if it rings true and sounds sensible•  Click SAVE and pack up your computer for the night
  18. 18. Write the Easy Parts First•  Good bets for knocking off sections are the Methodology and Results sections•  Methods: Carefully track the research protocol, and if you repeat or reproduce a part of the protocol as stated in your original proposal, do not paraphrase or change verbiage (PAST TENSE FOR WHAT YOU DID)
  19. 19. Methods: How will you show that A > B?•  Who (what) did you study?•  What, if anything, did you do to them?•  How did you make your measurements?•  How did you compare A with B?•  Statistical tests to show that A ≠ B
  20. 20. Methods Checklist: The 4 Parts•  Design: Define the type, e.g., retrospective, case- control, RCT, prospective•  Subjects: population, inclusion/exclusion criteria, controls•  Measurements: survey instruments, assays, physical measurements•  Analysis: Statistical plan and rationale
  21. 21. Measurements: A Way to Organize•  Predictors before outcomes•  Medical presentation –  History, physical, simple lab, complex matters•  Explain odd decisions or missing data•  Appropriate level of detail - know your audience
  22. 22. Analysis•  Don t list tests: explain why you used them•  Tell how measurements became variables•  How did you estimate the effect size?•  How did you determine the precision and significance of the effect size? –  Univariate –  Multivariate (say what you adjusted for)
  23. 23. Results: Showing that A > B•  Make sure the main result is obvious –  Don t bury it in the middle of a long paragraph, an 8 x 6 table, or a complex figure•  Use alternative definitions of A and B –  Different measurement techniques or times –  Multivariate adjustment –  In various subgroups
  24. 24. Results, continuedOrder of presentation: –  Collected sample first –  Follow order of hypothesis, chronology or design elements •  Simple results before complex •  Strongest findings first •  Use subsection headings as a roadmap
  25. 25. Results/Discussion (Pull out the scribbled list again)Framing the Content (GENERALLY, PAST TENSE FOR WHAT YOU FOUND)•  What grabbed you about your results?•  Was there an expected or unexpected finding? If you are presenting something new, build the case in a logical order – eg, is this study the result of a long line of similar research that is confirmatory, but ?•  Is it presenting a new theory to explain an old phenomenon? Is it rebutting a long-held belief in the field?•  Does it have implications for research policy or social policy?•  Will it be a useful tear-out with pragmatic clinical utility?
  26. 26. Discussion•  Actually speak to the reader (PRESENT TENSE)•  Argue your case with the facts that you ve set forth formulaically in the Results sections•  Use I.A.C. (Idea - Analysis - Conclusion)•  Check each paragraph against the next: be certain that you are connecting the dots for the readers, not bludgeoning them
  27. 27. Discussion Content•  Highlight key findings as they relate to the study s purpose (was your hypothesis proved?)•  Evaluate findings in relation to literature•  Discuss limitations•  Conclude with recommendations
  28. 28. Styling Your Discussion Using the topic sentences you ve already drafted, write stand-alone paragraphs following the I.A.C. rubric:•  Idea (the topic sentence)•  Analysis (the clinical, microbiologic, biochemical, social, economic, explanation of the result)•  Concluding sentence which sums up the analysis, and often will serve as a transition to the next paragraph
  29. 29. Styling Your Discussion (continued)•  If you find that you are stuck, and cannot create an I.A.C. paragraph for a particular result, go back to the topic sentence, and make sure that it is worthy of a whole finding/result•  Consider whether you have enough (interesting) results to merit another paper (after this one is completed)
  30. 30. Avoid Throwaway Observations The Sarah Arron Rule:Do Not Give Reviewers the Opportunity to Review the Paper You Didn’t Write
  31. 31. Anticipate Possible Criticism•  Careful, not defensive, explanation•  Anticipate critique of your methodology or study design and present the reasoning behind your choices•  Your design and study criteria were well thought out in the beginning – now is not the time to have a crisis of confidence
  32. 32. Conclude With a Send-off•  A conclusion is not a repetition•  Take the bully pulpit•  Set a research agenda; get others interested in your field•  Create some controversy that is well- founded on the basis of your findings
  33. 33. Some Practical Advice•  Return to the Instructions for Authors –  re-check style formatting requirements, word limit, format of references, number of references, graphics format, the works•  Print hard copy of the manuscript, and proof it for substance by reading it aloud once, making hard copy corrections (you will be amazed at what you will find to self-edit)•  Then, and only then, run spell check•  Wait a day, re-read, and with a sigh of relief, hit the send key to your co-authors, or friendly readers
  34. 34. Credit Where It I$ Due"This project was supported by Grant Number KL2 RR024130 from the National Center for Research Resources (NCRR).
  35. 35. Responding to Reviews*, Internal and External*Formerly known as Anger Management
  36. 36. Reviews, internal and external•  Read through the reviews twice•  You will be offended by everything the first time, and begin to appreciate some of the merits by the second time•  Consult with your co-authors
  37. 37. Take a step-wise approach•  Begin the explanatory Response to Editor letter simultaneously with your revisions•  The tone should be respectful but not obsequious•  Address each comment, in numeric order, citing to the page and line where you ve made the revisions - as relevant, add the actual text to the letter once it is finalized in the manuscript•  Where logical, group comments so that they are more easily addressed, eg, comments from each of three reviewers that address the same issue in methods, results, or discussion
  38. 38. What if the reviewer has completely missed the point?Consider whether:•  You have presented the idea abstrusely; try rewriting unless this undermines the integrity of the idea•  The reviewer (generally an expert in the field, wed to their point of view) a) has a vested interest in your being incorrect, b) has just been proven wrong by your results, or c) did not read the paper carefully
  39. 39. Re-consult•  Check your intra-reviewer-rater reliability•  What if MOM and DAD disagree????•  Get your gumption up, be thoughtful, and make a decision - you must resubmit - now s the time…
  40. 40. Greg s Reviewer s MisreadSome aspects of the results presentation could be clearer. Some of the presentation of resultssuch as those in figure 3 does not make it clear how many patients were seen at each follow-upvisit.We have attempted to make the results more clear, with a special emphasis on the number ofsubjects with follow-up. As suggested, we have changed figure 3 so that the numbers of patientsat each follow-up visit are clearer and have included those numbers in the figure itself.
  41. 41. Original Figure 3 and Legend
  42. 42. Abundance of Caution
  43. 43. Response and Lessons LearnedDealing with easy fixes, eg, ad the n=
  44. 44. Ralph s ReviewsReviewer #4:First of all let me acknowledge that I appreciate the complexity ofevaluating any mass media campaign, particularly one that is very shortterm with limited funding.This is an interesting and complex paper as currently constructed. Ifound many parts difficult to follow and lacking in methodologicaldetails necessary to properly interpret the results. Having said that,I think, with much revision, some parts merit publication (if not byMedical Care, perhaps elsewhere). I am trying to make my commentsconstructive.I absolutely disagree that this campaign is an example of a wide-scaleMM campaign to affect office visit and antibiotic use... In summary, I think there is too much in this one paper. … The MM campaign does not fly with me at all.
  45. 45. Ralph s ResponseThe easy fix:
  46. 46. I absolutely disagree that this campaign is an example of a wide-scale MM campaign to affect office visit and antibiotic use... Insummary, I think there is too much in this one paper. … The MMcampaign does not fly with at all with me.•  Please see response to Reviewer #4, Comment #7 regarding media exposure/impressions.•  Both the preceding office and household educational intervention (Gonzales R et al. Health Services Research 2005;40:101-16) and the mass media campaigns were based on the logic that reducing office visits was one possible (and perhaps, most effective) means for reducing inappropriate antibiotic use; the other key means was increasing appropriate prescribing behavior by providers. The small media materials for households and patients incorporated information that was designed to assist families to make appropriate decisions about whether medical care was warranted for symptoms of colds or bronchitis, to challenge assumptions that antibiotics are required for colds or bronchitis, and to put the issue of antibiotic use for ARIs on the agenda for discussion with a provider. The mass media messages contained less detail than the household and clinic materials for patients, but were also designed to provoke questioning about the need for antibiotics for various respiratory symptoms and illnesses. We recognized that if a healthcare decision-maker in the family (e.g., the mother) no longer believed that antibiotics would help colds and coughs, she might be less likely to seek care. This is based on the multitude of studies that have found that desire and perceived need for antibiotics—for symptom relief—is a major reason that patients seek care for these illnesses. In social marketing terms, in this project a critical difference between doers and non-doers was the idea that antibiotics were necessary for treatment of ARIs (see W Smith references below; also, William Smith was the chief AED consultant on the Get Smart Campaign).•  Smith, W. (1998). Social marketing: Whats the big idea? Social Marketing Quarterly, Vol. IV, Number 2, 5-17.•  AED. Social Marketing Lite: Ideas for Folks with Small Budgets and Big Problems. http://www.aed.org/ToolsandPublications/upload/Social%20Marketing%20Lite.pdf or at http://www.eric.ed.gov/ERICDocs/data/ericdocs2sql/content_storage_01/0000019b/80/17/30/ea.pdf
  47. 47. Response and Lessons LearnedDear Dr. Gonzales,I am pleased to inform you …***************************************************************How many papers have we got here?
  48. 48. What if the reviewer has completely missed the point?•  Tough. You must explain to the journal editors why it is that you have chosen not to revise in accordance with the reviewer s comment, and be prepared to support your point of view.
  49. 49. Response and Lessons Learned•  Submit elsewhere?•  Change the focus?•  Consult with a non-co-author colleague?
  50. 50. Shave and a Haircut•  Address stylistic editorial comments after the substantive revisions•  Stylistic issues frequently relate to length•  Reduce to tabular or graphic form any appropriate demographic descriptions of study subjects, or less intrinsic data and descriptors•  Do not repeat in text what is best presented in a table or figure•  Give your co-authors one last shot, WITH A DEADLINE, then: pull the trigger

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