"The Four-Story Mistake" is the second book in the Melendy quartet, and it's my favorite of the four. In a complete change of scene, Elizabeth Enright moves the Melendys out of their New York City brownstone and transports them to a marvelous old house in the country that has so much character, it seems like a personality in its own right.
Picking up from the early autumn after the summer that ends "The Saturdays", when the story opens, the three oldest Melendy children are desolated because their father has bought a house in the country without so much as a hint to any of them. After a rainy, boring train ride to the country, they take a taxi from the station to their new home, and what they find wins them over almost immediately. Enright describes a house any child would love to live in, big and white and square with a mansard roof, fireplaces and window seats, deep dormer windows and a cupola on top, a little square glass tower with four floor-to-ceiling windows, one facing in each direction. The house is called the Four-Story Mistake because the builder inadvertently left off a story while constructing it, and stuck the cupola up on top to compensate.
Once they're settled in their new home, adventures abound: Rush discovers they have a brook with a waterfall running through their property. Mrs. Oliphant, their devoted family friend, donates her ancient automobile called "the Motor" for transportation to school, and surprises them with four bicycles in the back seat. Randy manages to ride her new bike into the back of a bus, is taken to the traffic cop's home to recuperate, and finds the policeman and his wife have a pet alligator in their bathtub. Rush builds a treehouse and gets trapped in it in the middle of a howling thunderstorm. The children discover a secret room nailed up on the top floor of their home, furnished only with a life-size portrait of a mysterious young girl named Clarinda. They give a Christmas show for their friends and neighbors, to which Mrs. Oliphant brings five guests, one of them a radio producer; he's so impressed with Mona's acting talent that she's offered a part in a radio serial. Randy improbably discovers a diamond stuck to a caddis house in the brook. And Mona attends her first dance at school. Who wouldn't want to be part of this family?
The children are engaging characters, totally alive and doing every waking minute. When they're not physically active, they're reading, studying, drawing, painting, writing poems and plays, playing the piano, composing music and just thinking. Like all children, they get into trouble from time to time, but they care deeply for each other and their caretakers. In a preface to her book, Enright says somewhat wistfully that the Melendys are the family she would have like to have had. Perhaps that's what makes them seem so completely believable. We almost wish they were ours as well.
Enright is a born storyteller; her writing style is refreshingly free of preaching and moralizing. She respects her readers and never talks down to them. She tells her story mostly through Randy's eyes, but all of the children get equal play in the book. The adults in the family, Father, Cuffy and the handyman Willie Sloper, are benevolent authority figures who encourage the children to learn and explore, while imposing reasonable limits when necessary. Enright was a talented illustrator, and her pen-and-ink drawings, usually one full page drawing for most chapters, bring out each child's characteristics. We see Mona dressing up for her part in the show, Rush climbing down a tree, Randy in the cupola, her favorite room in the house, and placid Oliver, lost in a pile of old books he's just discovered in the cellar.
"The Four-Story Mistake" is highly recommended for youngsters between 9 and 12, as much for its fun and adventures as for its simple and timeless values of close-knit family life.
Judy Lind
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