This is my first Photoshop draft of my contents page. I don't like the way you cant read the copy over the background. I am going to try out using boxes, changing the colour/font of my copy and blur the background, I am also experimenting with layout.
In this I have blurred the background and changed the layout I like this one better. However I have decided to change the font entirely to black, Times New Roman. I like the boxes but will probably change the colours of them.
I like this draft much better however when asking my audience for feedback there was comments about the page numbering, which although new and edgy, is more difficult to read and find things so I will be changing it.
In this draft I added a strip along the bottom revealing several more things not mentioned in the above copy and moved the page number, for the article to the top of the image I also made enough room for an insert below the contents copp
I inserted the copy for the competition insert. I did a survey to determine that my demographic was correct. 10% of the group of only males said they would buy the magazine whereas 90% of the only female group.
I changed the font to “ cooper ” in this draft because I wanted to make the font clearer and more feminine, I resized lots of the copy but I don ’ t think it works as well as I thought. I photo shopped the cover image so the band members hair was pink adding a feminine edge.