Walt: write a description about the bird.
Im ﬂying above the water
With a big smile on my face
Grabbing ﬁsh with my claws.
My feathers are falling off
Why I ﬂy threw the sky.
I look down I see a ﬁsh
I swoop down and get it
I pick it up with my claws
I take it home to my family.
While Im ﬂying home I see a shark in the corner of my
It takes a bite at me but he misses so I ﬂy away
unharmed to my house,
when I get there I see new baby birds that look just like
Scotty, your writing improves in leaps and bounds, well done. Iʼm very pleased :)
Next Steps: Iʼd like you to think about words that describe the bird, eg. strong claws,
treacherous talons, beady eyes etc