Narissa Kunkudatharn 10D Standard Essay Outline Format I. Quotation: “All civilization has from time to time become a thin crust over a volcano of revolution.” Havelock Ellis A. Explain Industrial Revolution Briefly:When, where it started. New inventions, techniques. Brought change in social and economic policies B. Explain Digital Revolution Briefly: Major shift in ways human communicate. Deep shift of information. Adaptation. C. Conclude with thesis statement:Therefore, both revolutions have increased human productivity and capability through technological advancements that improved economic systems. (need to add a little more to it) II. Topic sentence about positive impact of Industrial Revolution:propelled by new ideas and inventions. Dramatic change that existed in economic and social systems . A. era of mechanization B. economies of scale where goods were being sold at more reasonable prices C. transportation was revolutionized by the invention of the steam engine D. increased economic activity improved standards of living E. Conclusion:social structure created a strong trading class in Britain and rest of the world or the industrial revolution introduced the concept of globalization to the world III. Topic sentence about Negative impact of Industrial Revolution: placed more emphasis on improving economic system at the expense of social conditions A. social classes became more apparent B. enclosure movement people moved to cities C. children were sent to factories to work instead of school D. exploitation and rapid urbanization E. Conclusion: Industrial revolution has caused divisions in society based on economic situations IV. Topic sentence about positive impact of Digital Revolution: profound changes in information and interconnectedness A. digital age brought rapid digitization B. digital devices such as computers, digital phones…….
Narissa Kunkudatharn 10D C. The use of communication and the productivity and efficiency—communication can be processed at revolutionary speeds D. Increase of innovation and lower technology cost E. Conclusion:New concepts such as social media and networking, playing roles in the society V. Topic Sentence about negative impact of Digital Revolution:revolution has impacted many aspects of society A. rapid information overload B. media saturation C. accelerated by the transition of mainstream media D. rise of new dangers such as privacy invasion E. Conclusion:The rise of objectionable content on the internet and social media, danger that threaten the safety and evolution of humanity VI. Conclusion/Restatement of Thesis: main purpose of any revolution is to bring about radical change A. write about how the digital revolution could not happen if the industrial revolution happened B. write about the digital revolution and how it is still going on C. brought about an influx of new ideas and innovations D. Empowered man to act and think bigger E. natural evolution of changes and advancements in human thought F. brought about major changes in the physical world around G. Powerful Concluding sentence: mechanization and machinery the digital revolution has help to weave speed